Du Yi put Mo Ziwan's poem manuscript in the middle and gave it to Liang Shouxing. He just didn't want Feng Shengrong to see it.
If you want to see someone embarrassed, don't be anxious, be patient, because only in this way can you see the biggest joke!
Liang Shouxing got the poem manuscript and started flipping it. After flipping through two pages, he saw Mo Ziwan's name. When he saw it, he couldn't help but smile on his face. He also praised Du Yi fiercely in his heart and praised him. Will do things. I completely forgot that I just thought that if I didn't see Mo Ziwan's poem manuscript this time, I would find an opportunity to call Du Yi out and teach him a lesson. I even thought that if I was so indifferent, my salary this month would be too much. Don't ask for more. Z.br>
When Zhu Xuan looked at the movements of the person next to him, he couldn't help but turn his head. He roughly knew it when he saw him pause, and when he saw his name, a smile appeared on his face.
There are only a few dozen words in a poem, and what Mo Ziwan wrote was a five-character poem. It was just 20 words long. Liang Shouxing could read it in one glance, and then read it again and again, but these 20 words put together gave him a shock. But it was bigger than the first time.
Although I was surprised and shocked the first time, I was mentally prepared this time, but no matter how well prepared it is, it is of no use. No matter who reads such a poem, it will be frightening, not to mention it was written by a child!
Both poems were completed in a very short period of time. Although the time was short, what was written was shocking enough!
Although Zhu Xuan tilted his head to read, because Liang Shouxing did not open all the pages, only one corner was opened. From Liang Shouxing's angle, he could see the whole thing at once, but from Zhu Xuan's angle, he could only see what was written in the side corner. The name on the page and the poem in the middle are not fully visible because Liang Shouxing's arm blocks it. Anyone who wants to read it in a hurry should not look too sideways or bring the poem manuscript over. It would be rude to do so.
In my heart, Liang Shouxing thought of Du Yi. If this old boy is ignorant, don't blame me for coming down to make trouble for him.
Fortunately, Liang Shouxing was very sensible. After reading it, he excitedly moved Mo Ziwan's poem to the top, and then considerately moved the poem to Zhu Xuan's position, so that it happened to be right there. Between the two of them.
It was normal for the judges to discuss poetry, and the two of them enjoyed Mo Ziwan's poems openly and openly.
After Zhu Xuan watched "Jiang Xue" that Liang Shouxing moved over, he was even more excited than the first time. After reading Jiang Xue turned to look in front of him. The better-written poems selected in the first round were placed in front of him, and the top one was also Mo Ziwan's poem manuscript. Read the two poems together and look at them together. Compare.
Although the theme of the first poem is "wind", her poem is not just about wind, but "wind and snow", a night full of cold, desolate and lonely wind and snow.
The second poem is about "snow", and it's not just about "snow". In the cold winter when there are thousands of mountains, no people and birds, and snow all over the sky, you are alone fishing in the cold river. What kind of loneliness is this? What kind of strength is supporting him to endure this loneliness?
Both poems are full of desolation and loneliness, and both use the sky full of wind and snow to set off the loneliness of the people in the poems. Such lonely poems were actually written by a four-year-old baby!
In addition to being excited, she looked at Mo Ziyuan with a lot more inquiry and contemplation in her eyes.
Composing poetry is not difficult. After a few years, any student at the academy can produce a few poems. But it is not easy to make good poems. For someone like her to write such a good poem at the age of only four, it has never been seen before in the history!
Turning to look at the old man next to him, Liang Shouxing was almost the same as him. The wrinkles on his face were already deeper, and it was obvious that he couldn't figure it out just like himself!
Not only could they not figure it out, but they also thought about it for a while. I had been living in poverty for ten years and had a good teacher to teach me. However, compared with these two poems, the poems I produced were much different in terms of artistic conception and emotion.
After comparing it with myself, I became more curious about how she came up with these two poems.
When Chen Xiangwan came, the competition was already in its third round. The first two rounds were based on "wind" and "snow". Among the poems, the students were best at "wind" and "flower". The poems with the themes of "Snow" and "Moon" have been the best for everyone for two rounds now. After two rounds of simple questions, everyone's nervousness after entering the competition venue for the first time has been relieved.
Next, Du Yi was not on the concession stand either.
The judges came up with the topic according to the previously set topic, and said the theme of the third round, which was "Ambition and Ambition".
Mo Ziwan looked at the stage and found it difficult just by hearing this question!
But I immediately felt relieved. In the academy, we only teach poems about "romance, snow, moon, and romance." We don't talk about what's wrong with poems about "romance, snow, moon, and romance." These are for people to cultivate their sentiments in good times, some elegant fun! It cannot be used as the main subject. The main study is still the teachings of Confucius and Mencius and the strategies of governing the country, among which determination and ambition are indispensable.
Although they may find it difficult, these are what they have learned on a daily basis, so they are not necessarily difficult!
I definitely couldn’t write it, but I couldn’t do it if I didn’t, so I began to filter poems about ambitions in my mind.
Why compare poetry? If there is an essay competition, I will definitely win the grand prize easily, and I promise not to cheat!
There are too many poems about aspirations in Tang poetry and Song poetry, but the one that Mo Ziyuan likes the most is Lu You's "A Storm and Rain on November 4th", lying in a lonely village without mourning, still thinking about guarding the Luntai for the country. Late at night, I lie down listening to the wind and rain, and the iron horse glacier falls into my dream.
He was lying in a lonely village, but he did not feel sad for his situation. Instead, he cared about the country and wanted to continue to guard the border for the country.
In such loneliness, loneliness, and embarrassment, he still cared about the safety of the country, regardless of his own life and death. He only wanted to contribute to the country, regain the land, and serve the country.
I would not dare to plagiarize such a poem. Not only would I not dare, I would not even dare to imitate it. I would not dare to start even after thinking about it for a long time!
In the end, I stopped thinking about ancient poetry. There are always a lot of experts on the Internet. As soon as I open my mind, suitable choices will come rolling in like a torrent of rivers.
After picking and choosing, I chose a proverb from the Song Dynasty. He recited silently: One penny a day, a thousand penny a thousand days, a rope cuts the wood, and a drop of water penetrates the stone.
You definitely can't write it directly like this, it doesn't have to rhyme, or there can be other problems, but you have to make up at least twenty words, otherwise the flaw will be revealed immediately.
But this didn't bother her. After a while, she figured out how to change it. Just add a verb in the middle.
Where does the money come from? If you earn it, you can’t write that you earn a penny a day! Moreover, the meaning of the proverb mainly reflects the perseverance spirit of not accumulating small steps to reach a thousand miles; not accumulating small streams to reach a river. Therefore, this money should be saved once a day and accumulated in a thousand days. When a little becomes a lot, it becomes a thousand dollars accumulated in a thousand days.
After thinking about the first two sentences, I started to write them down, and then the last two sentences. With the examples of the first two sentences, the last two sentences also have a direction. After thinking about it for a while, I wrote "Wire Saw". But wood can be broken, and water droplets can penetrate stone.
After finishing writing, I silently read the revised poem that I had written: Save a penny a day, accumulate a thousand penny a thousand days, a rope saw can cut wood, and a drop of water can penetrate a stone.
Although it doesn't rhyme and isn't neat, it still reads smoothly, so I'll make do with it! I won’t embarrass myself and compete with the serious students here who have learned a lot!
If they ask why there is such a big gap between the poems written before and after? I have already thought about how to explain it. I heard it from my grandpa. When he was selling mountain products, he would miss me and grandma when it gets dark and he would stay at other people's houses. He was afraid that grandma would not be able to take care of me because she was not in good health!
In winter, the trees on the mountain are bare and not a single bird can be found. People in the village are afraid of the cold and many people don’t go out. But our family doesn’t have much to eat. We are still in debt and can’t afford meat. Grandpa So I went to the river to catch fish for me, but it was too cold and I didn’t dare to go into the water. I was afraid that I would freeze and not be able to feed me, so I followed others and went fishing in the river. I originally wanted to write about fishing alone in the Hanjiang River, but when I wrote about the fish, I There was no snow anymore, and my grandfather didn’t catch any fish anyway. Instead, there was a layer of snow on his fishing rod, as if he was fishing for snow.
Mo Ziyuan even thought about shedding a few tears when explaining. She must say it with true feelings and make people cry!
With the experience of being short of food and clothing, this poem about saving money comes naturally. Besides, the money in poor families is hard-earned and they are saved penny by penny. The next two sentences can also make sense. Who hasn’t used a drop of water to teach others?
After thinking about their speeches, everyone also wrote them. After continuing to hand in their speeches, they took a short rest and then started the next round.
This time, Liang Shouxing didn't search first. He endured his curiosity and rated the top one before flipping down. Du Yi placed it well, and the second one belonged to Mo Ziwan.
He looked at it and thought he had read the name wrong. He then looked at the signature area and saw Mo Ziwan clearly written on it. Then he looked at the poem again.
A question came to mind, why is there such a big gap?
The two of them looked at Mo Ziwan again, and saw that her expression was no different from the previous two rounds, and their brows frowned even more.
Feng Shengrong, who was sitting on the other side of Liang Shouxing, had been paying attention to Zhu Xuan and Liang Shouxing. The two kept whispering to each other, and this time Liang Shouxing did not cover Mo Ziwan's poem, which allowed Feng Shengrong to see it clearly.
After reading this so-called "poetry", Liang Shouxing's face immediately showed sarcasm, "What kind of poem is this? All the catchphrases are used to make up the numbers. What's written in front of it can't be copied!"
Feng Shengrong can think and understand this. It is indeed incredible that a four-year-old child could write such a poem, which is unbelievable! Although the third song is nondescript, it looks real and not bad at all. It is not easy for a four-year-old child to think of such a truth.
It's understandable, but it's understandable. He said so openly that they copied it, and it was copied under their supervision. This made Zhu Xuan very unhappy, and he immediately showed no mercy to him, "You mean it is? Are you blind, or are we all so blind that we can’t see what she’s copying?”