Today's two updates are posted together. Let me explain the changes.
The changes started with Mayumi locking the door and continued until the end of the chapter.
Then comes time for introspection.
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Really, I'm so sorry!
Because of Crow Brother... no, Crow Brother's ignorance and blindness caused Chapter 83 to be released with extremely serious flaws. This flaw would completely destroy the character of the protagonist, but I didn't notice it at all when I was writing.
In the original version, Zuo Chang clearly knew everything, but he made an overstep (kissing Mayumi) without Mayumi knowing anything about it.
The direct consequence of this bridge is injury.
One hurts Mayumi;
The second is to harm flying birds.
According to normal logical development, the relaxed and pleasant tone of the story I envisioned will completely collapse at this moment - how could Mayumi and Asuka not be angry? This is outright deception.
Unless I use the method of subduing intelligence to strip away the personalities of Mayumi and Asuka and turn them into soft weapons, can I continue to maintain the perfunctory ease and ridiculous joy of dementia.
Regret, now is regret.
After the chapters are released, I will read them myself on my mobile phone to see if there is anything I can delete. When I finished reading Chapter 83 today, my reading ranking was already outside the 100th place...
I'm sure the 83 chapters I posted previously were hurtful.
Before me, at least a hundred people had eaten this plate of nine-turn large intestine that retained its original flavor.
Think about it again, people who read the book one hour after the chapter is released should be considered people who have a certain favorable impression of the book. And I actually gave them a cruel shit-feeding!
I'm really speechless. .
Feel sorry.
Really sorry.
Friends who have watched the original version, can you leave a message here? If there are too many people, I will consider looking for opportunities to add more to compensate...
Thank you to every reader who posted your own opinions in this chapter. If it weren't for your doubts, I might not have realized my mistake now.
Another reader group is announced: 564446424
If any readers are curious about the content of Chapter 83 of the original version (my advice is not to be curious), you can join the group and take a look.
