Think about the day

Today I plan to think about how to end this plot in a better situation.

Also, looking at everyone’s comments on this book, I also reflected on it and found that the shortcomings are basically in the early stage:

Chapter 1 The protagonist’s words and deeds;

The main character’s name doesn’t fit the style;

Conquer the section of Thrall Apollo;

The part where Hollow and Death's clone;

In addition to the relatively large controversies in these four paragraphs, there are also some smaller controversies, but I will not list them one by one. If you find anything, you can post it in the comments.

I will summarize and reflect on these controversies and shortcomings everyone has, in order to write the next book more perfectly.

Another one is the update issue. I now know this is very important. The editor told me about it two days ago.

If it were updated faster, my book's score should be much higher. However, due to work reasons and not many manuscripts saved at the beginning, the book was updated too slowly.

I will also improve this problem in the next book. For this one, let me finish it like this!

I hope everyone can understand, I still want to finish this book!