Dear readers, let me first say sorry.
Because I have had the experience of being sprayed in the comment section before, so I rarely read the comment section when I open a new book this time.
Today I just happened to finish coding and look through it.
I found that many readers are a little confused and confused about the recent chapters.
Let me explain it to you here.
If you still feel dissatisfied, you can leave a message in the comment area. After reading it, I will modify the previous chapters as appropriate.
The first is about Lin Feng's loyalty.
In fact, from the previous chapters, I have been emphasizing that Lin Feng is not loyal to Mondstadt, and is even quite resentful.
He was able to help Mond purely because of his adoptive father's last words.
As for whether this last statement is true or false, I won’t say it because everyone has different opinions.
Coulson was very kind to Lin Feng, raising him as his own son. In addition, Duo Tuo Lei was watching Lin Feng in Zhi Dong, so in comparison, Lin Feng was willing to help Mond.
Also, Rosalia did not blame Lin Feng, but felt sorry for losing another younger brother. Maybe the emotion expressed was not in place, so I will modify this paragraph.
The second is that Falga wanted to kill Lin Feng. Why did Lin Feng scold him in a long speech instead of falling out on the spot.
This is the most criticized point.
Because when I wrote this, it was Lin Feng’s perspective.
From his perspective, Falga's intention to kill him was purely a misunderstanding, and if he explained it clearly, everything would be fine.
But it happened that he no longer wanted to work for Mondstadt, so he used this reason to break up with Falga.
As for the intermediate process, you may find it frustrating.
Maybe it’s because I got excited when I wrote it.
My original idea was to first take the moral high ground (I worked for Mondstadt for ten years, in exchange for an indiscriminate sword), and then to threaten Falga not to think about attacking me again (I have the Wind God in my hand) and Dongfeng Dragon, if you attack me, just wait for the two of them to die), and finally break up publicly, with the handle in hand, and the moral high ground in hand, to ensure that I and Youra are safe in Mondstadt, and Mondstadt Cut off the relationship, indulge in some fun, and scold Falga. (I definitely can’t just let it go after being struck by a sword. I can’t swallow this breath.)
The reason why I wrote this is because I wrote Falga as a person who would do anything for Mondstadt.
When Lin Feng breaks up with him, Falga will become a huge threat. With their force value inferior to Falga, Lin Feng and Youla are always in danger.
Therefore, we must first seize the initiative in our own hands to prevent Falga from taking action again.
In addition, when you read the book, you are reading from God’s perspective, and a lot of the information is omniscient and omnipotent, so there may be too much explanation in some places. You can point out to me the parts that are not good in appearance. The main reason is that my thinking was very smooth when I wrote this book. Many times I write a lot of things unconsciously as I write.
In addition, the authorities are obsessed with the bystander, so I really couldn't find any problems when I checked the manuscript, so I need everyone to help me correct it.
There is also some analysis about the plot here, which is my original intention of writing those fragments. Let me tell you about it.
1. The problem of information asymmetry.
Lin Feng had a three-year gap in information about Mond, so he didn't know many things.
Now let me summarize the information I already know.
(1) Lin Feng is disloyal to Mond and even has deep resentment.
(2) Simon thought Coulson was mad at him and was a scapegoat.
(3) Falga is the real murderer, but no one knows it.
(4) Lin Feng believed that given his importance, it was impossible for Falga to kill him, even if he had a quarrel with Falga at the headquarters of the Knights of the West Wind.
(5) After the battle with the Lawrence family, he mistakenly thought that Falga wanted to kill him because of the power of an external god. In fact, Falga had this idea when he discovered that Lin Feng was uncontrollable, but the timing was wrong. I wasn't ready to carry it out, and I only really had the idea of killing when I saw the power of an external god.
(6) Falga's compromise was also due to the problem of information asymmetry. He didn't know if it was true that Lin Feng said that he had the location of Fengshen and Dongfeng Dragon in his hand, but he didn't dare to bet. Once it was true, Fengshen and Dongfeng Dragon If something happens to the Dragon of the East Wind, Mondstadt will be completely doomed.
2. What did the protagonist do when he arrived in Mondstadt?
The first thing was to assassinate Cripps and accidentally expose his evil eye.
The second thing is to find Mondstadt's undercover Ilok and team up with Falga to get rid of him.
The third thing was to interrogate Cripps and get the information that he cooperated with the Fools.
The fourth thing is to chase Yura.
The fifth thing is to help Youla get rid of family troubles, break away from the control of the West Wind Knights, trick Krober to death, and help Youla re-light the Eye of God.
The sixth thing, which is what we are doing now, is to pay homage to Coulson.
3. The issue of the protagonist’s strength.
Lin Feng has a special physique and can ignore the evil eye's backlash and can purify and swallow the power of the evil demon (including the aura of evil spirits, karma, etc.).
The main combat power is proficiency in all martial arts. All weapons can be used, including bows, which can be used for melee combat (magical weapons can also be used, this has not been written yet). The seven-element evil eye has the disadvantage of losing physical strength after overusing the evil eye ability. Rapid decline, unknown demonic power, the biggest trump card, and also the move that consumes the most on the body.
As for the fight between him and Falga, I have to apologize for this, because I’m not very good at writing fights and couldn’t express the feeling I imagined.
Let me explain first, Lin Feng and Falga are not comparable, and neither is Yora.
During the battle between Falga and Lin Feng, Falga was lethargic in the early stage. I have written about this.
But Falga did not expect that Lin Feng's martial arts skills with the bow were so powerful. Not only could he not be able to defeat him with his big sword, but he was also injured several times.
Later, when Falga took action, Lin Feng was stunned.
Regarding the issue of Yula’s combat power.
Yura's strength comes from swordsmanship and the seal of ice.
Yula's swordsmanship is very strong, but it is not enough to impress Falga. At most, it is enough to make Falga take it seriously.
Yora's Ice Seal is super powerful. After all, it was the strongest force used by the Lawrence family when they ruled Mondstadt. Its attack power when fully exploded is much higher than the previous executive levels (I set it myself, hehe).
But the disadvantage is that it needs to be accumulated, it is slow, it takes a long time to launch the attack, and it may be interrupted as soon as it is used. Therefore, Yula's swordsmanship is to completely abandon defense and launch a continuous offensive, just to cooperate with the activation of the Seal of Ice.
Yula has used the Seal of Solid Ice twice so far, but her opponents were all far superior to her in strength. The shortcomings of the Seal of Solid Ice's high power and slow speed were all exposed.
Let’s summarize the changes in Lin Feng’s mentality.
Before the age of eight, happiness.
From the age of eight to ten, he was quite critical of Mond.
From ten to fifteen years old, he had resentment towards Mond, but Coulson was alive and willing to do things for Mond.
From the age of fifteen to seventeen, his resentment towards Mondstadt deepened, but Coulson was alive and willing to do things for Mondstadt.
Before returning to Mondstadt when he was seventeen years old, Colson died and he no longer wanted to work for Mondstadt. Due to Colson's will and the kindness of his upbringing, he reluctantly worked for Mondstadt.
Going back to Mondstadt to the eve of the Lawrence family incident, he felt deeply helpless about Mondstadt's current situation. He walked forward with a heavy load in front, and the Mondstadt people behind him pulled his legs back. He couldn't bear it anymore, so he prepared to fight with Mondstadt. Germany turned into a cooperative relationship.
After the Lawrence family incident ended, he no longer worked for Mondstadt, including the possibility of a cooperative relationship. He officially broke with Falgar and returned to Solstice to compete for the executive seat (revealed in advance).
I saw a comment asking whether it is too early for the protagonist to jump into the opposite direction. First of all, my outline is like this, so I said that the title I had temporarily thought of was not suitable for the subsequent plot.
Regarding this point, it is also said in the plot that the protagonist is not unable to live without Mondstadt, but that Mondt will fall into a very difficult situation without the protagonist.
Lin Feng's personal strength is very strong. No matter which country he goes to, with his military force, combined with the intelligence and advanced information of the two countries in his hands, he can prosper, so leaving Mondstadt is not a big deal at all.
Finally, I have an outline.
It's just that my thinking tends to diverge when I'm writing. The general situation is, "Oh, this plot can match up with the history of Mondstadt XX, let's expand it a little bit." So the plot will be much enriched when I write it.
Okay, if you have any other comments, you can post them in the comment area. I will read them this time. If you have any good suggestions, you can also leave a message.
I will correct mistakes and adopt good suggestions as appropriate.
