The chapters revised today are chapters 32~35.
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Chapter 32: The redundant, awkward, and awkward parts of the chapter have been revised, and the paragraphs have been optimized and simplified. At the same time, the psychological activities of the characters in this chapter and the reasons for the previous actions (Duan Qiang's aspect) have been re-depicted, and they have been It has become more obvious and reasonable. Finally, the foreshadowing context in the chapter has been strengthened (regarding Li Jia's emotional issues). The text of Chapter 32 has been expanded by about 400 words, mostly revised.
Chapter 33: The situation is similar to that of Chapter 32. I re-described the narration of the psychological activities of Zuo Dao and Li Jia to make their intentions clearer. At the same time, I recast some unclear and redundant contents of the original chapter, and then revised this chapter Some environmental descriptions and descriptions of the paper man's behavior have been modified to some extent, but there are no changes to the main plot. This chapter has a relatively large number of deleted words, and the main text has been expanded to only more than 300 words.
Chapter 34: The overall changes are very small, just some paragraphs have been adjusted, including some dialogues, and the direction of logical thinking. The main text has been expanded by about 400 words, and there are not many changes~ There are no changes to the main line.
Chapter 35: I have made modifications to Zuo Dao’s inner self-talk, some scenes, and redundant aspects. There is no change in the main plot, and there is no change in the chapter framework. It is a small adjustment to increase the smoothness of reading. The chapter also has the same text. Expanded to about 400 words.
Today, a total of four chapters of construction have been revised, and the text has been expanded by about 2,000 words~
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