Today, the revised chapters of the book are chapters 8 to 10 of the first volume.
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Volume 1, Chapter 8: This chapter has been highly revised, with major adjustments made from behavioral logic to dialogue content. It can be said to be the biggest change in the past two days, as well as the behavior of Zuodao moving closer to the official organization of Huayu. , make a more obvious and legitimate explanation.
The main plot and subsequent plots have no impact. The content of Chapter 8 has been greatly expanded, from the original 2,100 words to more than 3,300 words, with an addition of more than 1,000 words.
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Volume 1, Chapter 9: The setting of this chapter has been modified to a certain extent, mainly to describe the problem. Looking back now, the content I wrote earlier is indeed likely to cause some controversy, so I made Although adjustments have been made, the overall framework has not been changed, and the dialogue in the text and the left-handed psychological narration have been modified to a certain extent.
The main text has been expanded due to the above adjustments, from the original 2,000 words to 2,800 words.
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Volume 1, Chapter 10: Some detailed descriptions, action characterizations, and text layout have been adjusted to a moderate extent, making the whole article look more natural. It is the best that I can achieve at my current level of personal online writing. The overall framework has not changed, and the main text has been expanded by about 400 words.
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Today, a total of three chapters have been revised and expanded to about 2,000 words. The above is today’s progress~
