Today's modification progress: Chapters 5~7 will be modified.
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Chapter 5: The grammar has been slightly modified, and some dialogues have been slightly adjusted. The plot framework has not been changed. The overall adjustment is minor, and the number of words has been expanded by about 200 words.
Chapter 6: Moderate adjustments have been made to interactive content, logical content, scene description, etc., and also expanded by about 200 words.
In Chapter 7, the battle description, specific details, dialogue process, etc. have been optimized to a medium to high degree. The text layout has been adjusted, but the overall framework and rhythm have not changed.
Today’s construction status has a total of three chapters, and the expanded text is about a thousand words~
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Here I will reply to some of the troubles of my fellow book friends~
The purpose of revising the entire book is to improve the reading fluency of this book, mainly for possible new readers, and to reduce the poor reading experience.
Essentially, the plot will not be changed, so if you don't go back and watch it again, you won't miss out on some new key points. For those who like to look for details again and again, there may be a new experience.
Secondly, the second purpose of revising the whole book is to allow the author to regain control of the details of the whole book. The general direction has not been lost, but I am also worried that some inconsistent story points will be born due to missing some details. .
The above is today’s content.
