Hello everyone, I am Chuhua.
I had free time early this morning and decided to start the revision plan for the entire book in advance to speed up the progress.
The scope of today’s revision is Chapters 1 to 4 of the first volume.
In the content of the first chapter, I made some modifications and expansions to some descriptions, psychological activities, and narration in the article. As you know, the chapters at this stage belonged to the new book period, and we would strictly limit the number of words in the chapters.
This will cause many difficult choices in character interaction, plot description, foreshadowing, etc., which will lead to a series of problems. Since I have chosen to revise the entire book, I will improve these problems on the original basis.
In the second chapter, some psychological activities and the contents of the protagonist's psychological self-talk have been fine-tuned to make them closer to the behavioral logic of the deviant deity.
In the third chapter, I made some more intuitive fine-tuning to some of the plot descriptions of the world structure. The main content of the adjustments was not much. At the same time, I also modified some action sequences and grammatical issues in the article.
In Chapter 4, I polished the original explanation link, adjusted the grammatical issues, and made moderate adjustments to the content of the left-handed reasoning link.
In total, the word count of the four chapters has increased by about 2,000 words.
The above is the content of today’s work.
All subsequent chapters that have been revised will have the word [(revised)] added at the end, so please pay more attention~
