No matter how you say it, Guo Yang is an experienced screenwriter, and he is much more experienced in screenwriting and creative writing skills than his apprentice Yang Jie.
In addition, "Ask the Sword" is an original script with no reference, while "The Sword" is adapted from a novel and uses the original novel as a reference, so the script of "The Sword" is relatively easy to create.
As for Fang Yu, who had watched the TV series "Sword and Fairy" on Earth, he could see at a glance where there were problems with the script written by Guo Yang.
There are not many problems, and occasionally there are a few things that need to be corrected.
Guo Yang looked at the revised "Sword of Immortal" script in his hand and even forgot to eat the food on the table.
He didn't write much of the script for "Sword of Immortality", just about ten leaves. He read it with concentration and it didn't take long to finish it.
After that, Fang Yu praised him again.
There were some details that even he had not considered, but Fang Yu thought of them and modified them very well.
"It really should be revised like this. The whole script should be revised to make it smoother! It's very good."
Fang Yu smiled: "What you wrote is not bad, but it saved me a lot of energy. I hope I can perform stably in the future!"
If he was asked to write a script, he would have to learn some script writing skills. It's good now. He doesn't have to waste much time on it. He just needs to wait for Guo Yang's script to be written and he can slightly modify the overall storyline.
Guo Yang's ability to write scripts is pretty good, and there aren't many things he needs to revise.
Guo Yang raised the wine glass in front of him, stood up, and toasted with Fang Yu: "Of course, happy cooperation!"
Then he called Xuan Zefei and had a drink together.
“A pleasure to work with.”
Yang Jie also stood up and toasted to Fang Yu: "I was too blind to recognize Taishan last night. I hope you don't take what you said to your heart!"
Fang Yu drank his toast with a smile and said nothing.
Yang Jie spoke tactfully last night, but he didn't take it seriously.
Furthermore, he was not so harsh that he would target the other person's words with his words.
Then several people began to discuss the next plot development of "Sword and Fairy" while eating. It happened that Fang Yu could express his thoughts, and when Guo Yang returned, he could write the script according to his ideas.
At the same time, Hengdian, Kyoto.
After Director Chen received the revised script sent to him by Guo Yang, he immediately notified the actors to perform in their seats.
This scene had been performed once before it was revised, otherwise I wouldn't have known there was something wrong with the script.
It was because after the performance, I found that the actor couldn't perform well no matter how emotional he was. I initially thought it was a problem with the actor's performance. Later, after thinking about it, I discovered that it was actually something wrong with the script itself.
The characters are a bit over-emotional.
However, this time, after he asked the actors to perform it again according to the changed script, it became more natural.
The actors' emotional excesses don't feel out of place.
Moreover, this section was performed only twice, which satisfied Director Chen very much.
Overjoyed, he immediately sent a message back to Guo Yang: "The paragraph you just sent me was very well modified. The excessive emotion finally stopped being harsh. As expected, you still need to take action!"
Before Guo Yang came to the crew to revise the script, he had already asked Guo Yang's apprentice to revise this paragraph, but it turned out that it didn't work after revising it several times.
It's still up to the master to take action.
Guo Yang responded quickly to the message: "I didn't change it this time. If I had changed it, how could I have changed it to this extent so quickly! It was a young man named Fang Yu who changed it!"
Director Chen was stunned for a moment, then immediately replied: "Fang Yu? Which Fang Yu? Is he the one from "Heartbeat Melody"?"
As a director, he often needs to look for actors, so he always watches some programs and entertainment news. If something catches his eye, he will write it down. Maybe he can find him to play a certain role in the next program.
Nowadays, "Heartbeat Melody" is very popular. Of course he has watched it. Among the guests of "Heartbeat Melody", he naturally remembers Fang Yu, who is the most popular.
However, his question stopped the opposite person Guo Yang, so Guo Yang raised his head and asked Fang Yu: "Have you participated in "Heartbeat Melody"?"
Fang Yu was peeling lobsters to eat, and nodded when he heard the question: "Well, I'm one of the guests inside!"
Soon, Director Chen received a positive reply.
"It's really him. He can actually write scripts. I heard he is very good at singing! I never thought he had such a talent. How much did he change for you?"
While Fang Yu was eating shrimp, he looked at Guo Yang who was chatting with his head down, feeling a little baffled.
Why did he suddenly ask him if he had participated in "Heartbeat Melody"? Who are you chatting with?
Just when he was a little confused, Guo Yang looked up at Fang Yu with a smile again.
"The director of "Asker of the Sword" said that if you are willing to help me revise the script of "Asker of the Sword", he is willing to pay you an additional fee for revising the script. It's not much, just 500,000. There is not much that you need to revise, and it's just me. This is what I’m holding in my hand. Are you willing?”
He was worried that Fang Yu would not be willing, so he immediately added before Fang Yu could speak.
"The main reason is that the crew is too anxious to get the script. The filming has already started. If the script cannot be revised in one day, the filming will be delayed for one more day. Every day that is delayed will cost an extra day to support the crew. Director Chen also wants to complete "Ask the Sword" as soon as possible. "After finishing the filming, although 500,000 is not much, I know you may not be short of the money, but I really hope you can help me!"
Since Fang Yu can invest in "Sword of Immortality", he must have a lot of money on his hands. He is really worried that Fang Yu will refuse.
He doesn't want to go back to Hengdian to join the team anymore, he really wants Fang Yu to save him!
Let him revise it alone, and he won't be able to complete it in two days.
Fang Yu thought for a while, and realized that the other party had reached this point, and if he didn't take the 500,000, he wouldn't get it for nothing!
"Ask the Sword" has been filming for some time, and Guo Yang has changed a lot of content on the crew. There is not much content left that really needs him to revise, and it won't take him long.
So he nodded and said: "No problem!"
After everything was discussed and the script of "Sword of Immortality" was settled, Fang Yu got up and went back to the Xindong Cabin.
As soon as Fang Yu left, Xuan Zefei looked at Guo Yang in surprise: "Is his script really revised so well?"
Guo Yang nodded and answered truthfully: "It is indeed very good. Maybe he has never written a script and does not know a lot of professional knowledge about writing scripts. However, he has good control over the development of the plot. I asked him just now, he He said he writes novels, which probably has something to do with it, as many novel authors change careers and become screenwriters very quickly!"
This made Xuan Zefei even more puzzled: "But, I also write novels, why can't I change the script to look like him?"
"Maybe his grades in writing novels are better than yours!" During this time, Guo Yang became familiar with Xuan Zefei, and he was outspoken and said what was on his mind directly.
"Based on his level of control over the plot, he is probably a god-level existence in the novel world! Haven't you known him for several years? Haven't you asked him what novel he wrote?"
Xuan Zefei's hand that was picking up vegetables suddenly stopped midway, and he turned to look at Guo Yang next to him with a face full of disbelief and confusion.
His mind seemed to explode for a moment. A certain sentence that Fang Yu had said to him many times kept turning back and forth in his mind.
"Maybe... he really smiles to the sky?"
"What?"
Xuan Zefei slapped the chopsticks in his hand on the table and suddenly howled loudly: "He's not really smiling to the sky, is he?!"