In the past few days, many book friends have been quarreling and scolding me about this chapter.
I was always there to persuade and explain. But there are really too many, so I can only talk about them in a single chapter.
This book of mine is a work of transformation. Everything is crossing the river by feeling the stones. I also know that my writing level is limited, so I have always taken into account everyone’s opinions and made changes.
For example, some book friends said that it is more appropriate to change the name of a disposable Noble Phantasm to a consumable Noble Phantasm.
I thought it was really good, and then I changed it.
For example, a book friend said: The parting of the shadow warrior's inner farewell in Chapter 53 was too awkward to write.
Although I feel very moved. But I still deleted those few sentences.
For example, some book friends said: The protagonist sat in front of the grave for a long time before going to check the body. It was too intellectual.
I actually didn’t feel very good when I was writing it, but in order to express the protagonist’s sadness, I just wrote it that way. After it was posted, everyone mentioned it, and I changed it.
There are also some things that everyone pointed out and I found that there are indeed problems, but the plot is already like this and there is no way to change it.
For example, everyone said: the protagonist activates his ability and shouts it. Too embarrassing.
To be honest... maybe I have never written this type of article, so I felt quite passionate when I wrote it. So that’s it.
As a result, everyone said it was awkward and I wanted to change it. But I found that the plot was not coherent, so I had to do this.
This is indeed a question of my ability. I'm sorry for everyone.
There are also some opinions that actually made me feel very uncomfortable after seeing them. This is because everyone did not pay close attention or forgot to set it. Here, I will also explain it together.
For example, some book friends questioned why loan sharking was not used to remove the mark.
The loan shark is not a wishing machine. At this stage, it can only increase the amount (which means the protagonist must have it before it can be used), but cannot remove things.
I was even afraid that people wouldn't understand it, so I spent a few hundred words explaining the logic of its use before the plot started (Chapter 51).
Another example. Some book friends said that the money and items used to repay loan sharks in Chapter 53 are deus ex machina.
You can turn back to Chapter 32 and take a look.
When I gained the ability, I wrote that I could repay it with money and items.
The original words are [Fang Ze can use any money, items, or even "efforts (but no gains)" of equal value to repay the loan. 】.
So, this is the ability setting from the beginning. It’s really not deus ex machina.
As for the crystals and money that the protagonist got, they were given to Miaomiao by the female swordsman from the gang's grocery store in Chapter 30, and Miaomiao gave them to the protagonist in Chapter 31. That's why gangs surrounded the streets to track down Miaomiao's plot.
Another example is the identification ability of the late-night investigation room. In other words, the ability to "identify extraordinary objects" appears out of thin air.
You can go back and read all the chapters where you gained gains (Chapter 12, Chapter 18, Chapter 25, Chapter 28, Chapter 34). Only items with extraordinary power will produce information in the investigation room.
And the only ordinary item obtained: a porcelain bowl. I deliberately mentioned it in one sentence and did not write down the information obtained, just to dig this small hole, and then wait until it is revealed that the investigation room has identification capabilities to give everyone a surprise. (Chapter 40)
Even at the beginning (Chapter 12), I hinted at obtaining ordinary items without any information.
In the next chapter, I also wrote the reason why this logic is established: the investigation room allows the protagonist to sense the emotions of the person under investigation and hear the other person's inner thoughts. This is actually equivalent to a kind of "appraisal", so we can know The true information about extraordinary items is actually in line with the capabilities of the entire investigation room.
There are still some questions about small details.
For example, in Chapter 26, some book friends asked why Bai Zhi could analyze so many psychological activities of the protagonist? You can't even tell by looking at the micro-expressions.
Because I wrote: Bai Zhi has a camera that captured the protagonist’s expression and movements when he spoke. Magnify frame by frame for analysis.
For example, in Chapter 41, some people said that if Bai Zhi was really smart, she would know the lie detector results.
In fact it is documented. Because she videotaped the whole process, and played it backwards to see that the Noble Phantasm was broken when the 26th person, it means that the previous 4 people lied.
For example, in Chapter 53, the pursuers are coming soon. The protagonist was seriously injured and took the ranger away to investigate. How could he have time? Isn't this just the right time to deliver food?
Because I wrote in detail in Chapter 49: The news that Golden Fox only found out after the death of the trio.
Chapter 51 also writes: He can only estimate the ranger’s itinerary.
This shows that he judges the success or failure of the mission through the life and death of the members. Therefore, if the ranger is not dead, he at most thinks that the other party has not caught up with the protagonist (after all, he thinks that the protagonist has the awakening ability to escape)
For another example, some book friends previously questioned why the protagonist was not killed when Han Kaiwei was killed?
Because it is written in Chapter 40: The protagonist is Bai Zhi’s last hope for solving the case. With him, Bai Zhi will not go crazy, and Jin Hu will have time to continue looking for that thing. Moreover, the protagonist has amnesia and the organization will not be exposed. So there is no need to silence.
For another example, someone asked the organization why Twitch went after a peripheral member.
Because I wrote in Chapter 44: Jin Hu suspected that what he was looking for was obtained by the protagonist. The reason is: that thing can awaken people and "enlighten" many extraordinary treasures. Same as the main character.
And he is not chasing the protagonist, but wants to bring the protagonist back.
As for other doubts, there are some. But it’s because the plot hasn’t been written yet.
For example, a few days ago, Jin Hu said: What about sending him there?
As a result, many book friends were arguing, talking about subduing intelligence, talking about miscellaneous soldiers-elites-mini-boss, and kept delivering food to the protagonist. I don’t know how to send experts there.
But in fact, it was explained in the chapter on the second day: a master was sent there...
Forest ranger is a high-level awakened person who can rival a fusion person in the jungle. Under normal circumstances, the protagonist, a newly awakened person, is 100% unable to hurt him and can be taken away by pure crushing.
For another example, yesterday I wrote about the protagonist being beaten up by a ranger. Some book friends made a fuss, saying that the protagonist's abilities were too rubbish.
But after reading today's chapter, you will know that it is not garbage, but too strong.
So another book friend said that it was going to collapse...
.......
To be honest, I have been a little exhausted these past few days because of the doubts and quarrels in this chapter.
Moreover, the results of our book are not as good as those of my previous book. This makes me feel even more tired.
I really want to write a good book, a book that creates a wonderful world, has an interesting and exciting story.
So I prepared it for more than half a year and went through several editions of the outline before I had this book.
It is indeed my first time to write this type of book. I have no experience and the writing is very average. Some of the battle scenes are a bit awkward to write, and the pretense is a bit stiff, but I have really been working hard. Every time I write a plot, I will keep reading similar plots written by great masters, and then compare them with what I have written, and then try again. change.
So, I'm really trying.
Regular readers know that I have a particularly bad mentality. I am particularly susceptible to negative reviews. It is also commonly known as the glass heart.
So, I hope everyone can be more tolerant to me.
And because our book has a slight suspense and detective element, if I really bury the story too deeply or write it unclearly.
If you need it, I can also briefly restore the events from God's perspective in each volume. Let everyone feel comfortable.
And open a single chapter to collect everyone’s questions and make a summary.
I can guarantee that I will write it well to the end, and that our book will be a pleasant read and will not abuse the author. The logic of the big plot can basically be worked out and can be found from the foreshadowing.
I really just want to finish writing this book and make my dream come true.
Therefore, I hope everyone can read our book happily. I hope you can stay with our book until the end. Don't quarrel, and don't scold me.
Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you all...
