After writing the chapter just now, I took a look at the detailed word count of the first two volumes and made a brief report to the elders.
Volume One, Kunlun Mountain.
The main text is expected to be 150,000 words, the end is 135,000 words, and the outline is 16,000 words.
Can I get a 6 for completion?
Mainly because of the plot at the beginning, which is a bit dissuasive.
After more than a dozen chapters, after determining the tone of the book, the writing started to gain some flavor, and there were not so many readers scolding it.
As for the second volume, Kyushu is in chaos.
The main text is also expected to be 150,000 words, and the ending is 149,000 words, and the detailed outline is 36,000 words.
The average outline of each chapter is about 700 words.
Therefore, this volume, whether it is the plot or the advancement of the main plot, is under control, and it can probably be rated as a 7.
When I finish writing this volume.
Close your eyes, and many profound and interesting images will emerge.
So the writing is quite satisfying.
For example, the transformations of Xiao Bai, Brother Hu and Ah Li are quite interesting.
And the falling of that drop of rainwater, I don’t know if you noticed it, it was a point in time.
When that drop of rain fell, it was the birth of the ten suns, the beginning of Qi Heshan's challenge to the master, and the beginning of the conversation between Xu Xinyan and Xu Qingyi.
If you write it this way, the vision will be more scattered.
But I personally thought it was worth a try, so I wrote it.
There is also that last scene.
The thirty-six nuts left by classmate Xiaoluo represent the past month. I really like this way of writing, it is more picturesque.
As for the plot, it is progressing steadily and a lot of foreshadowing has been laid, which can be regarded as considerable progress.
Of course, during the day, I quickly read through this volume and found three shortcomings.
The first is the treatment of the white tiger.
In fact, the white tiger should not be written directly, but the movement of it hitting the door should be described, which may create a more mysterious feeling.
But when I was writing it, I was influenced by some book reviews.
Some readers said that the plot in Longhu Mountain was not very understandable.
So I thought about it and wrote the plot of Bai Hu not dying first.
However, I found that the effect was weak, and collections and subscriptions plummeted. I also understood that the writing was a bit confusing, making it difficult for readers to understand, and collections and subscriptions naturally failed to increase.
I know this.
But I still insisted on my own way of writing and did not write out what my teacher said.
I want to put the words of my master at the beginning of the third volume as an introduction to trigger the plot of the third volume.
So please bear with me.
If there is anything you don’t understand, please bear with it and wait for a while. I guarantee that it will be revealed within 20 chapters, and I also guarantee that there will be no plot delays or watering down.
Where there is foreshadowing, there will be foreshadowing, and where there is a climax, there will be a climax, so that everyone can enjoy it.
Let’s talk about the second part, which is the plot of the teacher and his father traveling around the world.
Because when I was writing this volume, I was imagining the plot during the day and working on the manuscript at night.
So sometimes, in a rush to rush out, some details are overlooked.
I should write the plot about my teacher and my father at the end.
It might be more interesting to take over the beginning of the third volume this way.
However, as it is currently handled, the problem is not big and it will not affect the main plot.
The last thing is that the scenes in the village are missing a million points.
Whenever I write about the village, collections and subscriptions go up, and when I write about the outside world, they go down.
In fact, the bright line of this book is that the village and the outside world go hand in hand.
Therefore, some readers may find it confusing.
In fact, it is easy to understand as long as you clarify the two ends of the village and the outside world.
Summary completed.
Let’s talk about the outbreak warning.
This month I have been working on drafts and updates at night, resulting in a lot of details that are not polished so smoothly.
Coupled with the fact that there are only 4,000 words of updates every day, subscriptions cannot increase.
So far, the number of follow-up orders within 24 hours has dropped to just over 200.
Subscription is really not that bad.
So I urge everyone who has the ability to subscribe and support more, and make sure it is genuine. Thank you.
The detailed outline of the third volume is relatively well prepared and should be able to support the outbreak for about a month.
So don’t wait for next month, just start breaking out from today. Four thousand words is really unsustainable at the starting point.
Try two chapters and 10,000 words of updates every day for everyone to enjoy.
I am also very grateful to my friends who have followed me all the way here.
Thank you for your persistence.
Volume 3, [Leaping through the Dragon Gate]!
I will repay you with quality, and I also want to prove one thing.
It proves that your vision when you discovered this book is really awesome!
I hope I can finish the third volume without being slapped in the face^_^.
This book has been well conceived and is divided into [Blue Star Chapter] and [Wanjie Chapter].
Therefore, there are a lot of foreshadowings in the first and second volumes, which are related to the subsequent plot.
To be honest with you, I have already decided on the last sentence of this book.
This is also a relatively passionate and healing book.
Please feel free to fall into the trap.
Finally, he said, "Please subscribe."
See you today at 10,000 words.
