Volume 2 - Counting the division of the starting point system, the previous Volume 1 was split into Volume 1 and Volume 2, so this volume is divided into Volume 3 in terms of serial number.
(This is a chapter of reflections after returning home after catching the train.)
Let me talk about my feelings first.
When I was writing this volume, it did bring me a lot of challenges and fun. Now that I think about it, the biggest problem with this volume is that the map switching is too abrupt, and there are many places where there is a lack of foreshadowing.
For example, the story goes to the Southern Continent after going to sea, and then the story moves directly to the archipelago. I was not very satisfied with this section because I still lacked consideration for the plot here. When I wrote about the Southern Continent, I realized that there was not enough content to write about.
The reason for this was my lack of control over the plot. I hurriedly moved to the Southern Continent without enough preparation in the early stage. The setting of the "Lord God's Space" in the first volume makes the Southern Continent lack a sense of urgency.
To me, this paragraph wasn't interesting enough. I feel pain when I write this paragraph, and I don't think readers will be satisfied either.
So after that, I asked Xiao Ke to leave the Southern Continent and go to Grossel's Travels. After that, I basically started to design the plots in succession. I don't know how everyone feels about it for the time being, but The later chapters talk a bit more, which makes me happier.
However, another problem was exposed at this time. Xiao Ke's team is a bit too complicated. For a "Puppet Master", whether it is a "one-man show" or a "group drama", he is the director of the Puppet Master alone, and Xiao Ke's team is too complex. Ke obviously will not plot against his partners and let his partners become his pawns.
So, I will pay attention to this in the next volume.
Another problem is that Lao Gao is too strong. Coupled with the quasi-omniscient ability of "True Traveler", Lao Gao can no longer play the game, so Lao Gao went offline for a while.
However, I made some amends later and completely gave up my previous plan. That is to say, the plan is to let Lao Gao be promoted little by little - well, for an old man, this is a bit too insulting to the old man. I would rather let Lao Gao be unable to take action because of the barrier and his own humanity. I don't want to let the old man either. They are so frustrated.
——But when I wrote it later, I did feel much better than before (I was in a happy mood).
Similarly, when I was writing this paragraph, I no longer felt the pain of tormenting each other before. Basically, each chapter can be completed within 3 hours, which also gave me a little more free time to read. some other books.
Then let’s talk about the plot of this volume.
"The Narrow Gate" - well, how should I put it? The ending of this volume is quite different from what I imagined at the beginning. Fortunately, I haven't written down the details of the next volume, otherwise I would have to start all over again. .
In my original idea, at the end of "Narrow Gate", Mr. Door would take action and sacrifice part of himself for people. But the last one was because I didn't have the heart to do it, and the other reason was that Mr. Men was always by Lao Gao's side and was suppressed a bit harshly.
But now it turns out that Klein killed himself and became a demigod. This kind of ending is not bad. After all, there really isn't much hatred between Xiao Ke and Ince Zangwill in this world. The Blood Emperor has no choice but to get on the line in a short period of time.
Therefore, I am quite satisfied with this ending.
That’s about it for the shortcomings and lamentations of this volume—well, it can definitely be used for next time. Now let me talk about the content of the next volume. Of course, don’t worry, it does not contain spoilers.
By about the time I wrote about George III giving up his self-imposed godhood, the tone of the next volume had basically been set. Let’s talk about the title first. The title of the next volume is called “Justice”.
At the end of this volume, I have already highlighted some of the main characters in the next volume - yes, just like the title, Miss Justice will have a lot of roles, of course, most likely not in a love role. However, these will all depend on subsequent developments.
As for everyone in the Tarot Society, the ones in Backlund will have more appearances, and Alger, well, Alger will also have the opportunity to transform in this volume. As for the specific opportunities, I won’t reveal them. Actually, I feel that in addition to Xiao Ke, Lao Gao, and Audrey, Alger’s growth should also fit the title of this volume.
In this volume, I will try to describe it more deeply and give Backlund's stage a more realistic atmosphere. It is also inevitable that the perspective will probably be locked on these "protagonists", and I will not write too much like the previous volume. group portraits and changed too many maps.
For me, this type of writing that I have never written before can be regarded as a challenge. I am also looking forward to what kind of sparks will be created on the stage by several people who uphold their own justice in their hearts.
The current average order of this book is relatively stable, around 1,200, um, it seems that it will not be a problem to achieve stable sales. For me, I am more willing to try more writing methods and improve my own level. For me, writing is not a job, but a hobby and a kind of creation.
Although it is said that you should live a leisurely life, you should also look at poetry and the distance at least. I really have a lot of fun in the process of creating.
Tomorrow, I will update later because I have to think carefully about the start. However, there aren’t many things going on during the National Day. Generally speaking, there shouldn’t be too few updates in the past few days.
Of course, because I don’t like taking time off. Because I know the pain of an author suddenly asking for leave when catching up on updates, I have never asked for leave since the book started. One is to be diligent, and the other is not to disappoint everyone.
Therefore, I want to take advantage of these rare days of vacation to save a few more chapters. As you can see, I don’t have a word saved now.
Of course, there will be no shortage of updates. Because I have to consider the plot, I may not be able to update twice tomorrow, but as long as I have nothing to do in the future, I should be able to update twice every day, and I will update more once I have the saved manuscripts.
Well, I’ve written almost two thousand words in my speech, so let’s stop here.
Tomorrow, the third volume of "Justice" will be updated~ Yuehu shamelessly asks for all kinds of votes here, hoping to get recommendations next month.
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Volume 3·"Justice"
"Overcome an era in yourself."
(End of chapter)
