Let me imitate a squid and write a chapter review. I am also a squid! (happiness)
Strictly speaking, the first volume and the second volume belong to the same outline and the same layout, because during this period, the high-dimensional overlooker just entered the earth and used his prophet to seduce Klein and make him his friend. . And Klein is not alone like in the original work. Instead, he is accompanied by Gao Di, who is both a teacher and a friend. He is not separated from his family and does not live a homeless life.
At first glance, this is a very happy Klein. But is this really the case?
High dimension Abraham, he is just an incarnation of the high dimension overlooker. The high-dimensional overlooker does have human nature, but he is also a god, and he is an external god outside the barrier. He is the embodiment of the will of the "reader", sympathizing with the characters in the book, but also arbitrary.
In this book, Gao Wei, who has read "Lord of Mysteries", is even more so. Since He is now also a member of this world, although he is super doubled by the mysterious power from the high-dimensional world, he also needs to consider his own position.
He is an alien god, an alien god whose actual combat power is not as good as that of a complete pillar; he has the memory of a human being, and he has gone crazy because of his long memory.
Those who look down from higher dimensions do not belong to human beings, let alone the old days. There is no place for Him anywhere, so He hopes to see changes - to tell Himself that He is truly alive.
Then again, with Gao Wei's help, Klein gained some personal happiness, but also lost a lot.
Such as Sharon, such as Maric. It's also like some people who could have become friends did not become friends, and some people who should not have died exchanged fate with some people who should have lost their lives.
For another example, Klein received the support of the Fallen Mother Goddess and the True Creator, but because of this, he lost the support of the Earth Mother Goddess, the Storm Lord, Will, and others. His life will be turned upside down, because Amon knows where Klein's family is. Although he is protected by a high-dimensional overlooker, is this not a way to drive away tigers and devour wolves?
There's no way around some things because they're there. Although Klein obtained the "creeping hunger", he was still unable to stop Panatia, causing some of Backlund's survivors to die from the disease. This is also considered an "equivalence", and it is precisely because of this that Klein died once because of Panatia's counterattack.
This kind of equivalent exchange also exists among Mr. Men and others, so I won’t elaborate on it here.
Compared to the earth - even compared to the outer gods, the high-dimensional overlooker is a "hermit" and a "foreigner". This is why the first honorific name of the high-dimensional overlooker has "outlier". "The reason for the two words.
So I named the first volume "The Hermit". The first volume probably tells the story of a hermit returning to the center of the stage.
Similarly, after Klein himself returned to the Church of Night, he had actually lost the biggest reason for going to sea - the ritual. But Klein will still go to sea, because Gao Wei is at sea, and Ince Zangwill has also escaped from Backlund, preparing to be promoted to Sequence Three. Moreover, Klein is now vaguely aware of the tip of the iceberg of many things, because compared to the original work, Klein knows more things.
And for "Klein", a person who is neither omniscient nor omnipotent, this is also a good ending.
I also organized my own outline - because I don't like to write outlines. At most, I just write a few important events and the final chapter ending. Because I don’t like the rigid writing method that follows an outline. I prefer to let the characters move as freely as possible and let them come out of their own stories.
Of course, limited by my writing experience, I may not be able to write the feeling I want. But writing like this makes me very happy, and sometimes the things I write make me quite satisfied.
As for the subsequent plot, I will generally focus on the two perspectives of Gao Wei and Klein. I will not follow the original plot of Squid, but I will also find ways to make the characters in the original work appear - after all This is fan fiction, and people don’t like to see inexplicable characters appear, right?
As for the second volume, I have now thought of a few more interesting plots. Of course, I won’t know what to write until later.
Then one thing I want to say is that my first volume had many errors in the original plot and some poorly written parts. When writing the second volume, I tried my best to revise it and try some new writing and conception methods. If there are any If you have any opinions, I hope you can mention them as much as possible, because sometimes I may not be aware of the plot problems.
I won’t give any spoilers personally, but the second volume will probably be different from Squid’s, and will involve plots in the Southern Continent, the Land Abandoned by the Gods, and the sea.
Okay, that's probably it. I have to write the second volume, and I haven't saved the manuscript... (sigh)
I am very grateful to all readers for reading this. Thank you Yuehu here.
The second volume of "The Narrow Gate" will be released tomorrow.
"The door is very narrow, but there is a wide world inside and outside the door."
