In a state of excruciating pain, after several days of discussions with my editor, I'm going to rewrite the beginning of this book, everyone.
While the number of words is still small, I haven’t informed readers in my old book yet (this probably means that I know in my heart that the beginning of this book is not good, and I want to wait until the good plot starts later before notifying you). There is no charge for putting it on the shelves, no one is emotionally invested in the book yet, and it doesn’t delay everyone too much, just start the story from the beginning.
The story is still the same story, and the characters are still the same, but I have to write the beginning in a different way.
The reason is very simple. This opening chapter is not good-looking, not good-looking at all.
Maybe I really have been away from online writing for too long.
At that time, during the long preparation period, when I was discussing with the editors and many people... I seemed to forget this, it has to look good.
In fact, at that time, a friend had already told me that it was not good-looking, and that the writing in the first few chapters was quite good, with some possibly good characters, lines, and even a good song line... But , as a story, it’s not good.
However, at that time, I was immersed in the content of the story I wrote, how exciting the plot was, and how good the characters were. I forgot that a story must have an attractive beginning.
It is a story, and it must be a story telling, instead of the male protagonist doing nothing and listening to a hazy storyteller, and then after finishing the story, the male protagonist is still the same, doing nothing...
To be honest, I don’t know what I was thinking at the time. Maybe it’s because I really felt that I did a good job in that story telling. However, the people in this story-telling only live in my mind, outline, and details. To readers, they are just unfamiliar symbols.
My self-doubt probably started when I opened the story-telling session in Chapter 23. I found that no one was interested, I found that no one felt the things I thought were wonderful, I found that everyone said they were confused, and I found that everyone asked questions about men. What on earth does the Lord want to do? The data also tells me that most of the friends who came because of me at the beginning have already started to give up.
Then in Chapters 4 and 5, when the data came back, I finally realized that I was not telling a story... What I thought was wonderful actually failed to impress people.
Then, I persisted, facing regret and confusion, hastily designed a plot to introduce force, and temporarily wrote some trivial things in the small town, writing about Li Yingyue, trying hard to make everyone understand, and no longer feel that the story is just a cloud.
However, there is no adequate design, and I write with an anxious attitude...the result can only get worse! ! !
And there are only a few readers and friends left (the data tells me). They are also persisting. They may not be able to stand it anymore, but they are still trying to encourage me and support me.
I can even see your mood and state when you encourage me - it's really too slow to warm up, Arsenal, it's really too scattered, Arsenal, I try hard to see, support, believe and encourage you, come on, hurry up and let Wen Get excited! ! ! In fact, I can see it all...
We don’t do this anymore.
This story can be really exciting. Between the end of my online writing career and the completion of telling this story, I want to give myself another chance and give this story another chance.
Please believe that I really want to write it well, otherwise I will not give up the new book issue and rewrite the opening chapter. For many authors, it is probably better to start a new book.
1. Unless there are any major accidents, the new chapter will still be in this book, and I will not open a new book. I will delete all chapters and then repost it.
Disappointed friend, I want to say sorry to you and wish you all the best.
2. I need time. These days have been too torturous and painful. I need to slow down. When a story is proven wrong from the beginning, proven to be a failure and unsightly, it feels really painful.
In addition, although I have written some of the other opening chapter before, I am a little scared and have to think carefully about whether it is good-looking.
3. Let’s tentatively set March 1st. Sorry, I have to set this time a little longer. It will only be earlier, not later. If it turns out that I really can't do this, I will also contact the alliance leaders and friends to fully refund the rewards for this book. Then look at it... maybe open a small account, write a rebirth article, etc., as the end of the Internet writing career... I have the beginning of several rebirth articles in my hand, but life is short, and the career of writing online articles is It is undoubtedly shorter, and I originally wanted to try a different style and genre each time.
