There was a comment from a reader some time ago:
"I doubt the author has an outline?"
I felt really bad when I saw this comment because I really didn’t have an outline. (Referring to the pre-collapse three civilization stages in Volume 4)
Because this was my first time writing a novel, I didn’t save any manuscripts. I wrote them all on the spur of the moment.
Regarding the content of the fourth volume of Honkai Impact III, I think it is really below the standard. In order not to let down the readers who are still reading it, I decided...
Rewrite the plot about the second world, the civilization before the collapse (from Chapter 75 to the latest chapter).
No need to resubscribe, just refresh.
Let me first pick a few questions of my own.
1. Collapse of combat power
On the one hand, Yaoluo, as a memory envoy, is actually quite strong. Logically speaking, he can single-play all the Herrschers (such as restraint and corrosion) and the Herrscher of Finality in the meta-plot.
I personally pay more attention to logic. If the protagonist has this ability (referring to fighting against Honkai Impact) but does not do these things, I feel that there is something wrong with the character. So in the current plot, Yaoluo is running around all the time. It almost takes over all the tasks against the Herrscher, leaving almost no room for others to appear, and the plot is basically reduced to some kind of plot similar to a cool article. My personal sense is not very good, through data and subscriptions, and the reduction of comments , it can be seen that this part of the plot was unsuccessful. (The protagonist has beaten all the Herrschers, so why do we need pre-civilization?)
2. Personality issues
Although I am also a level 85 captain in Honkai Impact 3 and have completed all the plots, my understanding of the Land of the Past is still not very deep (I have not unlocked all the entries and articles). If the plot continues as it goes, according to the current situation Logically, with the Thirteen Heroes Chasing Fire, this situation (meaning that all fusion warriors are basically wiped out) is simply impossible to occur.
Of course I like the plot of 13 Yingjie very much, so I will write about this aspect. Because there are too few plots in Star Dome Railway now, I have to intersperse a few other MiHoYo worlds to buffer, but if this continues , not to mention readers, I can’t stand it myself, and the daily updates are very torturous.
For a charismatic character like 13 Ying Jie, I still need to polish it a bit. (I feel that what I write now is too white, and to a certain extent, it is a bit insulting to the character.)
3. Update question
Originally, as a new writer and this was my first time on the shelves, I actually wanted full attendance (1,500 yuan!). After all, in today’s market, who doesn’t like to make a little money? (The author has no income now, and is a college student.) But I decided to temporarily stop updating. I will rewrite the content of the fourth volume in the next seven days or so, and carefully ponder the outline, which will be about 30 chapters.
4. Style issues
For the fourth volume of the remake, I still plan to maintain the previous style, retain the original plot’s style of human struggle in the apocalypse, and show the glory of humanity.
Because I think the Paradise of the Past is something that happened in the past and is a kind of regretful beauty. We can witness the bravery, struggle, love and beauty of human beings in the past under the most severe circumstances.
Take Alicia for example, I guess there won’t be anyone who doesn’t like her (Love Gate!)
5. Aspects of change.
The protagonist's combat effectiveness must be reduced, but it should be done in a well-founded and reasonable way, and it will not abuse the protagonist.
Certain modifications need to be made regarding the protagonist's "door" ability. (Some readers reported that this ability is too buggy.) Only the function of traveling through time is retained, and it is treated as a patch.
This book also includes previous chapters. Any suggestions for modification, any dissatisfaction, and shortcomings can be put forward, and I will accept them humbly.
Please write in this paragraph: Suggestions for modification.
Finally, the only promise the author can make is that he will not be a eunuch.
After all, this is the first book, and no matter how poorly written it is, it must have an ending.
The next world should be returning to the main world.
Fairy Boat Alliance.
Finally, I wish everyone here that you can have a better life than in the novel.
Love you little authors.
