Strike while the iron is hot and write a summary.
If you want to ask me what my biggest feeling is right now, it would be: Oh my god! It's time to take a break.
but!
The second volume will still be updated tomorrow.
Author bacteria:......
The summary is to review the plot of the first volume, summarize experiences and lessons, and try to avoid making the same mistakes in the next volume.
The biggest lesson I learned from the first volume was that it was too long.
That's right, the first volume has written 400,000 words. A newbie has written 400,000 words. There is not much content in the first place, but it took so long to write.
If you are a great person, you will write wonderfully, but I am not, I am just a rookie. The follow-up subscriptions are dropping every day with an amazing momentum, let alone the average subscription.
I don’t even dare to say what the current subscription situation is.
It has been on the shelves for about a month. Everyone else is increasing more or less, but I am the only one who has been decreasing. Originally, my mentality was still very stable, but I couldn't withstand the continuous decline, and there were a few small bumps.
The plot of Mount Ouzang was severely missed, with more than 500 or 600 people reading it. After that, my performance fell into a sluggish state until now.
I'm afraid it will continue to be depressed in the future.
After it was put on the shelves, except for the first day, I did not ask for monthly tickets or subscriptions. Mainly because I thought the writing was not good enough, and I was embarrassed to ask for your support.
In fact, you already know your situation from the recommendation tickets, monthly tickets and rewards.
But I still want to thank the readers who have been subscribing. Thank you. It is you who make me feel that I am not bad enough.
In the summary, I actually have a lot to say, but I am afraid that I will talk too much about the previous plot, which will lead to spoilers and a drop in subscriptions. The summary I wrote earlier seems to have dissuaded some people. But the problem does exist, so it’s better to talk about it.
The introduction describes the hidden plot of the second creation. The story of the first volume is very simple, that is, Gu Yun Youchi + Jingshi Jiuzhu. When I first went through the plot, I felt that there was a lot of content that was not shown, so when I wrote it myself , just a small second creation.
For me, the greatest sense of accomplishment in writing a Genshin Impact fanfic is actually that you can remember the character of Quantai when you read the novel in the future, which makes me happy.
Talking about Quantai, as the BOSS of the first volume, he was not well portrayed.
I personally think that I should do three things well in the first volume, one is the villain's sense of oppression, the other is the heroine's design, and the last one is the upgrade mechanism.
I didn't do it well, and I will correct it in the next volume.
Quantai has been idle for a long time and has not appeared many times. Although there are many plots in the past that hint that it is related to Quantai, it is still not smooth enough.
In terms of the heroine design, I found that if the title involves Shen He, the subscription rate will obviously be higher. Do you really want to see Shen He? I laugh and cry. It is difficult to write aloof characters.
In terms of the upgrade mechanism, I feel that upgrading is a little cool, but there are actually not many flashpoints in the first volume.
I did my own calculations, and after four consecutive days of updates, I still owe four chapters. Then I paid back one chapter today, and there are still three chapters left, okay.
The analysis that follows is quite spoiler-y.
The story line of the first volume can be divided into returning to Liyue Port, the changes in Tianheng Mountain, the Chenuo Factory Incident, Aozang Mountain, Yanshang Tea House, Qingce Village, and Wuwangpo.
The original outline did not include the plots of Iwagami Tea House and Qingcezhuang. After the end of Mount Ozura, there was Muwanpo. At that time, the number of words was about 200,000 words. Muwanpo was the climax, which felt just right.
But as mentioned before, the outline has been changed.
For the next volume, my initial plan is to make the story shorter and more compact. It will definitely not be as lengthy as the first volume. The scenes in the second volume will mainly be Mondstadt, but it will not be like the first volume, only in one country.
Judging from the first volume, I wanted to write an epic and tragic story based on Genshin Impact. However, the first volume was messy. I will learn to change this in the second volume.
This is the first book I have signed and put on the shelves. I don’t know what its future will be. Based on the current situation, I think it is GG or it will slowly recover and the story will gradually become more exciting. I have no experience and cannot say for sure.
In short, let's take a look at the progress of the plot in the second volume. If you feel good about following it, please subscribe. The author has been very negative recently.
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