First of all, I would like to say sorry to the readers who have been able to continue reading so far. The story of the treasure thief group in Mount Ouzang is too much. Thank you very much for continuing to read, Smith Marseille! (Cat head crying.jpg)
The main purpose of writing this chapter summary is to summarize the reasons why the plot is stretched, learn lessons, and strive for progress.
The biggest reason is that there is a problem with the outline and the rhythm is out of order. According to the prediction, after the protagonist has dealt with the Cherno Factory, made enemies with the Fools, met Yelan and Ningguang, he will have to go through a small incident to lead to the new Liyue. The Hong Kong character buries the foreshadowing of going to Mount Ozura on the way.
But at that time, Shen He’s appearance had to be delayed. In order to keep readers interested in Shen He’s aunt, the author changed the plot and started the beta world line to postpone the appearance of a certain diligent cat. , just feel sorry for the civil engineering cat.
The problem is that the author did not deal with the outline issue in the later stage. The more he writes, the more difficult it becomes. It is like the Vietnam War. He was dragged into the quagmire and couldn't get out even if he wanted to. Oyster. (I can’t do it, my concubine)
After New Year's Eve, the author deeply realized everyone's dissatisfaction with the slow progress of the plot, but I was helpless and tried to speed up the plot.
However, there are a lot of things that need to be dealt with later. Unless the outline is uploaded, it will be difficult to solve them in a few chapters. There should always be some text filling between each plot node.
I don’t read the chapter anymore because I’m afraid of seeing words like watery, boring, rotten, etc.
But I continued to write, regardless of whether there was a climax or not. Even if it was said to be a chronicle, I would accept it, but I wanted to prove to everyone that I will not have an outline escape or a sudden eunuch in the future.
Of course, there’s nothing to be proud of if you don’t write well (Cat’s head cries.jpg)
During this period, I read a chapter by a reader who said that it really touched my heart. There were too many characters in the plot design of the Treasure Thieves in the Ozark Mountains, and I couldn’t handle them well. There were many things to consider, more or less. Let the rain and dew accumulate.
In the Alpha world line, the protagonist went to Mount Aozang alone. The plot was very flexible at that time. I even came up with Infernal Affairs. The appearance of Hun Tianba was not so hasty, and the same was true for Ling Bento, but that was from another world line. Something happened.
In addition to the problem with the outline, there is also the failure to handle the ratio of emotional lines to main lines.
Before Ah Hui was exposed, my original intention was to use the love between Ah Hui and Da Dangjia to promote the relationship between Shen He and Lin Ye. I also wrote about this before, maybe I wrote too much, which made the whole plot seem lengthy. Lessons learned, lessons learned Lessons (Cat Cat Holding Hands.jpg)
When I design the outline in the future, I will try to complete it in advance and work hard to stay on top of the topic.
Although there is a love line for Shen He, I can't keep writing about Shen He. It's unrealistic. It seems fake to put aside the facts and fall in love. I also need to advance the main line to introduce new changes in the environment, and then in the changing environment fall in love.
Originally I wanted to write the summary together with the acceptance speech, but after thinking about it I might as well write it in advance to give everyone an explanation.
I was not happy when I was writing about the Treasure Thieves in Ouzang Mountain. I felt that it was a bit deviated from the original intention of writing a Genshin Impact fan novel. The story of Liyue Monde's Rice Wife would be more interesting. I originally wanted to write a novel. An interesting novel that you can read in your spare time and be amused by it.
Every newcomer will make mistakes, and I was a little early. I can only comfort myself by saying that fortunately, the mistakes I made during the free period were not made after it was launched. After learning the lesson, the content I wrote after it was launched will be better than now, probably.
When I finish coding today's second chapter, Shen He will give me an explanation, and then I'll write a testimonial for the release. Yes, it will be on the shelves at 12 o'clock tomorrow. It will be released at a time when the plot is stretching my hips. I will also There is nothing much to say, just a few words to talk about the update issues that everyone is interested in, and then rush to the battlefield.
I didn’t catch up on my studies very well, and I didn’t miss Sanjiang, but it doesn’t matter. Oh, by the way, I will repay the chapter I owe on New Year’s Eve in the form of a free chapter, so you don’t have to worry about subscribing for the chapter you owe.
In general, my confidence is greatly reduced now, don’t wait, it will be fine in the future, eh! (Angel Cat cheers.jpg)
