Sorry, the short story in this copy is my attempt, and it seems to have failed now.
Judging from the story itself, I feel that the writing is okay, but it is obviously not suitable to be inserted at this place in the novel. One is that it is too long, and the other is that there is probably a problem with the story design from the beginning.
I originally prepared a few twists, but after writing about it, I found that the response was very bad, such as subscriptions and tickets, so I cut off the twists. The main reason was that there was a plot about Lu Mingfei's father, and there was a small mention in the front. Two sentences, but it’s not important now.
In addition, there was originally a plot in the back where Lu Mingfei became the master of eight million demons and ghosts. I think this title is quite cool.
Failure is not necessarily a bad thing. After all, as a newcomer, trying more possibilities is full of meaning in itself.
In fact, just from the perspective of storytelling, I feel that the writing of this copy should be better than that of Wu Sheng at the beginning. At that time, it felt like writing down everything in detail, but now I gradually understand the choices.
In addition, some prose-like sentences have also been removed.
Moreover, this copy is also my first attempt to write about emotions. I was very happy when I wrote it, but I don’t know how it will turn out.
Just like this Wu Sheng is my first time writing about combat, it is very green.
There are three more worlds, that is, three dungeons, and I will probably try to use 20,000 words to complete each dungeon, or think about other things, in short, to make up for the problems.
In addition, I hope I can insist on updating 8,000 times a day, and I also ask for your support. I will try my best to write an interesting story, not a knife, not a tragedy.
Love you summer cats, good night.
