Hot Spring Restaurant is considered a mid-range consumer restaurant in Dahu County, and Guo Zhonghan has been there several times before. It tastes authentic and is not very expensive, so it is not painful to treat guests like this.
It’s not too much for the other people. One meal only costs more than 700, which is less than 200 per capita!
As the saying goes, those who eat people are soft-mouthed and those who take advantage of them are short-handed! Early the next morning, Zhu Dalian showed Guo Zhonghan his revised manuscript.
As usual, Guo Zhonghan poured water for everyone, stretched his muscles, and began to work formally.
The first item is of course to read the manuscript.
He first took out his original manuscript, then put aside the new manuscript that Zhu Dalian had revised for him, and compared it section by section.
There were quite a lot of manuscripts, but after the comparison, I was relieved and didn’t suffer too much!
The new manuscript has been revised by almost one-fifth compared to the old manuscript, and all of them were revised according to Zhao Nanshan's wishes. At the beginning, Guo Zhonghan thought that in order to follow Zhao Nanshan's model, at least one-third must be changed!
However, Guo Zhonghan is still a little ashamed. In some places, he really did not understand the spirit of the leadership's instructions. He was too careless! Guo Zhonghan learned from the painful experience and secretly made up his mind to keep the leadership's requirements in mind in the future and conscientiously implement them into specific actions. Don't be careless! Now as a new leader, I may have a gentle attitude, but if I continue to be like this for a long time, will the leader have a question mark in his mind? Should such a person be entrusted with important responsibilities?
Even if you have a backer, you always rely on others. You can get promoted for a while, but not for a lifetime! It is better to seek help from others than from yourself.
Guo Zhonghan continued to write, and from time to time he went to ask Zhu Dalian for his opinions! At this time, Wang Yun was not happy. She pouted and asked if she looked down on her. She shouted that she wanted to give Guo Zhonghan advice, which made everyone laugh.
What a pistachio.
In the afternoon, Guo Zhonghan showed Zhao Nanshan the old and new ones, and pointed out some of the traces written by Zhu Dalian. Zhao Nanshan took a general look, nodded and said with a smile: "Not bad, Xiao Guo, your understanding is good, you can understand it in just one point! Okay, then let me go first, and I will take a closer look when I have time."
However, Guo Zhonghan still has some self-awareness and knows that writing manuscripts is not his strength. After returning to the office, when Zhu Dalian was free, he came over, took out the Chinese that he had prepared and stuffed it into Zhu Dalian's hands, and said with a smile: "Brother Dalian, we have gone through this battle, and we have a thorough understanding of writing materials." It’s really not my specialty, my writing is careless! You are an expert in this field, and I want to ask you for advice.”
"Haha, you kid, just ask for advice. Why are you so polite!"
Brother Zhu Dalian smiled and accepted it, took a slow sip of water, and then said: "Then I won't be polite. Writing manuscripts and writing materials does not happen overnight, it has to be accumulated over time! Don't It seems that I have been writing for a long time, and there are many shortcomings. Now you want to ask me for advice, haha, I am still a little ashamed. In this way, let’s discuss it together and learn from each other! In fact, let’s write this, for example, draft it for the leaders For some of their speeches, the first step is for us to be familiar with the specific situation. If the situation is unclear, we will have no idea. What should we do? Then we have to make it up. The leader will take a look at what he has written. It’s just empty and unreliable! It’s not targeted.”
Seeing Guo Zhonghan listening carefully, Zhu Dalian, who was a teacher, was greatly satisfied. He cleared his throat and continued: "Also, we must have our own opinions and clear thinking, so that what we write can be more in line with the leadership." After careful consideration, everyone agrees. Otherwise, the leader will lose face and the leader will not be angry! Another thing is that we must set the tone from the beginning, that is, specific actions, without methods and specific requirements... …”
Zhu Dalian kept talking, and even Sister Xu and Wang Yun came over.
However, these two women are not just listeners, but troublemakers. Sister Xu is trying to find a partner for Guo Zhonghan, and Wang Yun blinks at Guo Zhonghan from time to time, obviously to distract him, making Guo Zhonghan dumbfounded.
But in the end Guo Zhonghan still resisted the disturbance from the outside world. After Zhu Dalian finished speaking, Guo Zhonghan lamented: "Damn, this class is bigger than my high school English teacher. I want it endlessly!"
The three of them also laughed after hearing this.
"Yes, I came here more than a year before you, and I often have to write materials. But until now, I am not humble enough to say that we have just scratched the surface. There is a lot of knowledge here!"
Wang Yun, this girl, stopped causing trouble at this time and spoke seriously.
Zhu Dalian nodded and continued: "Yes, Wang Yun is right! For example, if our leaders want to speak impromptu, many of them must pay attention to these points: The first important thing is to make it popular! Those online videos, Speeches are generally transmitted through human hearing and vision. Therefore, if we want the audience below to hear clearly and understand, the language must be easy to understand. Don't use those strange, obscure words and terms. .The second is smoothness, which means that the words must be worded to the end, the language is smooth, the speaker can read it catchy, and the audience can listen to it. We cannot use those words that may make sense in words, but in reading Words that are difficult to pronounce and sound awkward! Just like some ancient words and phrases, although sometimes they seem high-minded, after all, we are not Cao Zhi, so this goes against our original intention, doesn’t it?. Third, it is short and concise, and it was written by us After something has to express its meaning clearly, try to be as brief and concise as possible..."
As long as you are serious, time will pass quickly until you get off work, and Guo Zhonghan can't waste Zhu Dalian's time anymore. However, Zhu Dalian was flourishing in his art and promised Guo Zhonghan that he would discuss it again when he had time.
"Guo Zhonghan, it turns out you work here!"
Going downstairs, Guo Zhonghan was about to leave the compound and walk to the bus stop, when a woman's voice came from afar.
Guo Zhonghan looked around and saw that it was Zhou Datong's bold wife Sun Xiaoxiao.
Wang Yun, who was walking with Guo Zhonghan, looked at Sun Xiaoxiao in the distance, then gave Guo Zhonghan a meaningful look, and said with a smile: "Not bad, I hid it deeply enough, just now Sister Xu wanted to find a girlfriend for you. Haha! Then I won’t disturb you anymore, I’m leaving, see you tomorrow.”
After saying that, without waiting for Guo Zhonghan to defend herself, she walked towards the parking lot. She drove a small white BMW.
Sun Xiaoxiao walked closer, looked at the courtyard behind Guo Zhonghan, and said with a smile: "Yes, you work here. I want to go in, but it's a pity that I can't."
Guo Zhonghan said in his heart that if he hadn't been for Ge Yongxian, he wouldn't have known that he was coming in the year of the monkey. Seeing her smiling face, he said with a smile: "Haha, why are you so happy?"
