As Ye Ning's words came out, the atmosphere in the office instantly became tense.
Wu Yaqiu raised his eyebrows directly.
She was talking about questions, not opinions.
The difference between one word and one word makes a world of difference.
Li Xiao's expression became even more serious, and his eyes looking at Ye Ning were filled with displeasure.
"Then tell me what's wrong with our script!"
When she mentioned the word "we", she deliberately increased her voice.
This script took two years from conception to creation. It is absolutely not the turn of an outsider who does not know the industry to make irresponsible remarks.
Among the four people, only Zhang Guozhu perked up his ears and waited particularly seriously.
Ye Ning didn't care at all about the reactions of Wu Yaqiu and Li Xiao, and cleared his throat, "First of all, the script is not very conflicting. The protagonist is an orphan, wandering around, and finally being adopted by a busking group, learning martial arts and becoming a generation Grandmaster. What you want to highlight is the protagonist's misery in the early stage and his strength in the later stage, but this setting is actually very thin and difficult to resonate with the audience."
Wu Yaqiu frowned. She originally thought that Ye Ning was just making random nonsense, but after hearing what she said, she actually felt that it made some sense.
Li Xiao immediately retorted emotionally: "The identity of the protagonist is brought to the general public, why can't it resonate with the audience? I think you are too picky."
"If an orphan in reality is either adopted by an ordinary family, or she will most likely live on the streets, who will happen to be adopted by a busking group? And as I say bluntly, if this busking group can cultivate a generation of master-like figures, it will also You won't just be performing on the street. Don't you think this setting is actually problematic?" Ye Ning expressed his opinion calmly.
Li Xiao was a little frustrated, "Who said that a performing arts troupe can't cultivate a generation of masters? Can't the protagonist be gifted himself?"
"Okay. Then he is self-taught. Such a setting is not impossible. But in the early plot, in order to highlight his hard work and hard work, you made him too ordinary. A genius can only be a genius from the beginning. Instead of being ordinary in the early stage and suddenly becoming a genius one day. Isn’t this too fragmented?”
Ye Ning's analysis hit the nail on the head.
Li Xiao's face turned red, his neck thickened, and he was speechless for a moment.
Ye Ning was not trying to argue with her, but continued: "In addition to the growth of the protagonist, the selling point of this movie is also to show our martial arts. The fighting scenes in it are indeed exciting, and you can tell A lot of research has been done in this area. But it is too complicated. How can a protagonist who grew up in a busking troupe know many different types of martial arts? Instead of doing this hodgepodge to attract attention, it is better to be proficient in one."
Wu Yaqiu's face became more serious, and Zhang Guozhu had already begun to record Ye Ning's opinions.
The script was co-written by She Hongming and Li Xiao, and both of them looked very ugly at this time.
After all, no one can accept that the work they have worked so hard on is criticized as worthless.
"Finally, let's talk about the emotional line in the script. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a bit inexplicable. They fall in love at first sight and identify each other. They are committed to each other and grow old together. The setting seems touching. But it is very flat and also It’s so smooth. It’s so smooth that the heroine’s existence is completely gone. The heroine becomes purely an embellishment for the male protagonist, getting married for the sake of getting married. If that’s the case, it’s better not to have anything at all.”
Ye Ning finally paused at this point, picked up the tea cup in front of him and drank to moisten his throat.
In fact, there are many problems besides these.
For example, there are not enough twists, not enough passion, and the plot is thin. These are all areas that need improvement.
But now that she proposed it all at once, I'm afraid they wouldn't be able to accept it, so she thoughtfully kept it first and then slowly improved it.
As her voice fell, the entire office fell into deathly silence.
Originally, they had to spend the remaining month to perfect the plot of the script, but now what Ye Ning said was almost equivalent to negating the entire script. How could they continue?
And the most terrifying thing is that even Wu Yaqiu can't refute the questions raised by Ye Ning.
I originally thought that Ye Ning was just here to make up the numbers, but I didn't expect that he would throw out such a king bomb on the first day.
All ambitions were extinguished by her before they could be unleashed.
"Ahem." I don't know how much time had passed before Zhang Guozhu's cough broke the stiffness. "Ye Ning spoke more bluntly, but his opinions still need to be taken seriously. Since there are some unreasonable things, just modify them. Fortunately, we have time now. It should still be too late.”
"How to modify it? According to what she said, if you change the settings, change the love line, and change the main plot, wouldn't that be equivalent to starting over again?" She Hongming couldn't hold his breath, his voice was low and depressed.
What he said was true. If everything was overturned, it would mean that all their efforts in the past two years were in vain.
Ye Ning said: "If you want a good script, it's not impossible to start over."
It's not that she is very strong in this area, but that as someone who has watched too many excellent films and various themes, when faced with the scripts of this era, she already has a height that ordinary people cannot reach.
Li Xiao couldn't control his anger and scolded sternly: "Comrade Ye Ning, we allowed you to join to improve the script, not to overthrow it. And you have never created a script before, and you don't understand what script creation is at all. I can tell you responsibly that our script is excellent, and you can’t deny it with just a few words."
Ye Ning didn't expect such a big reaction from them and frowned slightly.
Her starting point was also to make the script better, but it seemed that they couldn't accept it.
If this is the case, it will be really difficult to carry out the follow-up work.
"Director Wu, what do you say?"
She knew that Wu Yaqiu had the power of life and death in the script. If he thought the same as She Hongming and Li Xiao, and believed that there was no problem with the current script, then her job would be over.
Wu Yaqiu's cheeks were tense, his expression extremely serious, his eyes lingering on Ye Ning and Li Xiao.
Now that there is such a serious conflict between the two parties, he needs to calm down and make a judgment.
"Let's go here today. I will seriously consider these opinions put forward by Comrade Ye Ning."
Ye Ning stared at Wu Yaqiu for two seconds, then stood up calmly.
"Okay, then I'll go back first."
Some things no longer need to be said clearly.
As Ye Ning left, Li Xiao could no longer control his disdain, "Director Wu, she is just a layman, we don't need to listen to her opinion at all."
