The passage from chapter sixty-six to chapter seventy-two is very well written.
The author also admitted this.
Today’s third update is to make up for my mistakes!
As for the recent plot...
But let’s talk about the reasons.
At the beginning, when I saw the chapter about "Boomerang", the author saw a comment that the game was too watery. The author wondered whether it was really watery, and then wanted to change the writing method.
As I said before, just running around in the palace without any plot support.
I'm worried that this book won't be printed.
In addition, the protagonist of this book is congenitally young, and it starts as a father and son.
There are even fewer such achievements.
Especially for a novice like the author, who has no support from readers and no early data. You can also see from the author's message at the end of the previous chapter that when it was 20,000 to 30,000 words, this book really wanted to be a eunuch... This It's not a way of writing that I'm familiar with.
But at that time, there were more than a dozen readers chasing it, so I gritted my teeth and wrote it down.
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Let’s talk about the plot.
What the author wants to write is to combine theory with practice based on the plot that happened during the Ming Dynasty! The plot also needs to have twists and turns, and it needs to be exciting!
In fact, the previous ones are all in succession...
Said it before.
The national policies of the Ming Dynasty that we later generations find unbelievable were actually limited by the environment at the time. Zhu Yuanzhang could only come up with what was in line with the background of that era...
And these recent chapters.
In fact, it is what I want to write about "what happened on the ground in the Ming Dynasty".
This kind of writing will make what the protagonist says not just empty talk, but an experience combined with the plot that will make people interested in reading.
At the same time... the "real situation" in the outside world just corresponds to the game the protagonist plays in the palace.
But the author did not expect that the effect of writing would be the sound of water, and then he would read like crazy...!
To summarize the error points:
1. The writing is really good. I always want to set the stage and create a "thundering" effect in the following chapters.
But the effect is obvious, it's very sexy when you play it off!
The best way is to condense the plot of these seven or eight chapters into three or four chapters. In this way, the effect should be very good. But once the chapters are streamlined, it will seem rushed... This is still the reason.
2. The reason for updating is that only two chapters can be updated a day. As a result, book friends who are following up will look like "an old lady has diarrhea" every time, as one reader said, smelly and long, hahaha... I saw this at the time The comments were hilarious.
If I can update more in a day, I think I will be able to get into the mood quickly during the writing process, and then finish these plots in one wave, and maybe it will have good results.
But in the end, when I enter the state every day, I will think about the previous ones and always add some new things, such as the conversation between Su Xian and Zhu Xiongying and other children in the restaurant about exchanging silver for treasure banknotes. You will also meet them later.
For example, Zhang Guance and Guo Hanwen's plan will be used later.
There are many similar plots. With two chapters in one day, it seems that the main plot has not advanced at all. Instead, there are waves of small plots. Readers can’t understand what is going on, so they criticize!
But give me a chance to explain:
The author is not that cool yet and deliberately goes out of his way.
In fact, after seeing the water, I tried my best to remedy the situation. I quickly deleted the four or five plots I had written, and immediately condensed them again.
But there is nothing we can do about the previous plot, and the effect is getting worse and worse...
First thought.
Actually it is:
The main line advances, divides the line, divides the line, divides the line - combines, and then looks at my grass, this is the effect of playing like this.
But I really didn’t expect that the effect would be a seller’s show and a buyer’s show.
I can continue writing like this - oh, how can I divide the plot? ——What the hell, why are you writing about Su Guiyuan’s promotion banquet again? What’s in the water? Continue the water. Still in the water. I won’t read it. Author, you are so bad at attracting people to read in the free period. It’s okay to put it on the shelves. Just throw it away on the bookshelf and keep it, and read it whenever you think of it...
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As you can see above, this is probably the most criticized episode recently.
Actually.
Starting from the beginning of this book, the most criticized voices are that it is long-winded and a bit watery... The rest of the comments are basically okay, and the author will smile when he sees something interesting.
Let’s summarize this book again!
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There are only two points that really make this book miss a lot of reading.
The first one is what I said before. After the Kongyin case was over, the plot of Su Guiyuan's plan for Guozixue was missing a lot.
Reason: Readers like to see the protagonist pretending to be cool and shocking Lao Zhu, rather than Su Guiyuan, a local man, planning for his son, because it seems that apart from a father being good to his children, there seems to be nothing worth reading...
The two-to-one follow-up ratio in the early stage turned into a four-to-one ratio here.
The second plot, just mentioned, also lost a lot...
The author is out of his element, so there is nothing to complain about!
Analyzing it, the time period between two missed readings happened to be the key nodes of 100,000 words and 200,000 words.
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Summary and reflection:
Again, if the author is not an idiot, he would not deliberately list this point to spoil the plot at the most critical time.
At the beginning of this book, almost no one read it, then there were so many readers, and then Sanjiang, the author saw the growth step by step, and the two twists and turns.
Each chapter has more than 3,000 words, and some chapters are like "old lady diarrhea", which the author also admits.
But whether you believe it or not, the author is really writing well, but many things are like this. Because the author knows how to write the subsequent plot, he has to bury some foreshadowing, but when it comes to the readers, he just doesn’t push the plot and is hard on the water. The problem.
Reflection:
In the future, similar writing methods will never be used again unless the day's explosion is completed all at once.
You can't suffer twice. There were problems with these two plot points before it was released, and the author also deeply reflected on it.
Avoid water! Resolutely avoid water!
original.
The author still has high hopes, but this recent plot makes me want to slap myself twice!
I’ve lost so much reading...it’s all a lesson!
Let’s talk about the expectations and future of this book.
The main plot of this book is actually very long.
There are two main lines, one is Su Guiyuan's road to promotion.
Su Guiyuan's character design is based on reading the sages' articles and having some revenge in his heart, but he has gradually given up on it during his five years of school inspection, and then he devoted himself to the character of a good person for his children.
In the later stage, through the plot, he will gradually regain the great aspirations he made when he was studying when he was young, and then how much ability and responsibility he has.
Why use the character Su Guiyuan?
Because the protagonist is a time traveler, the current environment of Ming Dynasty needs a current person to witness, correct and implement it!
He is more like a person who gradually embodies the protagonist's thoughts.
Let’s talk about the protagonist...
The protagonist of this book will definitely grow up.
He was just like a man who reached a high point and then interacted with the royal family. He hoped that his father would become a dragon. At the critical moment, he recovered his disadvantages by chance, and even exchanged his disadvantages for advantages!
Of course, he will also kill decisively.
The protagonist will definitely grow up later on.
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The early stage has 200,000 words. Everyone likes the plot the most, and I know that too.
The protagonist goes through Zhu Xiongying to fight against Lao Zhu... This kind of writing is also fun, and in the future, this aspect will basically be used.
If the water is as bad as it has been recently, it will definitely be impossible.
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Let’s talk about Goldfinger, same as mentioned before.
The golden finger at the beginning of this book was actually not set up by the author for the plot, but for the readers to continue reading. Otherwise, the protagonist would naturally be in a weak position.
This kind of writing is not popular nowadays.
So the golden finger is more like a layer of protection for the protagonist...
In fact, for the last dozen or so pictures, the second entry could have appeared, but I was afraid of violating the rules, so I never added it.
The establishment of this golden finger must not be too strong to make readers feel like they are jumping out of the plot. For example, it is obviously a funny historical article, but it must be written about something that is indestructible.
The best setting is the same as Tong Yan Wuji. If you say it is useful, it is really useful. If you say it is useless, then it is really useless.
Some of the inherent characteristics of this age group.
Let’s talk about the protagonist’s character.
Because of his young age, the protagonist's character is like that of most children, in a state where everything can be affected.
The setting of this book is also that he is a child who was born in the Ming Dynasty and happened to have memories of later generations, but his mind was not affected and was consistent with his age.
So sometimes he will be out of touch, playful, bragging, quarrelsome with others, youthful and energetic... In short, the protagonist will have all the characteristics of a child.
As you grow up, your personality should gradually become finalized.
This makes it more realistic.
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Most of the problems that have arisen recently can be said.
This plot is about to come to an end.
It just so happens that it will be on the shelves tomorrow.
There are about 220,000 plots in the early stage, and the writing method has basically been finalized.
Whether it can produce results depends on whether it is a mule or a horse.
Please make your first order...
The author has to say it again... whether you believe it or not, these recent plots are actually more difficult to write than the previous ones, because they are really foreshadowing, as well as the transition of various emotions and the closure of the plot...
It’s all after it’s put on the shelves.
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It will be available at 12 noon tomorrow.
I won’t say any more about other sensational words, including the changes in my heart in the past few days, and the need to eat while writing a book.
Actual action, three updates today, including this speech explaining the plot, there are about 12,000 words... Please order first!
The author knows very well: the updates in recent days will definitely greatly reduce the initial prediction results.
But the author still hopes that this book will have good results.
Let's see again tomorrow...
Also calculate how many readers have been lost recently.
Alas, it originally had more than 200,000 words, but compared with reading it, it was four to one.
learn a lesson!
thank you all!
