Write before finishing

Style: Heros Author: Yun Shan QingWords: 1122Update Time: 24/01/19 08:29:52
Yesterday’s launch results were disastrous.

The first order was 350, and the average order was even more appalling.

There are many friends who come to make initial reservations, but it should actually be less.

This is a subscription for 12,000 collections.

It can only be described as a hemorrhage.

There may be many friends who have read the book but have not read it, but this may be very vague.

You can’t attract people even if it’s free, so why do you expect people to pay to watch it?

In fact, you can get a glimpse of today's results from the usual data, but I don't believe in evil, and the result is that I was severely slapped in the face by reality.

What are the problems with this book? I thought about it and made the following summary:

1. The character design is too rough. Deliberately pursuing identity conflicts, but ignoring many things, the result is that the character is as flat as a piece of paper, and the motivations and reasons are unclear, which does not match the identity or experience. As a result, the sense of immersion is extremely poor, and there is no sense of anything I do. The characters in the previous game are stronger than the protagonist even when they appear.

2. Unhappy. This is the biggest problem. I want to avoid routines too much, and as a result, the plot has insufficient tension and can be said to be as bland as water. When I was writing about cities, I thought the routines I was familiar with were disgusting, but in the end I realized it was better to write about routines. I remember my former editor told me not to think that routines are rubbish. Without routines, it would be even more rubbish and less down-to-earth. Now it turns out that this is indeed the case, and it can be regarded as a practical practice of the importance of this sentence.

3. Talk too much. Due to the seamless opening of the book, the sharp momentum is missing, and the writing is full of water, making people drowsy.

4. Goldfinger. This is also a big problem. The protagonist is already a protector of the devil, which is a golden finger in itself. As a result, a heaven-sacrificial talisman was arranged to come in, causing the protagonist to lose his sophisticated aura and act like a cute newbie. new. Coupled with the unreasonableness of entering the Tianlao plot for filming, the conflict became more intense. The protagonist kills people to sacrifice to heaven, but when he ends up in prison, he puts on shackles and dances. In addition, without the rhythmic plot in the routine, it becomes more and more useless.

5. The opening plot setting. Many readers could see that it was borrowed from Xiuchundao, which was originally intended to be a stepping stone. As a result, many new readers did not buy it and felt that they were plagiarizing and did not bother to look back.

The above five points are the biggest reasons for being discouraged.

Writing a book is a job that uses your brain. Be careful of arrogance and impetuosity, and be calm. In the past, I did not believe in evil and always sought speed and urgency, which resulted in me not putting in enough effort and making frequent mistakes. Fortunately, if you realize it, you can avoid it in the next book.

This is the end of this book. I really can’t write it any more.

After all, talking about dreams without talking about income is like being a rogue. As a person in the financial industry, the author believes in this sentence.

As for the misfortunes, they won't come. They have to recognize their food and stand at attention when they are beaten.

All of this was caused by me being too impatient, and there was no point in being miserable.

Friends who agree, you can wait until the new book is released to read it.

Friends who do not recognize each other have a long journey, so each of them should cherish each other. Thank you all for your company.

Finally, I would like to thank everyone for their first order and friends such as Bao Bao, Guan Guan, and Yi Ru Chang for their rewards and support. It was me who failed to live up to expectations and failed to live up to everyone’s expectations.

If you see this and want to scold me, just scold me. It was my problem that caused all this.

You should admit your mistakes and stand up straight after being beaten.

This book will be completed in a few days, so that investors can get back some of their losses.

As for the new book, it may take a few days. Now that I have the basic idea, I will work on it with my heart. I will send a notice when the time comes.

That's it.

Thank you everyone.

I wish you all to get rich soon.