I received a comment saying that I am watery.
This is normal. After all, many readers say that I am stupid.
But this time it's different.
He pointed out my problem to the point.
"There's too much explanation in the text."
It dawned on me.
What is written is a story, not an explanation, and the setting should be shown from the story, not told.
I don't know when I walked into this misunderstanding, but I was in the fog and couldn't see the truth.
Readers who can insist on reading this are either really hungry for books, or they have some inexplicable expectations for this book, and some are just for pure entertainment.
But no matter what, Fat Orange is here to apologize to everyone.
I am a new writer with little experience, so I will inevitably make some mistakes. I am also very happy that readers can correct my mistakes and let me go on the right path without deviating from the original trajectory.
(Critical trolls, don’t get involved!)
The author and the reader themselves complement each other and are an independent and unified whole.
Thank you very much to this reader this time.
In the following stories, I will try to change this way of writing, tell as many stories as possible, and integrate explanations into the stories instead of spending a lot of pen and ink on special writing.
In the early stages, due to changes in writing methods, there may be situations where the writing is not smooth, and some plots are unclear. However, these are normal phenomena. I hope readers will bear with me.
I have said from the beginning that whether this book is popular and whether it makes money are secondary issues. What I want is to put aside the old Jiangnan thieves and put an end to my youth.
Of course I won't say I don't want to make money, because that would be stupid.
But this is not the main purpose.
Write a story that belongs to my dragon clan and a story that belongs to Gu Bei.
Therefore, the protagonist of this book is not Lu Mingfei, who has traveled back from various worlds, but Gu Bei.
To a certain extent, Gu Bei represents my imagination of that time, that world, and that story.
So I will definitely tell this story to the end.
To this end, I need continuous progress and continuous learning.
Now that I have the support of readers, I have more motivation to persevere.
I cannot guarantee that there will be a gorgeous sea of flowers at the end of the road, but thank you for accompanying me to witness the bumps and thorns along the way.
——Comes from a fat orange who always wants to be fresh and procrastinate.
Why is the shengxiao silent?
