New book released~

Style: Gaming Author: Achai's hatchetWords: 928Update Time: 24/01/19 03:23:19
"I am coveted by a female subordinate and I just want to play games"

The background is in Tokyo, and I mainly write slow-paced daily articles about games. Anyone who is interested can check it out.

In addition, because the chapters of the cut "Age of Behemoths" cannot be published, I specifically mention it here.

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Dear friends, please stop giving rewards and votes for the book "Age of Behemoths". It makes me feel really guilty~~~

Come back and continue writing, if you don’t have enough to eat; just say no, there are no recommendation votes...

Actually, to be honest, I still want to write about this subject, but for practical reasons.

Not only did I not have enough to eat, but the main reason was that I felt that my own abilities could not support the plot I imagined. On Redwood Island, I actually wanted to write about the emotional exchange between Tang Jingyan and Meng Yu in life and death, but I did not fully write it out. .

In fact, in my conception, after the battle with Meteor City in the future, the protagonist will die together with the chaebol. Then Meng Yu will use his power to tattoo Tang Jingyan on his back at the cost of his life, and then carry Tang Jingyan's corpse in the coffin to find a way to rescue him.

Before that, Meng Yu and Tang Jingyan need to have a deeper relationship, but I feel that my writing skills are not yet up to it...

The emotional writing was too rough, or in other words, the Redwood Island incident seemed a bit abrupt and disconnected, and after this incident, the entire horizon was enlarged, and it would be a little strange to come back to write about daily life.

This is also because my grasp of the plot is not strong enough.

Then there are Wang Shiqing and Lin Xueli. These two female characters, like Meng Yu, will continue to play a role in my conception until the later stages, and they are still key roles in revealing Tang Jingyan's life experience. However, my early arrangements for them were too much. It's simple and crude, just show up at home.

The characters have appeared, but apart from their figures, it feels like their personalities have not been established at all, and it is basically impossible to have their plot in the early stages.

In fact, because they are too strong, staying in Meteor City will affect the plot of the protagonist, so we can only find reasons for them to leave Meteor City and add the new character Meng Xiangxiang.

At once...

My conclusion is that this book is not unfair, but I still want to write about this kind of subject matter, but now I can't write this kind of subject matter well.

The daily routine must be written well, the climax must be written well, the character must be established, and the worldview must be perfect...

All this is because I have only written one football article, and it was in the early stages~~~~

I will definitely still write about this subject in the future, but for now this is all I can do.

To be honest, it's actually quite uncomfortable. After this book was cut, several big guys have been giving me rewards and votes, but I...

Hey, I won’t worry about it anyway.

I’ll come back and write this kind of thing after I’ve saved enough money for at least half a year to not worry about food and drinks.

Finally~~The picture shows the link~

At present, a new book has been published, "I Just Want to Play Games, Being Coveted by a Female Subordinate", which is a daily article about playing games in Tokyo. If there are big guys who still want to read the book I wrote, you can read this book.