I'm taking a day off today to sort out my outline (the first time I'm taking a day off this month).
I have read all the suggestions and comments from everyone.
The main problem is that the plot fell a bit flat after the World Cup, and then there were two female protagonists (some people liked it and some didn't).
Well, how should I put it?
The main reason is that I have little experience. This is my second book with 500,000 words and the first one with 1 million words.
My book didn't pass the initial internal submission and was published directly, so I didn't write too much detail in the outline at that time. I thought I couldn't get a contract for 100,000 words, so I cut it off.
My mentality was not good, so I wrote whatever came to mind at the time.
I felt that I must fall in love when studying, and then I got Keli. Then when I was writing the Japan Hope Cup chapter, I happened to be watching Slam Dunk, [Holy shit, Haruko Akagi is so good], and then I got Tsukichi Kaoru.
At the beginning, I identified the two female protagonists, but I had no idea how the relationship would develop later on. Moreover, when there was a group in the early days, some old readers should know that what I originally thought was that Chen Mo would develop in Arsenal. After that, he went to Manchester City to join Guardiola, and then there were so many dramas about Guardiola in his early years.
But later I found that the plot of the transfer did not match Chen Mo's character, nor did it match Wenger's character.
Although Wenger competes for fourth place every year, he is definitely not the kind of coach who is willing to become a petri dish for a wealthy club, and although he has been selling the captain, I actually feel from the information that he is a person who is very emotional and very committed. Real Madrid poached him twice, and even Ferguson invited him to coach Manchester United, but Wenger never left Arsenal, which was heavily in debt.
So I don't think he will sell Chen Mo.
Wenger was unwilling to sell, but Chen Mo insisted on leaving, not to mention that this was a minor act.
If he leaves because he cannot win the championship because of the team configuration, then Chen Mo will no longer be Chen Mo, and he will not be worthy of becoming the king of an era.
But this way~~~
The exciting point of the transfer, this plot that can bring great freshness, can be regarded as being suppressed by myself. So the plot after the World Cup was actually a bit confusing for me when I wrote it.
Well, so much to say~
Thank you for your willingness to see this all the time. Finally~~~Thank you!
I will work hard starting tomorrow!
