With reference to the original work of Earth World and the adapted TV series and movies, Xu Qingru then used her "expert-level" writing skills to write the beginning of it, which can be said to be extremely smooth and silky.
She did not use this work to gain literary and artistic value, but to pursue commercial results and make it enjoyable and enjoyable for readers. It can be said that she wrote it without any worries, and she definitely returned to her original intention as a refreshing writer.
As for whether after the nesting is completed, whether to directly serve hard dishes such as "Your Lie in April" or "Life is Long and Hate Water", or whether to be more steady and continue the layout, it all depends on Xu Qingru's mood.
Xu Qingru finally discovered that she gained literary and artistic value through works such as music, songs, etc. Over time, the secret will always be exposed one day, but if she uses the game as a carrier to attack and cause depression, she can hide it deeper.
In the plots of some games in the earth world, the knives are shot one after another, but the players have not delved into which shit-feeding screenwriter is leading all of this.
In this way, Xu Qingru felt that the players seemed to be much easier to fool than the readers, and the game's scripters and screenwriters were not as hateful as the author.
The topic comes back to the new work that Xu Qingru is writing. The beginning of it is very fast-paced, and it is not as literary as Second Five. Instead, it seems very down-to-earth and full of life, making readers feel more involved. .
The rough plot at the beginning is like this——
In the large-scale martial arts MMO online game "Dream Voyage in Jianghu", Zhen Shui Wuxiang and Lu Weiwei, who were dressed in red, worked together to spawn monsters. The monster suddenly died and dropped a spell-defying necklace, which was the treasure that Nini, the God of Thunder, dreamed of. For this treasure, Nini agreed to a fight at an inn outside Jinling City at 5pm on behalf of Weiwei.
Zhen Shui Wu Xiang and Lu Wei Wei Wei are a heroic couple in the game, but after being married for more than half a year, Wei Wei still refers to them as "Zhen Shui", and there is no intimacy like other couples in the game.
This day Tianzhenshui asked Weiwei if he was studying in university in the imperial capital. He said that he was also in the Imperial City and wanted to ask Weiwei to meet offline for dinner. Bei, who was in front of the computer, hesitated slightly, but still rejected Zhenshui. She said that as long as everyone has fun in the game, it would be fine.
Zhen Shui refused to give up and wanted to ask Weiwei to take a look at the photos, but suddenly the power went out in the dormitory. It turned out that Erxi was cooking noodles on the electric stove and tripped the electric meter.
When Weiwei repaired the circuit and tried to turn on the computer, she realized that the computer was broken. Erxi beside her told her guiltily that she accidentally dropped her computer when she borrowed it yesterday. Well, now the computer is broken. In the game He suddenly disappeared. Zhen Shui Wu Xiang must have thought that he had a guilty conscience.
Thinking about the martial arts competition scheduled for the evening, Weiwei decided to drag Erxi along with her to buy a motherboard and repair the computer herself. Passing by the school bulletin board, she saw everyone watching the announcement of the basketball game between the Computer Department and the Biochemistry Department. Weiwei's mind A tall, handsome and unrestrained figure emerged.
That was Xiao Nai, a fourth-year computer science student known as Xiao Dashen. Thinking that Xiao Dashen, the heart and soul of the department’s basketball team, would definitely come back to compete in such an important competition. The two girls couldn’t help but get excited and secretly decided to advance early on the day of the competition. An hour to grab a vantage point.
Bei Weiwei and Erxi came to the digital store and happened to meet the school beauty Meng Yiran who was buying memory sticks. Weiwei saw at a glance that the boss was selling second-hand memory sticks as if they were new ones. After buying the article, he also said that it is natural for the boss to open a store to make money. Er was overjoyed and insulted Meng Yiran, but Weiwei didn't care.
Weiwei came to the Internet cafe and entered the game on time. She used her skillful gestures to flexibly control the mouse and used various skills to the extreme. She won the duel in a short time. Immediately, the world channel started talking, and everyone said that Weiwei was worthy of being the only woman on the duel list. Player, with her level, she is only ranked sixth. The legendary number one Yixiao Naihe must be so amazing. The opponent is unwilling to lose and invites Weiwei to try again.
In the inner room of the Internet cafe, Xiao Nai was playing Go with his uncle and discussing his career direction after graduation. His uncle heard that Xiao Nai wanted to start his own company and wanted to give him the Internet cafe as an office space, but Xiao Nai decisively refused. He yearned for it even more. The joy of building something from scratch.
When Xiao Nai left the Internet cafe, he happened to pass by Bei Weiwei. Seeing Weiwei's concentration and fingers flying, Xiao Nai suddenly felt attracted.
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This beginning mainly explains the character of the heroine and points out her status as a master in the game.
At the same time, the male protagonist also appeared directly. When others did not know that "Luwei Weiwei" was a super beauty in reality, but thought she was a "shemale", the male protagonist Xiao Nai happened to watch her in an Internet cafe. When Bei Weiwei used the account "Luwei Weiwei", he knew the true identity of "Luwei Weiwei".
Similarly, he was also attracted by Bei Weiwei's very good gaming skills. Since he and Bei Weiwei were in the same school, he naturally knew that Bei Weiwei was in the school and was a computer science student. A very low-key academic. If it weren't for being too low-key, she might have been ranked first on the school beauty list.
There is no doubt that Xiao Nai is really fond of Bei Weiwei, let alone love at first sight. Even at that time, he was already thinking about how to catch Bei Weiwei...
For female readers, this kind of plot where the male god falls in love with the female protagonist at first sight will definitely be very enjoyable. On the other hand, in male-oriented works, the plot where the male protagonist falls in love with the beautiful woman at first sight is certainly more enjoyable.
Therefore, such an opening is undoubtedly very eye-catching, and at the same time, it also combines elements of the most popular MMO online games. Now is the time for PC games to dominate, which is equivalent to the era when "WOW" dominates the earth world. Mobile games haven’t taken off yet.
That’s why Xu Qingru hopes that Aiyou will start overtaking on the mobile gaming track in the future.
And I have to say that the appearance of this kind of online game in a magazine will definitely refresh most readers!
Of course, "A Little Smile Is Charming" is just an online game, it is still essentially a romance.
Soon, Xu Qingru had already sent the opening chapter of the completed new work to Su Manwen, the editor-in-chief of "Youth Festival".
Of course, Su Manwen started reviewing the manuscript as soon as possible. "Teacher Xu Nuo" was basically the author she valued most. Offering such good conditions to win over the other party was also a very courageous decision on her part.
And as long as "Teacher Xu"'s works achieve excellent results, her voice in the magazine will naturally be greater, and she may be able to make further progress in the future.
Therefore, when Su Manwen read "A Little Smile Is Charming", she was looking forward to it and at the same time, she became more careful and cautious. She had never worried about the quality of "Teacher Xunuo"'s writing, but was worried that the other party had written the work too much. Literature and art, on the contrary, make works tend to be niche.
For example, the work "5 Centimeters per Second", although it has been highly discussed and the copyright has been sold, is somewhat "appreciated but not a hit". After its publication, the sales volume of its single book was not as high as expected. So high.
In fact, this is also a normal thing. In the earth world, this animated movie is essentially a literary and artistic film. How many literary and artistic films can be successful at the box office?
After all, "Youth Festival" is a business magazine. While Su Manwen likes "5 Centimeters Per Second", it does not prevent her from looking forward to seeing popular works that can further increase the magazine's sales.
But she felt that placing this hope on "Teacher Xu Nuo" seemed a bit too much?
Can young literary authors really put down their pretensions and write commercial hits?
When Su Manwen saw the heroine Bei Weiwei appear, she was stunned for a moment. Can a girl with this kind of personality really be the heroine?
But once you accept this setting, it seems very interesting?
This time, "A Smile Is Charming" is not the previous "5 Centimeters Per Second". The latter is about youth from the perspective of the male protagonist, while the former is a more correct romance, completely based on the female protagonist "Bei Weiwei". The perspective expands.
This actually makes Su Manwen full of expectations. After all, she is a woman, and she always feels more immersive when watching romances unfolded from the heroine's perspective.
But what Su Manwen never expected was that the character of the heroine would be so perfect!
According to the general setting of romance, shouldn't the female protagonist be ordinary and attractive, and the rest of the female partners be extremely beautiful? In this case, the perfect male protagonist likes the ordinary female protagonist, but is indifferent to the beautiful female partner. This It’s just a very typical romance and it’s so cool...
With this suspicion, Su Manwen continued to read carefully. As she looked at it, she smiled.
The more she watched it, the more she was enveloped in the joyful and warm atmosphere that always filled it. She couldn't help but think of the ridicule on Teacher Xu Nuo's new work on the Internet. She always felt that this time, they had all got it wrong!
With such a relaxing, joyful and heart-warming work, is it possible that there will be a super twist next?
There is no doubt that the beginning of "A Smile Is Charming" made the editor-in-chief Su Manwen very satisfied.
Whether from the perspective of a pure reader or an editor, she felt that Teacher Xu Nuo had written another excellent work!
As a pure reader, if one does not consider the commercial value of this work, Su Manwen also finds it very enjoyable.
Obviously this work basically doesn't have any particularly bloody commercial plot, but it looks very enjoyable, and it can often make people smile. Especially those who play MMO online games will understand its appeal better. place.
The relaxed and joyful atmosphere in the novel can always linger in the hearts of readers. In addition, the heroine herself is a super beauty, which can always make readers feel happy. How can such a work not be loved by readers? Like it?
From an editor's point of view, Su Manwen also feels that this work demonstrates Teacher Xu's extremely superb writing skills. The text has a sense of returning to nature and being integrated, and the visual sense is still very strong, making readers feel like... Are you watching a TV series or movie?
No matter how picky an editor is, he may not be able to find flaws. If he insists on finding them, it will definitely be nitpicking...
Su Manwen even believes that "A Smile Is Charming" is more suitable for "Youth Festival" than Xu Qingru's previous "Five Centimeters Per Second" because the former's soothing and refreshing romance is bound to be better in terms of commercial performance. better.
Among the readers of "Youth Festival", the majority are female readers. After all, "5 Centimeters per Second" is unfolded from the perspective of the male protagonist. Many female readers prefer the supporting female character in this work who has a crush on her but to no avail. "Chengtian Flower Miao".
However, the beginning of "A Smile Is Charming" was good to watch, but Su Manwen was a little worried. In the later stages of this work, Teacher Xu suddenly suffered from literary youth syndrome and made a super twist!
For example, when the perfect heroine and the perfect hero have been paired up at the beginning of the story, the heroine is suddenly pushed by another male partner. However, this male partner is not as good as the perfect male protagonist in all aspects and is just a pornographic character. A little bastard or something...
Many literary and youth romance writers may want to add more words, or they may want to add some depth to the so-called love between men and women, as if the male protagonist only likes "non-virgin" women. Only the Lord can reflect the greatness of love.
There's no way, some young literary creators are like this, as if the male protagonist can't get through life without a little green on his head.
As a senior editor-in-chief, Su Manwen could tell at a glance that this work had the potential to appeal to both male and female readers. The heroine Bei Weiwei would definitely be loved by many male readers. However, at some point, the author died due to illness. Give……
Once such a plot happens, most male readers will definitely abandon the book!
As for female readers, as long as they are normal girls, most of them will be full of affection for the perfect male protagonist Xiao Nai. After all, he is an almighty god. They are all waiting for the female protagonist and the male protagonist to get together happily. As a result But suddenly suffered such a fatal blow...
Although female readers are more tolerant, they can't stand such messy behavior!
In fact, in a work like "5 Centimeters per Second", Su Manwen never expected that the male and female protagonists, who had such a tacit understanding when they were children, would only pass each other by each other in the end.
If something unexpected happens in "A Smile Is Charming", by that time, I am afraid that the entire "Youth Festival" magazine will be dragged down by this work.
Because as long as this work maintains the current style, it will definitely become a big hit and attract countless readers. However, the sudden twist will definitely kill countless readers. When it arouses the anger of so many readers, the magazine still has What's the end?
Su Manwen decided that this time he must keep an eye on "Teacher Xu Nuo" and stop abusing readers and making big news!
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