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If "The Death of the Red Rabbit" became popular and famous in the earth world because it was a refreshing essay for getting a perfect score in the college entrance examination, then it became popular and caused controversy in this parallel world because it was , the person who wrote it is Xu Qingru.
Otherwise, as a perfect score essay for the midterm exam of the first year of high school, it would not cause much waves.
Xu Qingru was the "most military training goddess" at the beginning, although now her status is considered outdated and she doesn't have much traffic anymore.
But don’t forget, she is also the up owner of Xiaopo Station.
After the "Haiyan" video, she didn't stop updating.
With the help of his brother Xu Mingwei, he successively produced and uploaded several videos, all of which were original songs with a literary and artistic flavor - "Old Friends Who Don't Know When to Return", "Living Through Thousands of Lands", and "Leaves".
These original songs are not popular, but people who like them like them very much, and their fan loyalty is extremely high.
There is a lyric in the song "Leaves" that has become popular, and it is precisely - loneliness is the carnival of one person, and carnival is the loneliness of a group of people.
However, this lyric has become popular, and many people like to use it as their Fetion signature, etc., but not many people know its origin.
All in all, Xu Qingru's identity as the "Treasure Up Master" is still recognized by many people. The traffic that was once like duckweed has slowly transformed into her loyal fans.
Moreover, her collection of modern poems "The Collection of Birds" has been distributed on the Internet and has been widely circulated. x63xs.
Her name is somewhat famous in contemporary poetry circles.
With the help of her mother Li Yian, "The Collection of Birds" is about to be published as a physical book, which will further increase her fame.
In addition to "The Collection of Birds", Xu Qingru also continues to publish essays in the purely literary magazine "Cape", which has also gained her a group of fans who are literary lovers.
Whether it's "Haiyan" or "Hurry", readers who like them really like them.
She also recently published an essay called "Warming a Pot of Moonlight and Drinking Wine". Just by virtue of this title, many literature lovers felt a strong literary and artistic atmosphere.
And the text did not disappoint them——
"If boiling snow is really a thing, other things can be left. We can use an empty bottle to store tonight's sweet-scented osmanthus fragrance. When the sweet-scented osmanthus fades and autumn passes, we can open the bottle cap and taste it carefully.
Put the warmth of first love in an exquisite glass box. When we are old and our youth is over, we can open the lid and feel a stream of warmth, which is enough to comfort us.
There are many unexpected touches in it, such as putting the moonlight in a wine pot and warming it over a slow fire to drink... There is a true meaning in this, and it is the realm of the wine fairy.
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After reading her article "Warming a Pot of Moonlight and Drinking Wine", many literature lovers feel like they are enjoying the moonlight and drinking wine, which is so refreshing!
Coincidentally, Cheng Wenkang, a special teacher at the High School Affiliated to Jiangnan University and leader of the Chinese teaching and research group, also saw this essay.
After he had a good time, he suffered from an occupational disease and felt that this prose was quite suitable for Chinese language comprehension questions...
Cheng Wenkang did not specifically record the name of the author of this article, otherwise he would have couldn't help but mutter, why was it that the prose he was reading was written by Xu Qingru, and the full score essay "The Death of Red Rabbit" that he had just graded was also written by Xu Qingru?
He might not believe that the two Xu Qingru are the same person.
After all, the literary realm of a high school student's composition like "The Death of the Red Rabbit" cannot be compared with the famous prose piece "Warming a Pot of Moonlight and Drinking Wine".
All in all, just because Xu Qingru is famous on the Internet as a "literary girl", "folk singer", "essay writer", and "modern poet", and because her looks are indeed too good, she naturally has the qualifications Hype value.
It turns out that the news that Xu Qingru got "No. 1 in the city" in the exam this time, coupled with her perfect score in the essay "The Death of the Red Rabbit", only existed as a hot post in the "Jiangzhou City No. 1 Middle School Bar".
The posts were full of students from the school who admired her, and there were all kinds of jokes, so that Song Shuhua, a foreign war waste and prisoner, quickly came out and apologized. They even played with photos of Song Shuhua, putting Song Shuhua's head on a dog's head, and putting Song Shuhua's face on a dog's head. Xu Qingru’s profile picture was posted on the head of a person holding a pet dog...
Thus, a "world-famous painting" of Xu Qingru holding her pet dog Song Shuhua was born. Unfortunately, this spoofing P-picture was directly deleted by the permission dog. They believed that such P-picture was too excessive.
The funniest thing is that someone directly pointed out that actually everyone still envied Song Shuhua, after all, he could be Xu Qingru's dog, while other people were just mice, and there was no possibility of being raped.
It feels like a joke from hell.
However, the atmosphere of Tieba is like this. It is full of grumpy old guys who are very aggressive. Whoever takes it seriously will lose. The main focus is abstraction, jokes, and pranks.
As time goes by, the hot posts about Xu Qingru in the campus post bar will definitely gradually decrease in popularity.
What I didn't expect was that I didn't know whether it was the students from Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School who were in trouble, or it was actually the students from the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University.
Someone actually reposted Xu Qingru’s hot post to the post bar of the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, and then posted it in a disgraceful way——
"It is said that the high school with the strongest liberal arts in Jiangzhou City and even the whole province is the High School Affiliated to Jiangda. However, in front of Xu Qingru, the liberal arts emperor of Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School, it is nothing but rubbish!"
"Yu Bingwei, a prisoner of the foreign war at the High School Affiliated to Jiang University, comes out!"
"All kneel down and worship the perfect composition "The Death of Red Rabbit" written by Xu Qingru, the great Chinese liberal arts emperor next door!"
"I really cried with laughter. Before the city rankings came out, a group of Yu Bingwei's filial sons and grandsons from our affiliated middle school boasted that she was the best in the city. But in the end, not only was she completely defeated in Chinese, she was also bad at science. How much does Xu Qingru..."
"It is said that Yu Bingwei is the most talented girl in the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, and no one can match her writing skills. So can she write a composition like "The Death of the Red Rabbit"?"
"If you can write shit, you have to do it in a tense examination room. Yu Bingwei is talented, but she is not a quick thinker at all. Xu Qingru is the real genius!"
"I really don't know how a girl like Yu Bingwei, who can only be considered pretty, is so popular in Jiangda High School. If it were Xu Qingru, I would never dare to think about it!"
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Yu Bingwei is indeed a prominent figure in the freshman class of Jiangda High School and is recognized as a talented woman.
Although her grades were not as strong as Song Shuhua's, who firmly ranked first, she had never fallen out of the top ten in the school.
She is also better at liberal arts and weaker at science, so this city-wide unified examination will also benefit her.
Her final ranking was first in the school and second in the city.
It can be said that if there was not a guy like Xu Qingru who came out of nowhere, then Yu Bingwei would be the biggest winner in this city's unified examination.
Yu Bingwei is very popular in Jiangda High School with her handsome appearance and extraordinary talent.
She was invited by the president of the school's literary club to "visit the thatched cottage three times" and joined the literary club, becoming a mainstay.
In every issue of the school newspaper, she has her works published in it, with diverse themes and gorgeous and beautiful writing.
These factors have given Yu Bingwei many fans.
In the campus forum of the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University, I often see people posting posts to praise her from various angles. Even her appearance, which can only be considered pretty at first, with the blessing of the talent filter, some people directly worship her as a goddess.
Maybe it was because of all the embarrassing bragging that she encountered a "backlash" recently. Some students from the high school affiliated with the school who had a rebellious mentality directly invited Xu Qingru from the No. 1 Middle School to be their tool and trampled on Yu Bingwei!
"The Death of Red Rabbit" has become their output tool.
And Yu Bingwei's supporters, after being ridiculed in this way, certainly would not give up and began to rebut in various ways. At the same time, they also attacked the perfect essay "The Death of Red Rabbit".
Their counterattack was not limited to the campus post bar, but further opened up the battlefield, and even started a verbal war on Zhihu.
In this era of this parallel world, the reputation of "Zhihu" is not bad yet, and it is not yet considered "powerful" or ridiculed as "share the story you just made up". It can be said that all walks of life are involved in "Zhihu" There are still quite a few elites and big shots.
"How to evaluate the perfect essay "The Death of Red Rabbit"?"
This issue was suddenly heated up by both sides who were arguing!
The key is that the two sides were quarreling, and it was not just the students who were arguing. Many netizens who were watching also participated in the fight, and they were all quarrelsome.
Under this question, the respondents were also clearly divided into two groups. Some people looked down upon this perfect essay at all——
"Thank you for the invitation. As a senior Chinese teacher, I think the level of this essay is very low and off-topic. I will give it a 38 out of 60 points."
"Objectively speaking, the wording and sentences are not literal, plain and formal, and have a serious sense of violation. In modern terms, it means that there is a lot of English mixed in Chinese.
Chitu: I am a horse. My rider used to be Lu Bu, but after meeting Guan Yunchang, I was moved by his integrity. He is mine. Now that he dies, I don’t want to live anymore. Just sauce. "
“Looking at the death of Red Rabbit based on the requirements of the article, the intention is not profound, the language is too lame, and the angle of entry is quite novel.
If I were a big fool and had never seen the world, I would give this examination essay 60 points, but I am already 26. If I were to judge the paper, I would only give her 42 points.
To be honest, among the 18-year-old ancients, there are countless articles written better than The Death of Red Rabbit. Getting full marks for such an essay can only show that things are not as good as they used to be. "
“Personally, I feel that it is at an average level of rubbish, and the level of the marking team is too low. Although it is not a zero score, it is at most a little higher than the entry score, but far from the full score level.
This article has been very popular on the Internet recently. I heard that it is written in classical Chinese, but when I look specifically, it is in ancient vernacular.
Unfortunately, the students are not good enough and their writing is neither fish nor fowl. The storyline is also very average.
In fact, this is a typical off-topic essay, just a gimmick for semi-classical Chinese writing, just hyped up.
What it writes is loyalty, not integrity. Although loyalty and integrity overlap, they are two different concepts.
Of course, in order to avoid going off topic, the author uses a third-party perspective to make the comments honest.
I can only say that the author is clever, but his literary talent is really not that good! "
“I’ve read too many ancient texts!
This short article is ordinary, the writing is neither clear nor white, the language is as childish as a swaddled baby, and the shallowness of the skills is fully exposed.
Today's society is extremely culturally poor, and such a poor article can actually attract widespread attention.
You know, in ancient times, children with a little bit of traditional education could write better than this. At least the writing style was mellow, fresh and natural, and ran through the Chinese culture.
On the other hand, this short article is as boring as white water. I can't read the taste of culture or the taste of China.
The idea is far-fetched and far off topic!
As we all know, Guan Yu is loyal and righteous, but this article actually pulls it out and blatantly changes it into honesty, which shows the poorness of his literary theory. "
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Yu Bingwei's supporters, when they saw that the Zhihu bosses were so good at criticizing "The Death of Red Rabbit" from various angles, they immediately became angry!
Like eunuchs carrying imperial edicts, they quickly reposted these answers to the campus forums, fiercely countering those guys who praised "The Death of Red Rabbit" to the sky and insisted on using Xu Qingru to step on Yu Bingwei.
Not to mention, with the group of Zhihu users who are full of arrogance and excellent talkers as foreign aid, they really had the upper hand for a while.
At this time, this perfect composition "The Death of Red Rabbit" has become completely popular and has become the traffic password of the moment.
Xu Qingru, who was already outdated, has been hyped up by marketing accounts again. Previously, she was nicknamed "The Most Military Training Goddess", but this time she won the nicknames "The Most Aesthetic Goddess" and "The Most Beautiful Literary Goddess"!
Marketing accounts directly used her city-wide ranking list to hype her. After all, she is "number one in the city". Her beautiful pictures are indeed quite a gimmick. It is normal for her to be nicknamed "the most aesthetic goddess".
As for the origin of the nickname "The Most Beautiful Literary Goddess", of course the topic was diverted to the recently popular full-score essay "The Death of Red Rabbit". Marketing accounts are the best at attracting traffic.
When "Death of the Red Rabbit" was criticized in various ways, some netizens who were right can't stand it anymore and felt that those Zhihu bosses who only knew how to talk were too pretentious!
Since you think this essay is useless, why can't you write it in the exam?
Some people go directly to the question on Zhihu and compete directly with those guys who disdain "Death of the Red Rabbit"——
"This essay has famous sayings and sentences at your fingertips without any sense of heaping. The writing is clear and clear, and I am very familiar with the history of the Three Kingdoms. These alone are enough to kill 80 people in an instant, not to mention that this is a time-limited examination essay. I think it is completely worthy. Full marks!”
"It can be called a classic! There is a reason why among the five virtues of benevolence, justice, propriety, wisdom, and trust, trust ranks at the bottom. Looking at the above answer, some people may suspect that the essay is off topic, but it is actually on point.
The virtue of integrity is mentioned here in the mouth of Chitu, because Guan Sheng, Yi Bo Yuntian, needs no further explanation and has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.
Only a benevolent and righteous master can cultivate the faith of Red Rabbit.
This clearly represents Red Rabbit and implicitly represents Guan Yu, which is very meaningful to read!
Without the virtue of benevolence and righteousness, the virtue of integrity will be out of the question!
Wonderful, wonderful..."
"In fact, it is very similar to Luo Guanzhong, the original author of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms". As a student, he is already at a high level, and his ideas are relevant and his language is fluent. It is not easy to write such an examination essay in a limited time.
I believe that only those who truly love classical literature can have this kind of background; only those who have read countless classics by famous writers can have this kind of quick wit.
I don’t mean to brag about it, but I want to say that before some people criticize it, please think about it. This is an examination essay. How much time do you have to think about it? "
"The original text of "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" is just one sentence.
The general idea is that Guan Yu died, and then Chi Tu Ma died on a hunger strike.
However, this candidate wrote such a composition. At least I admire him.
Seeing someone asking for details, I went out of my way to find the original text, which is in Chapter 77: Guan Gong of Yuquan Mountain appears holy, and Cao Cao of Luoyang City is inspired by it.
A short paragraph is specially left in the middle, which is transcribed below.
After Guan Gong died, Ma Zhong captured the red rabbit horse and presented it to Sun Quan. The right is given to Ma Zhong to ride on. His horse died without food for several days.
Then the rest will be mentioned below.
The original text may be intended to show loyalty, as other respondents said.
But to be able to think of this small detail in such a short period of time, and then rewrite it as integrity, I don't think it was a sudden enlightenment, but that I pay attention to it and like to think when I usually read, so that I can write like this in one go. great. "
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With the support of these Li Zhongke netizens, the reputation of "The Death of the Red Rabbit" has returned to its original heights, because as an examination essay, its author is indeed considered to be quick-witted and brilliant!
And when Xu Qingru's loyal fans discovered that this perfect essay was actually written by their fan "artistic girl", they became even more excited!
These die-hard fans have a taste for rice circles, and as we all know, the fighting power of rice circle fans is so powerful!
They were worried that the popularity of treasure up owners like Xu Qingru was always tepid, so of course they had to make good use of this opportunity to promote her. It would be great if she could become popular in the industry.
They saw some Zhihu users who liked to show off and used "The Death of Red Rabbit" to mock Xu Qingru for his lack of talent, and they got angry!
Where does "Death of the Red Rabbit" go?
This is just a rushed examination essay. How can it reflect Xu Qingru's true talent?
They directly used "Asuka Ji" to ride on their face and output!
The funniest thing is that among the Zhihu users who ridiculed Xu Qingru’s lack of talent, there were also signatures using classic lines from "The Birds"...
When this person was mocking, he probably never thought that the author of "The Collection of Birds" was the one who wrote this perfect composition.
Not only did "The Collection of Flying Birds" be used, but some also used the phrase "Loneliness is a person's carnival, carnival is the loneliness of a group of people." This is also an original lyric from Xu Qingru!
You use her classic sayings to pretend to be literary, and in turn, you mock her for not having literary talent?
Isn't this funny?
In addition to "The Collection of Birds", Xu Qingru's fans have exported quite a lot of ammunition. They also released Xu Qingru's original songs, essays, etc.
When so many works that reflect her talents and literary arts are presented to the public, those who stare at "Death of the Red Rabbit" will naturally become clowns in an instant!
Suddenly, Xu Qingru’s traffic on the Internet was like dreaming back to the military training period!
Xu Qingru herself didn't care at all about the controversy about "The Death of Red Rabbit" on the Internet, but for such a perfect composition to be so popular and cause so many people to study and think about it, she earned another wave of literary value!
After all, there are people who want to criticize "The Death of Red Rabbit" with good reason, so you must read it carefully!
Some people who read carefully enough actually found the bug in this essay, that is, Guan Yu's defeat in Maicheng was actually in 219 AD, the twenty-fourth year of Jian'an. However, at the beginning of the essay, it was written the twenty-sixth year of Jian'an. Year.
Isn't this a huge mistake, so I conclude that it doesn't deserve full marks!
If Xu Qingru saw someone picking out details like this, she would not become angry, but would only be secretly happy. After all, the more in-depth, more serious, and more enlightened she reads, the more literary and artistic value she gains!
Looking at it this way, the well-founded Heizi provides more literary and artistic value than those who fantasize about her and protect her without brains.
After all, some die-hard fans are directly fans of her as a person. As for her works, they can just brag without thinking.
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In reality, the customary parent-teacher meeting after the midterm exam is finally about to be held.
In order to compete for the opportunity to participate in this parent-teacher meeting, Xu Qingru's parents had a quarrel at home...
Who made Xu Qingru take the first place in the city this time?
Who has a child like this and doesn’t want to rush to a parent-teacher conference?
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