This mid-term examination of the city's unified examination, the marking work is already in full swing.
Generally speaking, the subject that takes the most time to grade papers should be Chinese. After all, the workload of marking essays is quite large.
Of course, it is impossible for the marking teacher to read every student's composition in detail. Basically, they only skim it. Most students write routine essays anyway.
Many Chinese teachers actually encourage students to write routine essays, because as long as they don't go off topic or make nonsense, they can always get the points they deserve.
At this time, in this school called "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School", the school's high school Chinese teaching and research team was correcting the Chinese test papers of "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School".
"Jiangzhou University Affiliated High School" is also one of the best high schools in Jiangzhou, the provincial capital city. It is the biggest competitor of "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School". The two schools are also known as the "Jiangzhou Double Heroes".
The High School Affiliated to Jiangda is not as strict as Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School, but its students are also very good, and the high school entrance examination scores are exactly the same as Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School.
Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School has more advantages in science teaching, and various mathematics, physics and chemistry competitions are in full swing.
The High School Affiliated to Jiangda University focuses on liberal arts and encourages students to participate in the "New Thinking Essay Contest". Several provincial liberal arts champions have come from the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University.
It can be said that the Chinese teaching and research team of the High School Affiliated to Jiangnan University is very powerful. It is not an exaggeration to say that they are number one in the province.
The leader of the teaching and research group is named Cheng Wenkang.
He is the dean of the High School Affiliated to Jiangnan University and a special high school Chinese teacher. He is well-known in the high school education circles in the province. Every year he is invited to publish college entrance examination papers from other provinces, or national papers, etc.
This time, he also participated in setting up the Chinese language test paper for the mid-term examination of the city's unified examination, which was very difficult. This is undoubtedly very beneficial to the "Jiangda High School Affiliated to Jiangnan University", which is stronger in liberal arts.
At this time, Cheng Wenkang was grading the compositions of the students of "Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School". He was grading quickly. While doing so, he shook his head: "The Chinese teaching work in No. 1 Middle School is really rough. The students are all taught It’s very rigid, and until now, not a single essay can make people’s eyes shine.”
As soon as he said this, another Chinese teacher Wang Xiaofang immediately echoed: "Director Cheng is so right. Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School has completely replicated the way they teach science in Chinese, and the students they have trained have , I feel like they are all test-taking machines and have no spirituality.”
Until now, Cheng Wenkang has rated the essay as 60 points, and the highest score he has given is 53 points. This is because of the neatness of the other party's paper. Unfortunately, the style of the essay is also an argumentative essay with no new ideas. The writing is very routine, and it is just an example of victory. Very novel.
Then another teacher gloated: "In this city-wide unified examination, our school's overall score will definitely be better than Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School because of the Chinese subject!"
Wang Xiaofang also smiled and said: "I guess the number one in the city this time is also within our school's pocket. In the class you teach, Director Cheng, the girl named 'Yu Bingwei' seems to have good grades not only in science, but also in liberal arts." It’s Chinese, and it’s her specialty. I feel like she has a good chance of becoming number one in the city this time.”
When Cheng Wenkang heard the other party mention "Yu Bingwei", he couldn't help but smile on his face. Obviously this girl was his favorite student. He said: "Yu Bingwei is really talented in literature and full of aura. Every time she writes All essays can be used as model essays. I think the marking team of No. 1 Middle School will be very surprised if they approve her essay."
Wang Xiaofang also smiled: "That's right, it's not like the composition test papers we approve now. At a glance, they all look the same."
Suddenly, the entire office of the Grade 1 Chinese Language Teaching and Research Group of the High School Affiliated to Jiangda University was filled with a happy atmosphere, and the champagne was poured out in advance!
As a result, not long after Wang Xiaofang finished speaking, Cheng Wenkang received Xu Qingru's composition test paper, and the title was "The Death of the Red Rabbit".
First of all, Xu Qingru's "professional-level" calligraphy skills, the composition written by Xu Qingru, straight to the point, made Cheng Wenkang feel a little system shock!
"Hiss..." Cheng Wenkang took a breath and couldn't help but admired: "This student's handwriting is so good! Her hard-pen calligraphy is not only as simple as level 10, it can also be used as a copybook. Someone else copied it!”
His surprised voice was heard by other Chinese teachers. Some of the more curious ones came directly to watch.
Then naturally they were stunned by the "first impression" of this composition, and they all sighed——
"This regular script is really like art. I didn't expect that there are students with such calligraphy skills in No. 1 Middle School!"
"The handwriting is beautiful. It was very advantageous in the Chinese language test. My impression score was maximized!"
"Can you take a photo as a souvenir? I want to show it to the students in our class so that they can feel the difference!"
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Of course you can take photos. Anyway, it’s just a mid-term exam, and it’s not as demanding as the college entrance examination marking.
Wang Xiaofang did not come to watch. She also made some sarcastic remarks: "No matter how good the handwriting is, it would be a waste to put it in Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School. The students in their school will definitely not be able to write any amazing compositions."
But at this time, Cheng Wenkang had been completely attracted by the article "The Death of Red Rabbit"!
He discovered that this student actually imitated the style of the famous novel "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" and wrote this composition in ancient vernacular!
Cheng Wenkang was shocked!
Several other Chinese teachers who were watching out of curiosity were also shocked!
A freshman in high school can actually use ancient vernacular proficiently and write such a magnificent essay in such a short time in the examination room. What kind of quick thinking is this?
Originally, Cheng Wenkang admired students who were playful and smart in their compositions, but the previous composition test papers really made him feel tired and boring. Now this "The Death of the Red Rabbit" filled with calligraphy was placed in front of him. , he was naturally shocked at once!
He read "The Death of Red Rabbit" in one go and couldn't help but sigh: "What a good essay. I didn't expect that No. 1 Middle School also has students who are unconventional and eclectic. I think this essay can be given full marks. Everyone will read it." Look."
"What, full marks for the essay?" Wang Xiaofang was shocked. She knew how high Director Cheng's vision was. There was actually a student in Jiangzhou No. 1 Middle School who could write an essay that he would give perfect marks for?
Then she saw the article "The Death of the Red Rabbit". It was the same process. First of all, the student's calligraphy captured her directly. The calligraphy was well written and the first impression was so dominant.
After reading the entire article, she had to admit that as an examination essay, it was really awesome!
Considering that this is a composition written by a high school freshman, it is even more shocking! It’s simply amazing!
Then there were other students to support it. As a result, such a unique ancient vernacular composition instantly conquered all the marking teachers present!
Full marks, must be given!
Cheng Wenkang was delighted to see Hunter Xin, and then wrote down the reason why he gave full marks——
First, the story is novel. Based on his familiarity with the stories of the Three Kingdoms, the author compiled a touching story of Red Tuma dying for his integrity, and his imagination is really rich.
The second is to have high aspirations. The article personifies the red rabbit and horse so that in its dialogue with Boxi, it can praise and criticize Guan Yu, Dong Zhuo, and Lu Bu, realizing the theme of "a true hero must be honest";
In addition, the couplet "birds follow the phoenix and soar far away, and people who are virtuous and good are proud of themselves" and the sentence "things are like this, how can people be worthy of it" express the ambition of choosing good things in life and looking only at integrity, which makes the purpose of the article Go to the next level.
The third is language sophistication. The whole article uses proficient ancient vernacular, which is scattered and intricate, clear and clear, and has high literary talent. This kind of sophisticated language skills is beyond the reach of many candidates.
