Rather than listening to Ah Qiu, a desperate author, talk about it, my friends probably want me to read a few more chapters, but the first volume is over, and I feel like I should still say a few words.
Thank you to all the readers who can see this. Thank you for every speech, follow-up reading, vote, and reward.
Thank you for allowing me to get a second round of recommendations. (It would be great if I could get a third round of recommendations~)
Thank you very much.
Next, let’s talk about this book.
The plot of the first volume... actually doesn't have much to say.
To put it too bluntly, it loses its flavor.
Let’s mainly talk about the points that everyone is controversial about.
(1) Personal aspect.
Many readers think that Xu Qiansu and Ma Li are like Watanabe and Qingye in Love Game.
I'm actually secretly happy to be viewed this way, because I'm really trying to learn Lianyou's daily writing style.
It's better to be recognized than to write something different.
Of course, Xu Qiansu is Xu Qiansu, Watanabe is Watanabe, Mali is Mali, and Qingye is Qingye. I write this just to add some attraction to the first volume.
If you just apply characters vaguely, this book will not go far.
There will be plots in the future that will deepen the image of the male and female protagonists. I hope everyone can say that Ma Li is Ma Li, not just like Qing Ye Shen.
In addition, there are some supporting characters, but everyone feels that they are too stereotyped, with the manager Cattleya killed as a typical example.
This is because my writing skills are weak and I deliberately create something refreshing but not flattering.
Let me study and improve my writing skills in the future.
(2) In terms of painting style.
Many friends think that I write about darkness, and that I am brainless, dark and crippled...
To be honest, after reading the first volume, no one will think so, right?
Neither knives nor darkness are what I want to write about.
What I want to write is a novel that combines Japanese light novels and the warmth of the Pokémon world with logical reality, with a bit of a Jianghu atmosphere and a pyrotechnic atmosphere.
It's just that some scenes may use too much force, and some friends can't accept it. They feel that this kind of thing should not appear when writing elf novels...
The ups and downs of the plot, upon closer inspection, do seem to lack some rationality, but Aqiu thinks that it makes sense after all. (The helplessness of weak writing power)
Now it seems that what Aqiu wrote is actually a reality full of romanticism.
Romanticism dominates!
There are so many famous scenes in the first volume, do you think it is romantic or not? (akimbo)
If you think it's pretentious and literary, let's just say something else. I agree, because Aqiu is really just a newcomer.
Not to mention elven literature, there are so many types of good books from Qidian alone. With my writing style and writing style, I think there shouldn’t be too many... right?
(3) Plot aspect.
Everyone should have discovered that this book...has no main plot! ! !
Without a main line, there is a lack of expectations and motivation, and the results are bound to not be very good. I understand that.
Not only that, I also deliberately weakened the essential elements of web writing such as monster-fighting upgrades and numerical strength.
Even for the final battle of the first volume, I didn’t write any battles or big scenes.
I also thought about introducing a villain who can survive three or four volumes as an enemy in the first volume, with revenge as the main line in the early and mid-term, and learning about secrets.
I also thought about letting Sister Cang appear on the stage as the climax of the first volume.
But then think about it.
For a while, I already wrote Cuixue's plot that was not in line with the trend of online writing, so I just kept working on it, not thinking about the results, and just wrote what I wanted to write in the first volume.
Secondly... I think that the core of Pokémon lies in the journey (not that poisonous animation), in meeting various unknown Pokémon, who you meet, and what happens to them, etc.
If you want to write about the taste of Pokémon, you should write a travelogue! (Conclusively)
Of course, this is not how web articles should be written.
The facts were not contrary to my wishes. Due to the factors of seeking death, the results were ridiculously poor.
190,000 words, 7,000 collected, 480 follow-up reads... (Failed to read again)
well.
I won’t go into details about my results so that my friends won’t think I’m begging you for food.
I wonder if everyone knows Ji Da (Ji Cha)?
The leader of the harem stream.
I have been reading online articles for many years, but I have not finished reading many books (because of the increasing homogeneity.).
Ji Da’s books are among the few that I have been able to finish. If you are interested, you can check them out.
He has a fairy tale novel "Asking about the Red World", which left a deep impression on me.
Because it is also a first volume that is not in line with the trend of online writing and is full of fairy tales and depth.
But in the end, even a master like him had to change his writing style to cater to the market after writing the first volume because of the poor results.
As an author who also needs to eat, I understand him.
But as a reader, I feel sorry for it.
After reading "Inquiry into the Red World", I no longer have the slightest interest in the fairy tale novels on the market.
Because the vast majority of them are just fighting and killing in different skins.
There is no fairy spirit.
This is also related to personal taste. Please don’t scold me, thinking that I am ignorant and have no vision (thank you).
I just share good books with you as a reader.
That's too far.
In short, what I want to say is that as a new writer, I don’t have a lot of writing power. In terms of quality, this book is not as good as "Ask the Red Dust".
But I wanted to continue the writing style of the first volume of this book.
It’s just to give friends who are as aesthetically tired as me a different story to read in the increasingly homogeneous trend of routine writing in the online writing market.
Although this is bound to be something that a small number of readers like to see.
Although my weak writing skills may not be as good as those novice and routine articles in terms of look and feel.
This book has 190,000 words. Although I haven’t received any news yet, it will definitely be on the shelves. I implore all of you readers to support it.
(In the end, I’m still begging for food).
Thanks again.
Oh, one more thing.
Kirulian is definitely going to evolve into Gardevoir.
Some friends who cannot accept it can abandon the book.
I don't want to cheat you of your money either.
above.
Thanks again.
