I had some things to do today. I was so sleepy when I came back at nine o'clock. I wanted to sit down for an hour and write, but ended up oversleeping and losing my full attendance this month. Now that I think about it, I really deserve it. It just so happens that this volume ends here. That’s right, let’s just write a closing remarks.
This volume should have ended last month long ago, because my state was not stable enough, which led to the previous period being unstable - well, not to mention stable, in fact it was really bad.
I would like to make a serious apology to all readers for this. I am just an online writer, and what I provide you is not high-quality literary works. At best, it is just for your enjoyment. It is my duty to ensure updates. What I should do, if I can't do it, it's my dereliction of duty. It's useless to apologize too much. It's better to see how I perform next and let everyone make the judgment.
To be honest, I was not very satisfied with the first volume. The entire plot was not very well written. As a comment on Youshu.com said - "Every time I think the plot gets tougher, it becomes "loose" again. The description of the battle is short." However, it is not neat enough and involves a large number of inner descriptions of the characters. It switches between multiplayer scenes from time to time, resulting in "scattered". In addition, the protagonist's subjective promotion is insufficient, and the plot is loose and loose."
This paragraph can be said to have completely hit my pain point. In fact, due to my lack of writing experience, I wrote paragraphs that seemed to be no problem in my daily updates. Later, it seemed that many chapters were completely meaningless now. , and even had a negative effect on the continuity of the plot.
For example, after the battle against the priest ended, the plot until Genya arrived at the Black Dragon Building seems to be a complete failure. In fact, when I was writing this plot, a reader reminded me of this plot in a post. It was too long, but I didn’t take it to heart at the time. Now that I think about it, it would be right to delete the entire plot. At most, I would keep Uesugi Tomohiko’s inner monologue on the return trip, because he was about to be defeated by the protagonist. The villain expressed some reasons, and then combined this chapter with the plot of trading priests for Mr. Wang to write one and a half chapters, and then the plot of Utsumi being found by Sato and being snitched by his subordinates was simplified to about 500 words, Kujo After the doctor came to save Tomohiko Uesugi and Genya was forced to leave, the boss battle in this volume should have been entered in at most two chapters, but I delayed it for almost ten chapters, which was really too watery.
And this is just a microcosm, a reflection of my lack of skills. This kind of lengthy plots that shouldn’t appear are everywhere in the first volume. As a result, when I watched it back, I really felt that the emotional mobilization was not smooth and the plot was too much. It is scattered and unable to give a good climax that is enough to satisfy all readers. This is due to my lack of ability. I am really sorry.
So for the writing of the second volume, I think it is closely linked to the year-end summary meeting jointly held in Edo at the end of March (the time in the book), and this meeting is the final stage of this volume, and everything must revolve around it. This plot unfolds and is written closely following the relationship between the protagonist and one or two characters. Even if there are branch lines that can be written, they must be cut off. Only write with this main body in mind. Make the plot more compact and see the effect. how.
The tentative title of the second volume is [Light Mok Sakura]. This is a pun metaphor. Let me give you some details first. I have already finished the detailed outline of the second volume. The final ending of this volume will be in [Name] ] to [name], then [activity name] to [name], and then comes the seemingly real [movement] - although it seems a bit inappropriate to sell it off like this, it's better not to spoil it.
So be it, I wish all readers good health and stay tuned for the second volume [Light Mok Sakura].
