The story of Freezing Bird, Mega Evolution, and Giratina are almost at the end, so I'm taking a day off.
I owe one chapter from last month's monthly pass, plus the one I owe due to leave, it should be five chapters at present (I definitely remember it correctly). It's still the old rule. If it's not finished at the end of the month, the group will send out red envelopes. The tentative amount is 388.
Finally, let’s talk about the plot of mega evolution.
The comments on the Gengar Mega Evolution chapter can be said to be the most comments I have received in the past few months. When I first wrote this chapter, I did not expect that everyone would have such a big response.
Looking back, it was indeed my problem. If the contents of those two chapters were published together, it should not cause such a violent reaction from everyone.
Another point is that there are some problems with my plot structure.
My initial arrangement was to allow Chen Mo's battle in the Ice World to be broadcast live to the real world outside.
If you are familiar with my book friends, you probably know that I will try my best to arrange the rationality of the live broadcast, that is, why the protagonist can start the live broadcast in this place.
For example, I gave explanations for the live broadcast of the ancient ruins of Zekrom in the Evergreen Forest and the subsequent journey to the secret realm of the World's Beginning Tree. That was because the secret world was, at that time, in line with the real world. Part of it is integrated into the real world, so it can receive live signals from the earth.
Then this plot is the same.
At first, the shell of the Ice Egg didn’t show any pictures, so why did the protagonist see the picture after entering? This must be a point of doubt, so I raised this question through the perspective of Emperor Yan and the perspective of the live broadcast room. As for what the reason is, a lot of foreshadowing has already been laid in the book, so I won’t go into details.
All in all, after solving the problem of being able to live broadcast, one-third of the 4,000 words in that chapter has been taken up.
In the further development of the plot, the protagonist puts Gengar and Frozen Bird in a one-on-one duel.
This is what I think. I personally think so. The strength of Gengar and the strength that Frozen Bird discovered before are obvious to the audience in the live broadcast room. So the protagonist asked Gengar and Frozen Bird to fight in a one-on-one fight. Naturally, they There will definitely be doubts in my mind.
Why can Gengar fight against Frozen Bird in a duel?
Then I can use this question and the protagonist's actions to turn the perspective to Manxing, and then smoothly pull out the mega evolution.
At this point, the shocking part comes next.
The birth of new things always causes shock. This is a great pleasure for me when reading books. I will naturally keep this habit when writing books.
but.
Different from traditional elf travel stories or urban elf stories, in the world where Chen Mo lives, he has been exposed to elves for only two years. Not to mention the evolution of mega, the things that the protagonist has popularized in the past are not completely new to them. Things, so the shock caused by mega evolution has certain limitations on their side. In addition, they have also popularized science in the secret realm before, so the main perspective must not be placed on their side.
Therefore, legendary spirits such as Suicune who are influenced by traditional evolutionary relationships have become the main targets of shock.
With this description, the four thousand words of Chapter 406 are basically over.
Some book friends said that you are too naive, but I personally think that the description of the atmosphere is very important. I can't just abbreviate it to the beginning of the battle.
Again.
Why did you choose to break the chapter at that point? It's very simple. From the content of the next chapter, everyone can see that even if Gengar Mega evolves, in fact, it can't beat Frozen Bird one-on-one normally. In addition, Gengar The ghost's request to take the initiative to fight was to draw out Giratina's back-up, so Super Gengar's first appearance was going to be humiliating.
but.
After all, it is a new form, and it is impossible for Kamen Rider's new form to be immediately deflated as soon as it transforms. Therefore, after that chapter is cut off, the arrangement of the next chapter is just right for Super Gengar to show its highlights, and then that's almost it. Let Super Gengar be defeated and draw out Giratina's backhand.
This is my arrangement problem, which makes everyone look unhappy.
But I also have my difficulties, after all, this is the plot structure of the book.
The protagonist Chen Mo is different from traditional elf novel protagonists. The environment he faces is an environment without the elf alliance. As some book friends said before, the protagonist Chen Mo has no strong enemies, no seniors, and does not need to participate in any competitions. When he chooses to take out his mega evolution to fight, it must be against a strong enemy. Naturally, it is impossible to kill the opponent in one chapter like a normal elf writing competition, causing shock.
certainly.
If we look back, there are actually many things that can be improved in this plot. For example, I set the strength of the frozen bird to be too strong. If I slightly lower the strength of the frozen bird, I set it to be a super Gengar. If I can defeat its range, there won't actually be so many problems, but in order to draw out the stone slab and attract Giratina, I was a little too hasty.
Sorry, my questions have brought you a bad viewing experience.
In addition, in response to another question from everyone, several book friends in the book review area are saying that the style of this book has changed in style compared with the previous ones.
Um.
how to say.
In fact, your feelings are okay.
The early style of this book is mainly based on a combination of daily life and science popularization, but at this stage of the protagonist's life, he can't just do science popularization mixed with daily life. In order to complete it, the protagonist must solve the mystery of the elf's time travel and the system. , another self and many other things.
certainly.
This is also caused by my lack of writing skills. If my writing skills were good enough, I could use some transitions to alleviate this perception.
Alas, all in all, I’m sorry, I seem to have lost some follow-up reading this time, which is uncomfortable...
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Some reflections from Kafka, the ultimate stitching weirdo
