The eighth volume is finished.
By the time I finish writing this volume, the final piece of the puzzle for the main plot of the book has been put into place.
I believe some book friends have already guessed what the deformed body of the Rhode Island operator was after using all his strength.
But I will reveal the answer soon.
Then there are the wishes of Ceylon and Hei. In fact, both of them have come true. Ceylan’s wish is to cure Hei’s Originium disease. Hei’s wish is that the young lady can live happily every day. The specific result requires a little imagination. , but not difficult.
So, here we go, recycling the foreshadowing of the first volume.
Next, let’s talk about a few questions.
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First, about the role relationship between the Doctor and Amiya.
The answer I personally give is a good teacher and helpful friend. The doctor is an elder who helps and educates Amiya more. This is something Kelsey cannot do. The old woman has too many worries and she can't do it.
Girls who are still in the growing stage will inevitably have admiration for older men. This is logical.
After all, Zhou Jinru looks only 25 years old, no different from a normal young man. This is an age where he has both the maturity and passion of an adult and the enthusiasm and creativity of a young man.
After being in contact with her for a long time, Amiya was like a little sister to him, a child who hadn't grown up yet.
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Second question, Kelsey.
As an old woman, I am very restrained. Except for some necessary settings, I can basically suppress it. Even if I am stabbed in the back two days later, I can adjust as quickly as possible.
She did not appear in the second half of Volume 8, which has little to do with the plot on April 15.
She cannot appear. She has a characteristic. She knows very well that if she appears on the battlefield, the situation will completely collapse. Zhou Jinru has no solution other than saying "ok" to 004.
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The third problem is that the appearance rate of each operator is not high, or they do not do much work.
This question will involve the creator’s perspective and my considerations from the reader’s perspective.
First of all, a very critical question is what readers who are still reading this book want to read. Personally, I think the proportion of peaches is 5, the plot is 3, and the others are 2.
It took me a long time to guess this conclusion. The cost is that the subscriptions for that volume (New School Art) are not very high, and subscriptions jump frequently. Some chapters have nearly one-third fewer subscriptions than adjacent chapters. In fact, The process of promoting the plot through chapter content is very tedious and will dissuade readers who are eager for peaches or interesting plots.
Operators need potential motivation to appear and do what they do. The task can be taken care of in one go. So when a dungeon is created collectively, it becomes a big trouble for me how to operate it.
The above is from the reader’s perspective.
Next I want to talk about the creator’s perspective.
Currently, there has been only one large-scale conflict in Rhode Island between people fighting against each other, Rhode Island versus the Integration Movement. The others were local skirmishes between operators of various factions in a certain area, with very little bloodshed.
In terms of humans versus monsters, there are very few, and the most recent one occurred in the Sargon region.
It is difficult for two-dimensional mobile games to compare with reality. I cannot describe the tragic scenes of death. Even if they are enemies, there are very few.
Hand-to-hand combat requires bloodshed.
Therefore, I deliberately reduced the high-intensity PVP and replaced it with more casual and relaxed PVE, and most of the dangers were borne by the doctor.
At the end of the eighth volume, I made a small attempt with Franka, Star Bear, and Herman. The response was average, and it turns out I was right.
I think Happy Cloud Tour may be more suitable for the current atmosphere.
As a writer, I feel that it is much harder to control one's hand than to improve one's writing skills.
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I still only give Volume 8 a score of 70, which is still far from satisfactory to me.
I will definitely add more when I finish my busy work for a while.
Next, we went to Jiaweier’s hometown for a tour. She had some interesting things there.
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"Friend, would you like some grilled mushrooms?"
