This volume of "The Law of Silence" is generally going well, but the update is not satisfactory, which is helpless.
As mentioned in the preface, the second volume is used to bury clues. Many clues have been buried, as well as hidden clues in other areas. Just fill in the holes step by step.
During this period, a major event in Chapter 6 happened. I made slight modifications to the main body without affecting the overall creation. Again, it is a fan work after all, so there will be some original content. I tried my best to restore the operator himself. There are also awkward parts.
For example, most of the operators in the A4 group have been fooled this time. Brother Hongdao is not something they can deal with head-on. I will try to write in more detail in the future.
Then, are there any problems with the plot? Yes, there are quite a few.
When Zhou Jinru broke through the bottom line of reason, the progress was too fast, causing him to pick it up high and put it down gently. I admit this. I made a mistake here in this satellite city, that is, releasing Mostima in advance.
She shouldn't have appeared so early, so the rhythm was a bit messy later on. I had to cut off a branch line, and the event node was in the chapter of the Sweeper.
But her exchanges with Zhou Jinru were all within the outline.
Finally, there was the scene where Li Nan drove the hearse and appeared. This was also designed. It seemed to be a deus ex machina. In fact, it was not the case. He had to appear in my original design, but I couldn't handle it well this time.
There is another character who is a failure, and that is Bai Yuanyuan, who suddenly has a strong sense of presence in the back. His entire plot line is gone. This is a decision I have no choice about. If I write out his plot, the whole book will be gone. , so he can only show up at the end.
The above is all about the problems and will be corrected in the future.
Let's talk about results.
It has been on the shelf for 13 days, and the first order has exceeded 100. The average order was 44 at first, and now it is around 100. Generally speaking, it is stable and improving. After all, my collection base is low. It was only 1200 when it was put on the shelf. Now it is only about 1500. The editor will give it a try. The word count is preferably 8,000 per day.
Alas, my output is like that of an eagle's horn. It's hard to squeeze out toothpaste.
The group number already exists, in the work related section and in the introduction. Let me talk about it again, 648920261.
The next volume is going to be a whole new chapter, Colombian new art.
