Yesterday I saw a book friend asking me if this was about a travel agency? I'm sorry to tell you, no.
It was originally called "Stepping into Cultivation", but this name was not friendly to newcomers. Compared with the works of the same period, my name is simply ordinary in the extreme. So I changed my name.
The purpose is to attract strangers to click on it and take a look.
Because of the name change, I always have to draw the main plot to the travel agency, so I cut a large part of the plot. Experienced book lovers should know that after Yang Zhao comes out of Cangcheng, he should have accumulated upgrades to increase his own force value. stage to prepare for the next meteor shower, but in order to fast forward to get the key props, I cut this part off. As a result, she also felt aggrieved during the meteor shower, which made me very tangled in writing.
My writing skills are not good, it’s my first time writing, and I have no experience. I can’t write anything exciting, and the plot drags on slowly. In order to speed up the pace, I cut out the plots of many small characters, such as the old Qian’s store in Cangcheng. I owe him a scene. He has a father-son relationship with the watchman who was kidnapped by Fang Shuli. When he saw the good clothes, he was reluctant to destroy them, but selling them would not be good for the female tenants, so he took the clothes For my father who is a watchman. His father works at night and no one can see him in this clothes. He should go and apologize to Yang Zhao after the incident was over. Yang Zhao gave him a reward, and he used the reward to apologize to Yang Zhao.
But no, I have designed too many small characters like this. If everyone has their own behavioral logic, the protagonist will not be revealed. The word count is too high when it is written. Little characters cannot be given too much ink. For a book, they are just NPCs.
Why am I so worried about these little people? Because I am a little person in reality, and my behavior is also logical. I think very well when I am not writing a book. Although I cannot write good works, I will definitely let these people do it. Everything has its own logic? But as soon as I wrote it, I realized that it was not possible. There are only a few protagonists in a book. You can't write out the logic of everyone's behavior, especially for a slow-burning novel like mine. If you don't get into the main line quickly, you won't be able to write it down. No one will like to see it. I found that I still care more about the feelings of book friends who can read this book.
But I communicated with the editor. My editor is very nice. He said that changing the name cannot be reversed. Changing the name frequently is not good for the novel, but I don’t have to cut the outline all the time. If the name doesn’t match the name, it doesn’t match the reality. First of all, Write at my own pace.
The luckiest thing for me was that when I was a newbie, I met a very good editor, Hua Jiao. She answered all my stupid questions impatiently and asked me to write at my own pace and not to be distracted by others. about.
So it’s still the same question as above. I’m sorry, but I’m trying to make a fool of myself.
Travel agencies are not the point.
