I'm a little sleepy, a little hot, and a little stuck. Take a day off and don't wait for updates.
I would also like to take this opportunity to say a few words.
The reason why the four words "Guide to Cultivation to Immortality" are added to this book is to try to show a world of Cultivation to Immortality that everyone can understand. If anyone really travels through it, even if they are faced with a certain death situation, they can at least choose a relatively comfortable way to die. ... I digressed... Back to the topic.
Let’s first talk about the problem that many people complain about: too many explanations.
To be honest, I don’t want to explain. It’s good to write some plot and daily life, but this book is the same but different from the traditional cultivation of immortality, and it’s a little deviant.
For example: If I write about a completely new system and talk about a realm of fear or something, everyone will not understand it and can say what it is and will not be confused. But if I write about a foundation-building period, everyone will put in countless books The situation during the foundation building period is substituted into it.
To be honest, it would take more than a thousand words to write a few dialogues and descriptions, and this kind of explanation is very laborious to write, and it would be useless if you write less, because many people will have countless questions. The more I write, the less I can calm down and read it, but I cannot stop writing.
Different from those books that are constantly upgrading and breaking through, and constantly changing maps, this book has a plot based on the different situations faced by each level of cultivation in the world of immortality. If it is not explained clearly, you may be confused.
Some people may say, if we don’t explain it, can’t everyone experience it for themselves? Thousands of people have different views on the same thing, let alone a story composed of countless things? Look, not many people have the patience to think that much.
Take a plot from the last book as an example. I think that since the protagonist of the time-travel is an ordinary person, even if he has experienced a lot, he still has a conscience in his heart, rather than a person who only kills everyone, and in the future This point should also be reflected in the article, so I wrote a plot involving a golden elixir female cultivator without explanation. I thought that most readers would understand that things should not be done to death, so I wrote it directly.
As a result, the names of kneeling women, saints, mothers, etc. were all posted, so I could only call him a good guy.
Now this book shouldn't be like this. It should be able to explain it clearly and make it interesting and not tiring for everyone. But unfortunately, after it was put on the shelf, it was interrupted by various things and I didn't have the time and energy to write it well. Many times, It was written in a bad state and in a hurry.
In fact, it feels like there are too many explanations. Another reason is that some content is missing. For example, Li Qiao has been practicing in the family for a long time, and he also communicates and gets familiar with other monks in the family normally. Some characters, events, and events are missing. some daily routine.
But as I said before, this book is based on a plot of more than three million words. The results are not good, so I don’t want to write that much. According to my feeling, the foreshadowing is not finished yet. Should I write more than one million words to write the foreshadowing? …
The real plot has not been developed. It is necessary to write some foreshadowing characters to show all kinds of cruelty and coldness in the world of immortality. It is necessary to write a refreshing article. If you write too much in the front, no matter how good the writing is in the back, there will be no one.
If 2,000 book friends had read the previous book, I would dare to cut off two-thirds of the explanation in this book. If I were to advance to the Golden Elixir, I could skip a few sentences. But the reality is that there are only three sentences in the previous book so far. More than a hundred people read it.
Actually, if you write like this, your grades won't be better, and you are making yourself uncomfortable, but there is a story in your heart, and it will be uncomfortable if you don't write it out.
In fact, the main reason why I asked for leave today is because I am in a bad state recently. I know how to write the next chapter, but there are fewer people reading it recently. I know that the recent plot is too bland, and I don’t want to be bland, but I can’t figure out how to write it. Think about it.
I don’t want to write the kind of book where you can know the general plot just by reading one paragraph, but this kind of book is really not easy to write.
The monthly subscription is only a few hundred yuan, and I want to add more updates, but the writing is really poor.
Finally, I would like to say that book friends who read Li Qiao's new exercises as drying chickens are truly talented.
