Ding, the school bell rang, Gu Xu seemed to be awake but not asleep, his mind was in a daze.
In a Chinese class, Shen Hanyang was talking about the monthly exam.
"Our class's Chinese scores were pretty good in this monthly exam! We also wrote an essay with a perfect score, which is also the only essay with a perfect score in this monthly exam. Guess who wrote it!"
Gu Xu listened without a word.
At this moment, Gu Xu's eyelids were fighting. This kind of thing must have nothing to do with him.
Normally at times like this, Shen Hanyang would deliberately tell the truth, and then everyone would praise him, and then Shen Hanyang would read out the composition himself.
Then, analyze why this composition is well written and where it is well written.
After doing this, more than ten minutes passed!
Gu Xu felt happy just thinking about it, and he just took the time to take another nap.
"Gu Xu!"
In a daze, Gu Xu heard Shen Hanyang say his name.
Oops!
Gu Xu's heart tightened because he was caught by Lao Shen while sleeping in class.
I haven't slept yet!
Did he notice that he was deserting?
When did Lao Shen's eyes become so poisonous!
Although Gu Xu was confused, he forced himself to wake up. He raised his head and looked at Shen Hanyang.
At this moment, the whole class looked at him.
Gu Xu was even more surprised.
He subconsciously looked at Lan Ruosi, who was looking at him with a smile, with deep appreciation in her eyes.
Gu Xu looked confused, what happened!
Zhang Song took a look and knew that Gu Xu probably didn't hear it.
He hurriedly said: "Gu Xu got the only perfect score in the whole grade. Shouldn't there be applause here?"
He applauded vigorously after he finished speaking.
Gu Xu suddenly raised his eyelids, no longer feeling sleepy.
What?
Did your composition rank first in the grade?
What did I write then?
Lan Ruosi looked at Gu Xu's confused look and was a little confused. Did he not wake up from class just now? So you didn't hear it?
Still, I have never won first place, so I can’t react!
Lan Ruosi smiled: "Gu Xu is great!"
After hearing Lan Ruosi's praise, Gu Xu believed that he really got full marks.
"Okay, let's analyze Gu Xu's composition now." Shen Hanyang was very pleased to see Gu Xu achieve such results.
He didn't expect that in just one month, Gu Xu's composition scores would improve so much.
His grades were not good before, probably because he was not paying attention. Now that he is in his senior year of high school and time is urgent, he is also anxious. If he pays attention, his grades will naturally improve.
Shen Hanyang finished reading Gu Xu's composition as usual and began to analyze: "The structure of his composition is a typical total score, which is what we often say, leopard head, pig belly and phoenix tail.
At the beginning, use parallelism to show the argument and the path of life.
Next, present the argument, and then use a large number of materials and metaphors to prove the point.
He wrote in the second paragraph that the glory of life does not lie in the starting point. Maybe you think you are just an inconspicuous dust, but when the wind comes, you can fly high as long as you seize the opportunity.
His argument is relatively novel and very meaningful.
Then, the third paragraph continues the argument.
The brilliance of life lies in your hard work. As the saying goes, God rewards diligence, and diligence can make up for weakness. The tortoise kept working hard and finally defeated the rabbit, making it possible.
The glory of life will not be covered up by your natural flaws. Some people may think that they are an ugly duckling and give up everything, but the ugly duckling will eventually turn into a white swan.
This is a typical example to demonstrate.
I won’t go into the examples of these arguments. You all heard them when you read them just now.
After the argument, the last paragraph is to highlight the topic, which is to sublimate the composition.
What he wrote in the last paragraph is that everyone has a different starting point and a different path in life, but you must seize the opportunity. When the opportunity doesn't come, you have to keep working hard, and when the opportunity comes, you will soar into the sky. However, even if the opportunity does not come, you should not be disappointed because of your shortcomings. If your heart is open to the sun, you will one day shine brightly in your life! "
Lan Ruosi listened, slowly tightening her hands, and sighed in her heart: Gu Xu's composition is really good! The feelings are sincere.
Ugly duckling…
Gu Xu, I know that you have been encouraging me, and I will never give up on myself.
I will definitely shine on the road of life.
Shen Hanyang said, his voice choked up: "His opening and ending are very good. However, there are flaws in it. Some examples of arguments in the middle, I personally feel that they are a little biased and not so perfect.
In the third paragraph of his argument, he also used the two examples of Phoenix Nirvana and Emergence of a Cocoon into a Butterfly. These two examples were used at the beginning of the article. They can be replaced by other examples, such as grinding an iron pestle into a needle. This will be better. "
Shen Hanyang said and looked at Gu Xu: "Gu Xu, did you hear that? Next time, use more material. This way, the composition will be better.
Also, he just selected a point, the glory of life. When we write, we can also use the contrast method to write, glory, frustration..."
"Yeah!" Gu Xu nodded, "Teacher, I can do it!"
"I have copied this essay, and the get out of class monitor will post it behind the blackboard so that everyone can take a look when they go down," Shen Hanyang said.
When Lan Ruosi heard this, a smile spread across her face, and she was even happier than she was getting perfect marks for her essay.
"I'll go!" Zhang Song couldn't help but sigh, "Gu Xu, buddy, you're done, now it's really soaring into the sky! Student Lan's composition hasn't even been posted."
Gu Xu was completely stunned. This was such sudden happiness. He wanted to say something, but his tongue was tied again.
What happened recently?
It always happens that I get tongue-tied.
Yang Wanli was disdainful: "I don't know which composition book I copied it from. The teacher didn't notice it. I was lucky enough to get first place, but I actually posted it at the back for the whole class to learn from. What a shame!"
Wang Xianchao felt unhappy: "Gu Xu's compositions have always been bad, hasn't he? Why did he suddenly write such a composition..."
He looked at his composition score, which was 45 points, and his heart felt cold.
The class ended quickly.
The monitor followed Shen Hanyang's instructions and posted Gu Xu's composition at the back of the classroom, where a group of people gathered around to look at it.
Lan Ruocha wanted to take a look, but felt that there were too many people and she didn't like to squeeze in.
She stood next to the seat and looked at Gu Xu.
Gu Xu also looked at her.
Gu Xu walked up to her. He wanted to say something, but before he could say anything, Lan Ruosi said: "Whole Universe, your essay has such good results this time. I'm really happy for you."
Gu Xu could tell that Lan Ruosi was really happy for him.
Wang Xianchao listened on the sidelines, feeling sad in his heart. Lan Ruosi called him the whole universe? His name is Lan Ruosi Little Porridge!
There must be something wrong with these two!
Zhang Song also walked to Lan Ruosi and Gu Xu.
"Gu Xu, have you seen that everyone is reading your composition? I am so crowded that I have no place to sit."
"Fat man, do you need to be so pretentious? get out of class is over now. In class, everyone has returned to their seats, so you have a place to sit."
Zhang Song sighed: "Gu Xu, I instantly knew why God gave Jia Dazui diarrhea!"
Gu Xu was surprised for a while: "Why?"
