The outline has been changed, the perfect chapter has been cut, and there should only be a sad dream.
There are about 600,000 words left after that, so try to finish it as smoothly as possible!
The next book is ready to be written perfectly. I am very grateful for your support along the way. Xiaoye would like to thank you for this!
It has been nearly a year since I wrote the book. There have been ups and downs and sadness, but in the end I was defeated by life!
When I was very angry at the beginning, I revised it seven or eight times from a bad beginning, and finally managed to improve it, but it was not amazing.
Perhaps it would be easiest to cut into 300,000 words, and it would be best to sum up experience.
Double opening is a wrong choice!
I used to like demons and immortals very much, and I also wanted to write a story that would make readers cry.
It’s a pity that a year ago, I was addicted to p-sites, fell in love with indescribable books, and started a harem. It’s been nearly a year now!
In fact, everyone can see it!
Zhe Tian fan and the harem are very incompatible!
The heavens and the harem in the new book are even more incompatible, so that the results are so few that it makes people laugh.
Poison No. 1, The Choice of the Divine Silkworm Princess, is written by Wen Qing.
The second poisonous point is that the choice of Taoist tools is wrong and should not be used in the Immortal Palace.
The third poisonous point is that the Ziwei chapter and the Beidou chapter are petty, the writing is too trivial, and there are too many originals.
After all, how many people who come here to watch fan fiction are willing to watch your original plot?
There are no saints in Ziwei in Chen Dong's original work. You said there are ten saints. The author disrespects the original work and deserves to be thrown into the street.
That book friend who scolded me at the beginning, you were right.
It’s basically just a fandom, and I have to try my best to write something original. So when it came to the Zi Wei chapter, many book friends said it looked like it was written by a different person, and the author ran away.
The plot after becoming a saint is better!
This was due to the criticism of a book friend, who said that he wanted to see how shameful this chaotic body was and had been playing with matryoshka dolls.
One word woke me up, and then I pushed Beidou horizontally, forever!
The writing from Hualongchi is okay. I read it 8 times. I can be considered an old bookworm and I know the good and bad of my writing.
Princess Shencan is considered a poisonous person, but the mistakes she made are already there and cannot be changed. She can only regret them.
The author is taciturn in real life and does not like to communicate with outsiders. The feedback from his family is mostly negative, so he often yearns for love!
But I still woke up in the end!
What is love? It is just a choice, and choice is similar to a transaction!
You are 1.77cm tall, handsome, cheerful, have a car and a house at home, so falling in love is naturally very simple. In Zhetian, you can be considered a purple chalcedony, a fairy material.
No one would use broken copper and iron to train Taoist soldiers!
The mortal world is a dream, and you and I are just people in the dream.
When I look at the orange-red clouds at dusk, I feel sad, my thoughts are far away, and I feel inexplicably uncomfortable. This kind of personality makes me feel silent. Sometimes the pressure comes like a tide, making me unable to stand upright.
Standing outside and looking at the 20-meter-high building, the sense of distance is daunting.
Yes, I was afraid of pain and deliberately didn’t dare to take that step!
Every bit of life is nothing more than this.
Even if I give all my income to my parents, I still won't be satisfied with them.
Even if I open both apps, endure nearly 10,000 updates per day, and spend only a few taels of money, I still can’t change my life.
Everything is illusory, and the housing prices are prohibitive and unimaginable.
The parents are constantly pressuring, hoping that their son, who is in college, will stand out.
Yes, get ahead and return home in glory!
Who wouldn’t like this kind of dream scene?
In the past, when Huaiyin returned to Chu, there were red chariots and big chariots, and military chariots and guards stood in front of them, with tall black pears and red bows and plain silk on their sides. They were so majestic that the villagers were shocked and envious.
I've dreamed of that image too.
However, reality is powerless. A house price can make people unable to stand up straight. It is even more difficult to change their lives. The world is chaotic. How many people can jump to their current position?
If you have a house and a month of four thousand, you can drink and get drunk!
Without a house, ten thousand a month is as much as a dog!
A few taels of broken silver can relieve people's sorrow!
The subscription ratio of Magic Jar should be regarded as the first level at the starting point, which is almost 70:1. That is, only one in sixty or seventy people subscribes.
With such results, there must be something wrong with what I wrote. I can’t blame anyone but myself.
For most people, this book is tasteless and a pity to discard. You can download the txt version after it is finished!
The beginning, early stage, and mid-term have collapsed!
Later, I wanted to write another 5 million words, but it was all in vain. The labor was too low compared to the reward. One book could drag me to death!
An elegy from the ancient Han Dynasty.
There is dew on the sage leaves, so why is it easy to get wet?
Lu Xi will fall again in the Ming Dynasty. When will people return after death?
When will a person return after death? Heaven and earth are nothing but cages, so what if they stop? But after decades of doing nothing, all you need to do is live a transparent life.
Faced with my parents’ earnest wishes, it seems I can’t do it!
I am willing to keep one thousand for myself every month and give all other income to them. I just ask that they don’t criticize me too much. It’s just an extravagant hope!
Many times I dream of dying and gaining eternal peace!
That kind of ending is very good, but I am afraid of the pain. I have thought of various ways to end it, but I can't do it.
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Is it the sadness in the chirping of cicadas in the misty summer?
Or it may be the sobs caused by sorrow and pain. The road is covered with darkness. Walking under the night glow, the dim star tide surges with heavy waves.
Waiting for the dawn, I am helpless on the road, carrying everything from yesterday, so I lose the light of tomorrow.
Countless realities turned into chains, and I carried them with me. Under such constraints, I seemed to see death not far away! That’s not bad!
This is a diary I wrote when I was in high school. Perhaps this kind of character has been developed a long time ago. My family is not a good one, but it is not a bad one either.
It's a coincidence!
From junior high school to senior year, the three girls I liked were all from single-parent families.
From this point of view, I do have some kind of psychological problem, and I am not a healthy and lively person...
I feel sad for a moment, so I speak!
All you have to do is laugh at it. This volume is not asking for collections, recommendations, or subscriptions or monthly passes.
I don’t like being miserable, and I’m not miserable either.
It’s just that I don’t like this world!
The outline has been cut, so let’s talk about the original content.
Su Yu was in the Great Sage Realm, sitting in the world of mortals. After breaking through the Imperial Pass, he fought in the Divine Court and traveled all the way to the Quasi-Emperor Fifth Heaven!
The turmoil breaks out on Chengxian Road, and a war begins. Ten gods come out together. The protagonist uses all his cards to barely compete. In the process of fighting against immortal weapons, the river of time is disrupted, and the dream lasts forever!
At the beginning of the perfect chapter, the protagonist will go with the spirit of the Sky-Swallowing Devil Jar and the Corpse of the Western Emperor to participate in the imperial battle in the ancient era!
At the same time, the bitter tears left by the skeleton transformed into a true phoenix girl in the Yin-Yang Cross Forbidden Zone help the protagonist to access the Taoist Fruit of the past life.
The King of Tribulation who was trapped in the Ultimate Ancient Land revived, received the Dao Fruit, and ascended to the realm of the Quasi-Immortal Emperor. He fought a bloody battle with Emperor Yu. After being besieged, he forcibly entered the realm of the Immortal Emperor.
In the end, there was a backlash, and the Immortal Emperor's body exploded, and a piece of missing jade given to him by the True Phoenix Girl flowed out, reversing this era and flowing into the future.
The ruthless person has obtained part of the Immortal Tribulation inheritance and has some understanding of the Tribulation King from the Immortal Ancient Era.
Queyu was supposed to fall towards Su Yu, but was intercepted by the ruthless man, who guessed that Su Yu was a similar flower!
In order to deduce reincarnation, she laid out a chess piece, which is the Sky-Swallowing Demon Cap!
This is the original outline!
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