"Wenku News: Congratulations to the author Yuanshi Tianwang, because your work "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" achieved the second place in the annual newcomer list in Wenyuan 312. Your work "Chu-Han Hegemony" will receive a first-level Page recommendation, and a third-level page recommendation, a reward of 10 million people's recommendation, the specific recommendation time will be given according to the order within 313 years, please make sure to update it."
"Wenku news: Congratulations to the author Yuanshi Tianwang, your work "Chu-Han Struggle" will receive a reward of tens of millions of people on January 24, 313. Please make sure to update it."
"A person who ranks second on the newcomer list actually gets so many rewards!" Liu Xu looked at the news from the backstage of the library with some surprise. He had no idea how many people Chairman Qian Chu had argued with because of him, and he had no idea what the meeting was about. Something happened.
At this time, Liu Xu didn't know how much trouble this millions of people would cause him.
Anyway, Liu Xu will update "Chu-Han Struggle" normally in the next few days, and the peak of the entire Great Qin Empire will slowly unfold under Liu Xu's writing.
Because the time from the unification of the world to the collapse of the empire was too short, only 14 years in total, it would be impossible to write a separate "General History of the Qin Dynasty" for him, so Liu Xu simply used Zhao Gao as the preliminary The protagonist of the book uses about 20 chapters to describe the various ruling measures of the Qin Empire while the emperor was still there.
Of course, it also describes various things that Zhao Gao encountered while serving the First Emperor, as well as some of his own personality traits, paving the way for Zhao Gao to modify the First Emperor's edict and usurp the power of the Qin Dynasty.
I must criticize Liu Xu here. Even if he copied a Romance of the Three Kingdoms and learned all the technical skills of this world's cool novels, he still doesn't know the essence of writing. The only thing is that the beginning must be interesting and exciting. , must make readers want to read on.
As a result, Liu Xu did not write much about various wonderful contradictions. The protagonist Zhao Gao had almost no other perspective except serving Qin Shihuang, so readers could only follow Zhao Gao's eyes to see how the emperor unified Weights and measures, how to unify writing, how to unify currency, how to burn folk books, kill warlocks, collect weapons from all over the world to cast 12 golden men, and build yourself a huge mausoleum and Afang Palace, as well as the Great Wall in the north to defend the Huns, etc. .
Anyway, the first twenty chapters describe these plots. Although they are relatively comprehensive, they completely show the social situation of the Qin Dynasty from the official perspective of the Qin Dynasty.
But the problem is that readers don't like reading these things at all. After Liu Xu finished writing the first chapter, someone started criticizing it directly in the group.
"I think the writing at the beginning of this chapter lacks appeal, especially the calendar. It cannot lead the whole work. If used as an introduction, it seems very wordy."
"I roughly understand what the author wants to write in this chapter, but this chapter really doesn't sound like it."
“Too watery”
"It's really boring. Is Zhao Gao the protagonist? Wasn't it Liu Bang who founded the Han Dynasty? Why should I write about Zhao Gao first!"
Criticisms like this are common in the group. Although Liu Xu's original intention is to use Zhao Gao's perspective to fully describe a powerful Qin Dynasty, and then let readers understand what such a huge empire is like. Collapsed in an instant.
He wrote this in his capacity as a historical scholar, ignoring the fundamental point of his writing. The Chu-Han Struggle is not like the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, where the original text can be copied, but the original text is also a constraint that prevents Liu Xu from writing freely.
But now when writing his own creations, Liu Xu could write completely according to his own temperament, so the first half was similar to the beginning of a history book, which was naturally very boring.
Therefore, even though more than 20 chapters of "The Conflict between Chu and Han" have been written, there are almost all kinds of criticisms among the readers. Although some old readers said that such content is actually very interesting to read and can better understand the author's settings. The whole world is more interesting than simply watching some pretentious plots.
But generally speaking, most of the comments are boring and uninteresting.
In addition, various contents described in the first 20 chapters have also been criticized and criticized by a large number of readers. Among them, the most severe ones were the unification of weights and measures, writing, and currency.
Because these contents took up nearly six chapters of the plot, this resulted in everyone in the group and in the comment area scolding Liu Xu for being a parallel importer. Let’s take a very classic reader’s speech as an example.
"I don't know if the author is sick, but he actually wants to waste so much ink and our time on things like currency, words, and weights and measures, but these things make me vomit."
"If these things are unified, they will be unified. If they are not unified, they will not be unified. What is there to write about? It is completely nonsense to say that these things can shape the entire unified country in the future. Even if these things are scattered, it has nothing to do with the unity of the country. Does it matter if it’s not unified?”
"Could it be that if everyone speaks different words and uses different currencies and weights and measures, it's impossible to become a unified country?"
"I don't understand, if Qin Shihuang is really as wise and great as the author writes, why he put so much effort into doing such a stupid thing! I don't know whether Emperor Qin is stupid or some rubbish author is too stupid ”
"Yes, there are still people who say that reality is unified. Yes, we are indeed unified in reality. But isn't this just for everyone's convenience and to gather everyone's reading power to be unified?"
"There is no such thing as a reflection of the world in China, so why do we have to unify these things? I think the author is sick, his brain is distracted, and he is self-righteous!"
Such comments have been recognized by many readers. Most people think that there is no need to unify these things, and there is no need to spend so much pen and ink writing. The content is very boring, and it is just used to enrich the plot.
Later, they wrote about another major policy of the First Emperor, which was the policy of building the Great Wall. They also said that this was a completely stupid decision made by the author of rubbish. Building the Great Wall was a completely idiotic idea, not to mention the actual construction of the Great Wall in an era without technology. How wasteful of manpower and material resources.
Of course, what is the use of saying that the Great Wall has been repaired?
The Great Wall is so long, and it is impossible to place thousands of troops on every section of the Great Wall. The Huns inside only need to break through one section of the Great Wall, and then they can march straight in.
This is just like when a city is defending against reflection creatures. As long as a section of the city wall is breached, a large number of reflection creatures will flow in directly. The walls in other places have no meaning at all.
Therefore, readers feel that this plot is too poisonous. The garbage author does not have enough brain capacity. He came up with the idea of building the Great Wall, which he thought was very awesome, and then forced Qin Shihuang to implement this stupid policy and let a Qin Dynasty do it. Pay for your own stupidity.
Some people think that the trash author couldn't figure out how to bring about the demise of the powerful Qin Dynasty, so he deliberately devised a way to build the Great Wall and used this plot to artificially weaken the power of the Qin Dynasty.
It completely shows the stupidity of the garbage author.
The only diagnosis plot that can be recognized by a large number of readers is the plot of burning books and trapping alchemists, because this plot overlaps very cleverly with the real world. It seems that what the library lineage did back then It was almost the same. Everyone said that the connotation was achieved and the insinuation was quite good, and then they gave Liu Xu a rare praise.
All in all, almost most readers think that "Chu-Han Struggle" is an extremely failed book at the beginning, especially the systems implemented when the Qin Dynasty was founded. They are all unbelievable and have no scientific basis. In addition to intensifying social conflicts Apart from this, there is no policy of any long-term significance and value.
Unless Qin Shihuang was reincarnated as a pig, it would have been impossible for him to come up with such a policy, so there is only one answer, and that is that the author of the garbage is a pig, and he forcibly instilled wisdom in Qin Shihuang.
And thanks to the setting of the garbage author, the Qin Dynasty was the most garbage dynasty in the entire Chinese world, and Qin Shihuang was also the most garbage emperor. Even Han Xian Emperor Liu Xie was better than him.
At least after Liu Xie succeeded to the throne, the Eastern Han Dynasty lasted for 53 years, but it was only 13 years after Qin Shihuang, the founding emperor, ascended the throne.
Qin Shihuang was the first emperor and the most rubbish emperor!
Liu Xu couldn't help but smile bitterly after reading these comments. If Liu Xu hadn't known that this was indeed what Qin Shihuang did, and that Qin Shihuang was indeed the emperor of the ages, he would have been unable to help but start revising it according to the readers' comments.
But Liu Xu also began to doubt whether he was really suitable for writing. The first one he wrote had such an outrageous start.
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