(Don’t click on it yet, there are 3,000 words left and I will finish it in the early morning. If you have clicked on it, please remember to refresh and read again)
"Uh-huh...Mr. Akechi..."
After crying a little sadly for a while, Yuanzi, who was lying on Xiaolan, looked at Gao Yuan with an aggrieved look. There were not many tears on his face, but he seemed to be disappointed by Gao Yuan's straightforward remarks. Feeling greatly shocked -
"At least...can you tell me where it's boring and let me use it as a reference?"
"Um……"
Looking at Yuanzi who was so persistent, it seemed that he was serious about his persistence in the script of this drama. Gao Yuan organized his language a little and roughly said:
"To put it simply, it is ordinary. An incident occurred at the beginning, the police arrived at the scene to investigate, and then found clues left at the scene and found evidence to name the murderer... Such a narrative is too ordinary for a short story... "
Saying this, Gao Yuan paused for a moment and said helplessly:
"Of course, the story is short and the plot is ordinary. This is not a major problem for reasoning, because the fun of reasoning lies in the final solution of the puzzle. As long as the final solution is interesting and exciting enough, then this is an excellent work. . But, as a drama..."
Speaking of this, Gao Yuan couldn't help but look at Xiao Ai beside him. He agreed with what Xiao Ai had just said and continued:
"What Xiao Ai just said is right. The beginning of the chapter is directly about the lengthy investigation and questioning plot. If it is performed like this, it will be too torture for the audience who usually do not watch similar works. This is not like reasoning. For a specialized audience, charity dramas must ultimately be oriented to various groups who come to watch..."
"Uh, uh...that, that..."
Hearing what Gao Yuan said, Yuanzi's shoulders kept shaking, as if he mustered up the courage to refute, but when the words came to his lips, he didn't know what to say——
"So, instead of writing this kind of mystery script, I think it's better to write some stories that are suitable for all ages! Fairy tales, comedies, etc. are all good choices!"
Finally, Gao Yuan suggested this.
Regarding this suggestion, Xiao Ai and Conan both nodded silently, feeling that it was very reasonable.
"But...but..."
But Yuanzi still seemed not to give up, and said a little aggrievedly:
"I just want to write a script like this! It's like a fairy tale or something, that would be too ordinary!"
Somewhat unreasonably, Yuanzi, who was leaning on Xiaolan, sat up and started to complain like a baby. Gao Yuan, Xiao Ai, Conan and others looked at them with helpless expressions——
"Yes, yes!"
However, Mitsuhiko supported Sonoko's statement:
"That kind of fairy tale that is not real at all is not interesting at all! Moreover, I think the script written by Sister Yuanzi is really quite real!"
"Right, right!"
When she heard that someone supported her idea, Yuanzi immediately became energetic. The sadness just now was suddenly thrown away from her mind, and she said seriously:
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