"Well, this paragraph is well written. This paragraph can be improved. This is a comedy story, and the style should be more playful." Xiang Nan reviewed Leng Qingqiu's manuscript and gave her his own suggestions.
Leng Qingqiu is currently writing "Marrying the Right Man in the Wrong Sedan" under his guidance. This was her first time writing a long novel, so she was inexperienced. She wrote slowly and the story was not vivid. In short, there are still many shortcomings.
Leng Qingqiu knew that Xiang Nan was talented and what she said must be on target and not deliberately suppress her enthusiasm, so she naturally accepted the opinions with an open mind.
She also wants to finish writing as soon as possible, earn more money, and let her mother live a better life.
"Yanxi, will this one really be popular?" Leng Qingqiu asked with concern while revising.
"Don't worry. With our relationship, will I harm you?" Xiang Nan said with a smile, "As long as you make some changes and add my recommendation, I believe the remuneration will be at least four yuan per thousand words."
"Four yuan for a thousand words?! That's pretty good." When Leng Qingqiu heard this, he was immediately happy.
If she writes 3,000 words a day, it will be 12 yuan, and 360 yuan a month. This kind of income is already quite good.
Xiang Nan nodded.
In the early years of the Republic of China, the monthly salary of university professors was only two to three hundred oceans. Three hundred and sixty yuan is definitely a high income.
…
Jin family.
After Jinpeng Zhenzhen withered, Wang Yufen was troubled. I couldn't help but tell my sister-in-law Wu Peifang about this matter.
Wu Peifang then told Jin Fengju about this matter. After hearing this, Jin Fengju felt huge emotions in his heart.
It turned out that he had also withered half a year ago.
But because Wu Peifang was pregnant, he naturally avoided sexual intercourse, and then secretly sought medical advice on his own, hoping to resolve this unspeakable secret.
Naturally, it had no effect, so he has been very distressed. For this reason, he did not even go to the alley. It's not because he doesn't have the will, but because he doesn't have the power.
Unexpectedly, Jin Pengzhen would also wither now, as if he had suffered retribution, which made Jin Fengju secretly wonder.
And seeing that Wu Peifang's child was about to be born, in half a year at most, he and Wu Peifang would be living as a couple again. By then, if it still doesn't work, he won't be able to hide it anymore.
By then, there will be a big mess. Therefore, he is even more anxious now.
…
"I heard from my cousin that the third brother has been taking medicine now, but it has no effect at all." Bai Xiuzhu said to Xiang Nan.
"Why do you women get together and dare to talk about anything?" Xiang Nan said speechlessly after hearing this.
What happened in the couple's room was actually revealed to the outside world. He really couldn't see through their minds. But this is not an exception. As far as he knows, many girls talk about everything to their best friends.
Especially for women who are married, the scale of chatting is so large that even men can't match it.
"She insists on telling me, so I have to listen." Bai Xiuzhu curled her lips and said, "She is my cousin after all. If you have troubles, who can you tell them to if you don't tell me."
"Then tell her, don't patch it up blindly. If it's patched up improperly, it will be worse than not patching it up at all." Xiang Nan curled his lips and said.
"Hey, the third brother regrets it so much now. I heard from my cousin that the third brother cried in his dreams last night. When he woke up, he confessed to her and cried until he had runny nose and tears.
She said that she regretted that she should not have acted nonsense in the first place, which made her a widow and made them die without a son. "Bai Xiuzhu added, "My cousin was crying too much, which made me very sad when I saw her. "
"Third brother, do you really know that you regret it?" Seeing her say this, Xiang Nan blinked and said.
"Yes." Bai Xiuzhu nodded, "But what's the use of regret? Who allowed him to be so reckless before. Oh my, I feel disgusted just thinking about it, actually with a man..."
"Okay, okay, if you know your mistakes and you can correct them, there is no greater good, so let's not talk about him behind his back." Xiang Nan waved his hand.
…
Turning around, when Xiang Nan saw his third brother Jin Pengzhen, he curled his fingers and Jin Pengzhen fell to the ground.
"Oh, Third Brother, why are you so careless?" Xiang Nan immediately stepped forward to help him, pulling him up with his left hand, and patting his waist with his right hand several times to dissolve the zhenqi that had entered his body.
It turns out that the reason why Jin Pengzhen couldn't do it was because Xiang Nan used the Wuxiang Jie Finger to inject a few qi into his body and seal several acupuncture points in his lower body, thus causing him to lose his virility as a man.
Now that Xiang Nan has released his true energy, he can naturally regain his glory. But if he goes back to his old ways, Xiang Nan will do it again and let him have a taste of being a eunuch.
"It's okay, it's okay, my legs were weak just now." Jin Peng stood up and said in frustration, "Old Qi, listen to the third brother's advice and stay at home with Xiuzhu and don't play around outside. Don't do anything for the sake of temporary happiness. My body is broken."
"Third brother, what do you mean?" Xiang Nan pretended to be confused and asked doubtfully.
"Forget it, forget it, in short, listen to the third brother." Old Jin Pengzhen blushed, shook his head in shame, and then hurried away.
Xiang Nan smiled slightly when he saw this.
If Jin Pengzhen has such an experience, it is not in vain for him to take action.
…
Two days later, Xiang Nan noticed that the third sister-in-law was back at the card table again, and her condition was back to the same as before, chattering, speaking sharply, and having a happy face.
Obviously, as soon as Jin Pengzhen returned to his true nature as a man and she was nourished again, her mood immediately changed. Xiang Nan was also happy for her.
After Jin Pengzhen recovered, Jin Fengju naturally received the news and immediately inquired about the secret recipe for recovery. If you want to try Jin Pengzhen, try it yourself.
Xiang Nan occasionally heard about this, but had no intention of helping him resolve it immediately.
Because my sister-in-law is still pregnant, she has stopped having sex a long time ago. Let him recover now, but it will be cheaper for the women in Bada Hutong. It's not too late to wait until my sister-in-law is past the lactation period to help him recover.
…
Nowadays, not only the Jin family is suffering from repeated troubles internally, but also the external situation is in turmoil.
The new party in the south is developing vigorously and has the intention of the Northern Expedition; students in Yanjing also frequently take to the streets and shout various revolutionary slogans...
Although Beiyang Zhengfu actively prepared for war externally and suppressed internally, it did not have any effect. On the contrary, it made the revolutionary movement intensify.
The senior officials of Zheng Mansion also had a headache. Jin Quan and Bai Xiongqi both had a few more gray hairs because of this.
What's even more troublesome is that Jin Runzhi participated in student activities. Although he was not arrested, it was still reported by newspapers, which made Jin Quandu very angry for a time.
"As the Prime Minister of the Cabinet, my daughter went to the streets and shouted slogans to overthrow me... It's really ridiculous." Jin Quan laughed angrily and said, "The people who oppose me are trying to find trouble. Now But okay, let’s keep providing bullets to people until you beat me to death and you’ll be content.”
(End of chapter)
