In yesterday’s questionnaire, Tongming received a lot of feedback. Although many book friends follow my current writing style, there are still some book friends who want me to make changes. I counted their suggestions and roughly divided them into the following points.
The first point is the issue of the proportion of harem and hegemony content. I believe you can see that I have recently increased the proportion of descriptions of the harem. The harem and hegemony content are close to one to one. This problem is mainly because I am a little greedy. Judging from the background data Look, the number of subscribers when I write about harem content is at least 20% more than when I write about hegemony.
In addition, in the book club group, everyone also reported that they like to read the description of the harem more than fighting for hegemony, so I thought that everyone likes to read it, and I can make money, so I will write more, but recently there are some Book friends have reported that there is too little content about the Battle for Hegemony, and I have reflected on this. I have indeed written too much about Harem in recent times, and I have not taken into account the sentiments of book friends who like to read about the Battle for Hegemony content.
While I deeply apologize for this, I also decided to optimize the content and change the content from the previous 50/50 to 7/3 for Hegemony and Harem. Specifically, I will write one chapter within three chapters!
Secondly, some book friends reported that the pacing is slow and the plot is a bit draggy. This does have this problem. The battle between Yunbin has laid so much groundwork, so it should really start as soon as possible. I will try to start Yunbin within three to five chapters. A copy of the game, I also received a good suggestion in the group yesterday about the Yunbin War.
Thirdly, some book friends also looked at the changes that little people suffered in the reforms recommended by Ye Mingsheng, so as to reflect the changes of the times through small things.
This is a very constructive suggestion, and I am very interested in it. If everyone does not object, I may try it in the next few chapters. I hope everyone can give positive feedback by then.
Everyone’s suggestions are roughly divided into the above three points. If you have any other ideas, please feel free to add them!
Finally, I want to say a few words from my heart. I have written five million words at Qidian. This book has also increased from the initial order of more than 40 to the level where I can work full time now. Maybe this is nothing to others. .
But it’s a huge improvement for me. My average subscription for the first book was only over 50, and for the second, it was over 300. Although this book is incomparable to others, I may be the one who subscribes to one chapter of others. It's been a month, but compared with my previous two movies, my current results have made some small improvements, which can give me an extra chicken leg and a bottle of happy water for lunch every day.
I really cherish my current achievements, but because of my past experience of struggling, I don’t have much confidence. This is why I need everyone’s feedback. I have written more than five million words. Although there has been a small improvement in my grades, I still have no confidence in my performance. I still have little understanding of the rhythms mentioned by the great masters, so sometimes I am still quite confused. So if you have any ideas, please leave a message. This is very important!
My goal for this book is to have four-digit subscriptions, and I hope everyone will witness this moment with me!
