Both chapters have been revised today

I read the comments and realized that I have always had a problem with my writing - I love to exaggerate the thrilling atmosphere.

As I said in the last chapter, the plot structure and framework are all prepared. I know the follow-up and the details are all assigned. I am confident in this aspect.

Then I read the comments again and discovered this problem. I love to exaggerate the thrilling atmosphere so much that the protagonist group seems disorganized.

A few small adjustments have been made without affecting the outline:

1. The part about setting fire to the building does not need to be too thrilling. As soon as the fire broke out, Magistrate Lu, the world gentry, and the real local snakes also came (for reasons I will explain later). Xue Bai’s plan did not have to be compromised at the beginning. Du Jin is in danger. It’s true that I wrote it down and rendered it out of habit. Modify it here.

2. Gao Chong just wanted to kill someone, but was stopped by a real local snake. This was the success of the protagonist group’s plan. It was also like this when it was conceived. However, because of my habit of exaggerating thrills, it was not reflected. It has been modified here.

3. There are only 6 veterans around Gao Chong, and he usually sends 2-3 people, and at most 3-4 people. I didn't emphasize this point originally, which made the protagonist's plan feel too risky. Here is a sentence for emphasis.

4. Wearing armor is the reason why Lao Liang and Jiang Hai have difficulty beating each other. Because armor is evidence of crime, they did not expect that the other party would use it so quickly. This point was not emphasized at first. Added a sentence to explain.

5. In the design, this fighting scene actually means that Xue Bai gets help from Ren Mulan and Li Twelve. Whether the fight takes place in the tunnel or in front of Xue Bai has no effect on the structure, but I habitually exaggerate the thrill. I've made some changes here to make Jiang Hai's injuries smaller.

6. Xue Bai’s plan must be explained later...

It's probably just the adjustments in these few places. I haven't even changed the chapters or paragraphs. This chapter probably lost a dozen paragraphs in total, and nothing else will be affected.

I have never been easily influenced by readers, and my last book also received a lot of criticism. I still wrote it according to my own ideas. In fact, I did not change the structure this time. But I have to admit, I just have the habit of over exaggerating the thrills.

I changed it a bit to make the implementation of the plan smoother and less risky. Without affecting the progress, I hope everyone has different perceptions.

I also hope that reducing the problem of over-rendering is my progress.

I haven't slept much these days, and my schedule is messed up again today. I should write 6,000 words tomorrow.

Finally, I wish everyone a happy mood~~