From the time when I was too accurate and the results were not as good as I wanted in the later stage, I actually felt a little lost, thinking about what I was missing. Then from the beginning, I downplayed the competition and wrote more about the plot and characters, but the results were still not very good, and then to the early stage of this book. The writing is also average. Although the average is now more than 5,000, the reading has been unstable before, so I didn’t stop thinking about it. It can be said that it was not until recently that I really figured it out and reported it to everyone.
One, a sense of inclusion.
The book that I feel most connected to is Krypton Gold Invincible. To be more precise, it should be from the Spurs era. At that time, the number of readers was stable at more than 5,000. This feature is actually both too accurate and not serious in the early period, but those two books are written Later on, it didn’t work because there was no sense of expectation due to the plot.
And this book, maybe because it is written in a non-serious way and because it is an attempt at history, the sense of expectation in the plot is always there, but it lacks a lot of sense of immersion, perspective, and character interaction, which means that the plot ability has improved. , but I lost what I was going to write. Fortunately, I have adjusted it back now, and the transformation of the protagonist's role in the new season is an opportunity.
Second, the water problem.
In fact, the daily life in the early stage of this book is okay. The interesting daily life is not considered bad. In fact, the real bad things should be some unnecessary games. Although I have paid attention to it, the few games in the second half of the 11-12 season are actually There is no need to go into details, just the two games against the Lakers and Thunder, this will definitely not happen again in the future.
These are probably the two problems that I have at the moment. From the time I wrote the article in my title, these two problems should have been improved. The quality should be much better. Reading is at least stable. Although it is a bit late, this It’s a bit difficult to surpass the invincible eight thousand in this book, but if you stabilize your level and get an interesting cheat in the next book, you can make new breakthroughs.
See you tomorrow for the new volume.
