I saw that some readers said that the plots in the last few chapters were not interesting. After thinking about it, I found that this problem does exist.
The two recent plots are both emotionally downward, resulting in no overall emotional uptick, which is cool.
Especially before, the protagonist relied on the halo of the protagonist to have a smooth journey and basically never suffered a loss. Is this the first time he has suffered a loss?
What I originally expected was that the protagonist might have a mentality of walking on thin ice at the beginning, but as he became stronger and stronger after building the foundation, this mentality has disappeared, and he is only a little cautious.
And he is cautious and cautious. At present, it is more about himself. He has not fully considered the people around him, thinking too deeply.
For example, the protagonist goes out to build a foundation, goes to Jiuxiao Immortal City, goes to Green River City, etc. These behaviors can be seen.
So I want to use such a plot to promote it again, so that he can change from being cautious to being serious, and use puppets, talisman soldiers, and talismans from personal weapons to the entire family.
At the same time, it is also a personal scene for other members of the family, which can play a certain role when the protagonist is not around.
As for resourcefulness and calculation, in my opinion, the protagonist's character and mentality are as they have always been. There is no strategizing or overall planning at all.
He can simply deal with some clever people rationally, but sometimes he can even be reckless and crude.
Such responsibilities as think tank, thug, housekeeper, admonisher, coordinator, mascot, and diplomat will be assigned to wives, Taoist companions, and children. The protagonist is just the core cohesive person.
Back to business.
So I'm asking for your opinions. If you think there is something wrong, I will make major changes.
I re-read the previous article and smoothed it out. If I modify it, I will continue to follow the previous tone. The time when the protagonist goes to Qingyun Sect will be moved back. During this time, the Sumeru tree will be planted.
Then this relatively difficult battle became easily resolved. The Sumeru tree brushed the two of them into the Sumeru space and imprisoned them in it.
