Chapter 80: Storm (9) has been completely rewritten and now has 10,000 words.

Finally finished writing this chapter, scattering flowers!

Storm (9) has been completely torn down and rewritten, sorry but please move on

To be precise, delete the first half (change the position);

Then I re-polished the second half, connected it to Chapter 79, and then continued writing.

After thinking about it, I feel that the new way of writing is emotionally smooth and correct - the chronological order may be slightly disrupted.

Because, first of all, the city was still on fire, and it wasn't a "particularly urgent" matter for Winters to scare the man in blackface.

Well, one moment he was intimidating the black-faced man and patting Pierre on the shoulder, and the next moment he was rushing to put out the fire. Although the time sequence was correct, the mood always felt wrong.

Secondly, I feel that Colonel Berne's writing in the original eighty chapters was not good. Colonel Berne is supposed to be a "patriot with a typical Monta character", and the original chapter 80 somewhat "deviates from Colonel Berne's personal style".

Finally, I still hope to finish the "Storm" part within ten chapters. therefore! The big chapter is inevitable! (hiding one's ears and stealing the bell)

(My consciousness has been a little blurry since I wrote it in the morning. In fact, I am not very satisfied with the ending of Chapter 80 at the moment, but I really can’t think of a better ending for the time being... I am confused...)

(I burst into tears and don’t know what to say, so please forgive me)