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A book is like a world, and this world is blessed with you.
Through this update, I also discovered my potential, so...well, you know.
I will update more in the future. I won’t be a small salted fish, but I will be big...
Let’s make a scene card, Heavenly Court, similar to the Great Sage’s Brain Heavenly Palace. It starts from the South Sky and ends at Lingxiao Palace. As for what other scenes there are in the middle, everyone is welcome to propose designs (please beg...)
Just keep it simple, make it something well-known and interesting.
I have looked at all the star cards everyone made, including the Evil Sword Fairy that the cuties made seriously last time. The design is very good, but Shen Yan’s writing is not good enough and he can’t grasp this character. I don’t know how to write it in battle. So I can only put it aside temporarily and save it to join other star card lineups.
Designing star cards is a headache, and designing competitions is even more troublesome, because in a limited chapter, several characters must be able to show off, leading to some famous scenes, and at the same time, knowing that they can win, and still It is very troublesome to write down the outcome of the game in such a mysterious way.
For example, when I was writing about Naruto... I actually had never watched Naruto at all, but I still bit the bullet and scanned all the relevant videos on station B, and then I bit the bullet and wrote it down.
Of course, if you ask yourself, that battle was poorly written, very draggy, very watery, and very unfriendly to friends who have never watched Naruto.
In fact, if you look carefully, at the end, I have made a little progress in writing. I feel that I am really not good at it, but sometimes I have to do some foreshadowing, otherwise I will not be happy after reading it...
You see, if I want water, Chonglou fights Qingshan, and I can fight for two chapters. But I can kill it instantly with one move, and Feipeng Xiyao fights Tiansheng. If I want water, I can write several chapters of this battle. , but I just went through it in one hundred words, worshiping the moon and beating the saint, I skipped it directly.
Because these are not important, it is not interesting to write, and it is not what readers want to read. I usually put the pen and ink in places that I find interesting or that can bring a sense of refreshment.
Since Naruto, I have always controlled the subsequent battles within a dozen chapters. A battle takes more than ten chapters. It sounds very watery, but don’t forget, dears, in other fantasy, it is 1v1 between the protagonist and the opponent, one move. One chapter, a dozen chapters for a battle.
And mine is 5v5... ten people fighting, not 1v1...
Competitions are very difficult to write about. Sometimes I stare at the screen for a whole day and don’t know how to write, because every time I try to write a new routine, new ideas, fun, passionate, touching, rather than just a routine. The cycle continues.
Although what I have done is not good enough, I will continue to work hard and strive to expand my imagination!
Waiting online for some suggestions on Tianting Card!
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