e, I originally thought that I would take a few days off before starting to code again. Later, I found that after updating my code every day, I was really a little restless, so I decided to code a little. Before I start talking, I hope you can enter. Check out the author's book club. I really want to communicate with you. The group number is included in the closing remarks of the first volume. If you post it here, maybe, um... you will understand.
Regarding this book, e, to be honest, it actually deviated slightly from the direction I originally envisioned, but fortunately, I finally found a more suitable direction for it, and I didn’t write it because I tried to force my head to turn around (since I think hhh, there must still be problems), I am really lacking in experience, and I still stepped on a lot of things that I would think were ridiculous when I look back.
To put it simply, I think the two biggest failures are: the first point is that the protagonist of the article has really poor internal drive. No matter how I describe him, I actually believe that many readers will feel this when reading my book. It's a bit "boring", eh, the protagonist seems to be dawdling around.
Yes, this is what I am not sure about. There is no pressure on the protagonist. This does not mean that there is no real crisis in the entire plot. After all, making the Outsider the protagonist is the same. It means that the protagonist is like His character who is not afraid of death and is extremely "real", coupled with his strength and "hang" in the plot, coupled with the kind of bystander Yu Yu who is a visitor from another world and doesn't care much except for his friends, will As a result, the plot looks very "light".
There is almost no pressure on the protagonist, especially in the fourth volume. Although the crisis is greater, it seems that the sense of oppression may not be as strong as some plot points in the first three volumes, such as the world devourer and the capture of the royal city. , right, still a little nervous hhhhh.
So this is really a failure. Even if I take the initiative to speed up the plot and speed up the progress of the plot, in fact, I can only say that it may not really have a very good effect. If I write the next book, I will definitely not give the protagonist such a Good treatment, please let me struggle to survive. I have already thought of the name of the first volume, it is called "Wild Dogs".
The second point is combat power. To be honest, I didn’t want to raise the combat power so high. How can I put it? Of course, this may be my own opinion, because I don’t really like people with too high combat power. , but as I write, I still feel a little out of control.
After the protagonist's special characteristics are gradually unblocked, he will indeed be very strong, but how can I put it, I personally hope that it can be handled better, instead of like now, including other existing battle scenes, which also appear slightly There is some confusion and convergence. Same thing. I will definitely change it in the next book. I won’t go out of my way to gain the protagonist’s combat power for something. Maybe for me, “Special Forces Strong Man” is the one that best fits my positioning, hahaha ?
Then let’s talk about something that I didn’t know was mentioned in the final remarks of any volume before, that is, the progress of the plot, that is, the protagonist’s degree of influence on the event, participation-influence-change-dominance, the order of the four volumes, too In the end, I found a character and position for the protagonist. I no longer deliberately created setbacks for him, but instead, since he has this ability, he should be so strong.
So starting from the beginning of the fourth volume, what the protagonist has shown is the characteristic of "I am strong", because he is really strong. This is the position I gave him. A person who stands in the torrent of the times can influence the entire river. The strong man who is going to really dominate some things hhhh, so in the fourth volume, this guy really has a "status"
Next, let’s talk about the character design of the protagonist. It seems that I haven’t talked about the characteristics of this guy in detail before.
Judging from the whole book, the characters who have more dramatic roles have changed. Their personalities, including some styles of dealing with people, have obvious changes in the plot of the whole book, such as the change of the heroine's personality. , from being weak at the beginning to becoming confident later, Edward's knot in his heart was untied, Ciel truly became reliable, and so on.
But the protagonist actually hasn’t changed from the beginning to the end. If you look closely, he is still the same at the beginning as he is at the end. At most, he has learned some lessons and changed his behavior slightly. But if you look closely, you will find that this The guy's essence is still the same, it hasn't changed at all.
In fact, this is one of my original intentions for writing this book. It has no messy ideas and is extremely simple.
What can a good guy do?
Well, the protagonist is like this. His mind is already mature at the beginning. His extremely simple logic is enough to keep him from being confused. Don't think too much, don't get entangled in some inexplicable things, and don't carry unnecessary burden.
This is him, an extremely "ordinary" existence. Whoever fucks him, he fucks. There is no chance of being criticized, and he never tries to solve problems by talking. "It depends on his mood." This is how he treats For responses to complex and philosophical questions, it depends on what you think at the time. There is always a general preference in your mind, so you can choose that way without hesitation.
Now it seems that although the plot has become a little looser, I still succeeded in seeing what I originally wanted to see. The protagonist did a pretty good job, but of course he is definitely not a great person.
The purpose of all his actions is "for himself", and he will not have the ambition to take responsibility for the world. The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. This kind of pursuit, he must frankly admit that he does not have it, but I think he is definitely pretending. He's a great "friend" character, well, a pretty nice guy.
And about the other things, there doesn’t seem to be much to talk about. Yes, yes, I am rather sorry about some of the settings in these books, because I found that the Western Fantasy template still restrains me. .
Some things really don’t seem to fit the style of Western Fantasy, so I really don’t dare to write about it. Even so, in the later stages, you should still be able to find that this Western Fantasy world just looks like the traditional Western Fantasy, but in fact Well, because of the void and the magic power, I have given the settings that I made up. Isn’t this an alien planet that looks like a Western fantasy, hhh, it is greatly affected by the telephoto.
It’s a pity that I didn’t write down some of the interesting things, but I don’t have to worry about them in the next book. Cyber Evil God. Hey, you can use all my messy settings and ideas casually. No one has set rules for the main body of Cyber Evil God. , Haha, I’m looking forward to it just thinking about it.
Then there are some foreshadowings and settings in the book. I slowly told them through the progress of the plot. What is magic, what is the void, what are the gods and realms, the battle of the abyss, and the old days. The great character, the source of the protagonist’s abilities, etc., there shouldn’t be any big things left out, right?
Hey, someone might say at this time, author, please tell me what the strange objects are. Then I can only say that I deliberately did not reveal some things, the nature of the strange objects in another continent.
It’s not that I’m lazy. Based on your understanding of me, I can come up with a reasonable setting in five minutes, but is it meaningful? I don't think it's big.
Just as I have given considerable ink to the scholars in this book, there is definitely a respect. The world needs some "mystery", some "unknown" and there are many things that need pioneers and scholars to explore. Understand that another continent, strange objects, starry sky, etc. are all things waiting to be explored by these scholars who I think can add the "great" prefix.
No one can understand all the unknowns, but someone has to explore, right? So please allow me not to compile the settings of "wonders" in this world such as the Ossuary, hehe.
Of course, if you have any unclear settings, just ask me in the comment area or something, and I’ll see some awesome guys explain it!
Then there is the next book. As mentioned at the end of the third volume, learn some lessons from this book. The theme is cybernetic god, single female protagonist. The protagonist's personality is essentially similar, but it will not be so hard, and the life will not be the same. It's so good. The pressure of life and death, the impending death and the involuntary oppression from the villains. The first volume of the new book "Wild Dogs" will be full of urgency. Get ready for the winter vacation, and then it will start after the vacation. It will take more than a month's rest. moon?
Finally, thank you for reading this. Really, without you book friends, it is really difficult for me to write here with a happy mood. Special thanks to several book friends, book friends 1669044170, Wang Bagui, youyou, Yi A lifetime is lost in one moment, under the July sky, the light is shattered and the dream is gone forever, the Super Saiyan...and so on.
Some of them may not have been thanked, but I skipped it as I am in the book club group. After all, we spend the whole day chatting together hahh, and some book friends really have short memory, but
I believe that I have read every good comment and every reply from you. I am really happy that you can read my book. Thank you for accompanying me all the way!
I’ll talk about the protagonist’s character card later, so I’ll update it when I have time!
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