Ah, I have written over 1.1 million words without realizing it, and the second volume has been completed. Two traditions of this book are still indispensable. One is the final speech at the end of each volume, and the other is the protagonist. Yeah, I’m going to finish my speech today, and I’ll give the protagonist’s attribute card tomorrow, and I’ll continue to update the third volume the day after tomorrow!
Still the same, let’s talk about the future planning direction of this book, and then talk about the opinions given to me by some readers, haha.
1*The second volume is largely written around several important characters in the book in Wangcheng. I still have some comments about them that I would like to give them. I will write them here first.
Wang Yu: Can never be called a great guy.
Aviya: a true genius across the ages.
Edward: A solid barrier to protect those behind you.
Charles: Playwright of Destiny.
Sieg: The crippled rebel.
Father Fang: A simple and noble powerful man.
Shugen: The steadfast Avenger.
I wonder if it fits your impressions of these characters? Hahaha, I have to admit that as a new author, I am actually pretty bad at character creation, and some aspects are definitely not written out.
If you make a mistake, you will be beaten, and if you are beaten, you must stand upright. I have to apologize to all readers here. I am sorry that I was not able to portray the image of each character well. I will try to improve the character of the characters in the next third volume. The writing is more vivid and the image can stand up better.
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2*About the male and female protagonists
Haha, in the second volume, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist was completely confirmed, and they also took the time to send out a lot of sweets. Although the most important thing is to advance the plot, I feel that the daily life between the male and female protagonists is occasionally interspersed with the main plot. It should be a little sweeter than some industrial saccharin, and it looks quite comfortable.
I said it in the closing remarks of the first volume. It is absolutely impossible for me to write a vase heroine, nor will I write a tool heroine. I think, in this regard, I have achieved it. Yes, between the male and female protagonists, no one becomes the vassal or burden of the other.
The two people who grew up together, in a sense, Aviya grew up faster. After all, she is a true genius among geniuses. Comrade Wang Yu, how can he and Ivy grow up together without relying on the special characteristics brought by time travel? Aviya is better, but the heroine doesn’t just like the hero in the first place, haha.
At the end of the second volume, there is no female protagonist, so the male protagonist really sends it, haha, beauty saves the hero, this is what I want to write.
The male protagonist is not so perfect. There are times when his cards are exhausted. When he is at the end of his rope, there are also times when he makes miscalculations and is targeted by large organizations. At this time, it depends on the female protagonist and some other companions. After all, Wang Yu is Guy, he really can’t be considered a person.
Then let’s talk about the weird powers of the protagonist, such as “ripples”, inner power and chariot. These are still the same as what I said before. Everything is special because of the specialness brought by the protagonist’s time travel. And I have already thought about it, so you can rest assured that the protagonist’s growth will not be randomly added or modified due to patches.
Just like the foreshadowing of the key, I have been doing some simple foreshadowing for the special character of the protagonist. If you look at some of the descriptions of the protagonist in the process of becoming stronger, you will find that he is indeed not that different from those in this world. Same.
After that, the protagonist's power will still maintain a relatively stable upward curve, not say it will skyrocket. Every second, he will become stronger bit by bit in the process of exploring the power system of this world and understanding his own specialness.
If we insist on defining Wang Yu's strength, it is only at the level of a high-level official knight. Without taking medicine, if he faces two or three high-level official knights or great knights alone, he will be beaten to death.
Of course, counting those messy things, his strength still needs to be improved, such as the Spellweaver's Book, alchemy firearms, potions, etc. As a book friend said, these external objects are also part of his strength. Well.
Wang Yu doesn't stick to any fixed things. He is a weapons master and a variety of martial arts. This is a machine gun. This is Wang Yu's style. He is an honest man. How can he blow up the opponent? This guy will do it.
3* A few questions about the writing of this book.
This was also brought up to me by some readers, and I think it makes sense. I also didn't do a very good job in this aspect, that is, in terms of settings, it was a bit long-winded.
When I wrote this book, I wanted to write a more "peculiar" and more complete world, so when I wrote it, I especially wanted to give a reasonable explanation to each power, such as the path of the mage and the path of the knight, so that Getting stronger and gaining strength in a reasonable way is a relatively comfortable thing for me.
Writing about "inner potential", writing about "secret energy", writing about "wonderful objects", these are some of the strange and novel things that I want to write about. They are the more interesting parts of this world that I want to write about.
When fighting, I don't like to write the kind of battle against waves. I think such battles don't look good. I prefer to write the kind of jojo style, with a little bit of wits, not just a pure comparison of combat power, but A battle that requires calculations against each other will look more interesting.
But according to some readers’ feedback, I didn’t grasp this degree well in some parts. When I wrote the settings and explained these powers, the readers seemed a little tired. I’m really sorry about this. I didn’t write what I wanted to write. The writing is good, but the level is still not good enough...
I think some settings are really unnecessary to write in such detail, right? I will try my best to optimize this part in the third volume. If necessary, I will still write it, because I still want to write this book. A more detailed world.
I will make the setting more simplified and less complicated, so as not to occupy the space of the plot, and make it more comfortable to read. After all, I have always hated the word count!
4*About Volume 3
The four-volume plan of this book has been planned before. The title of the second volume is "The Rising Storm", so it is about what happened in the royal city, as well as the relationship between the two kingdoms of Arestle and Seventan. The dog-eat-dog thing between the two countries is actually a microcosm of what is happening in the world. The entire continent is actually in chaos, as some things happen, haha.
The title of the third volume has been mentioned before, it is called "Wandering", which is a volume that corresponds to the title of the book, right? The protagonist has always been a person who hates politics and is too lazy to play any power struggle, so the end of the second volume , overturned the table without hesitation, and said to the Aleister royal family, "See you again!"
Therefore, the content of the third volume is quite clear. The male and female protagonists leave the stage of the Aleister Kingdom and go on adventures and wanderings throughout the world.
If the second volume limits the perspective of the first volume to more characters, elevating conflicts within families to conflicts between kingdoms and conflicts between more forces, then the third volume Volume is to pull the perspective from the kingdom to the level of the continent.
More things in this world will be written in this volume, such as the five major races, the dust-laden past stories, the Tree of Life, Sky Mechanical City, the Endless Sea, the Kingdom of Dragons, etc. This world has more fantasy. The part will be revealed through this volume and through the adventures of the male and female protagonists.
This will probably be a volume where the main plot is not so obvious. The plot of the second volume is the war between Alestle and Seventan, which is based on the layout of the Seventan that the protagonist encounters when he comes to the royal city. From the "Lady of the Night" to the end of the final war, the main plot of this volume has been completed.
The third volume will be about the protagonist's wandering adventures on the mainland. Corresponding to what Wang Yu said, the world is very big and strange. He wants to see everywhere, so this volume is mainly about the protagonist's " "Wandering" journey, maybe the main plot will not be as clear as in the second volume.
However, the third volume will not be a very loose volume. It only has a main line that leads all the way to the story at the end of the third volume. The stories may be a little complicated, but in fact they will all show the world at the same time. , bringing the plot onto the right track.
5*Stories I want to write
Regarding the fourth volume, I’d better keep the name of this volume secret for the time being, haha, after all, the mystery will be gone once it’s revealed.
Originally, the end of the second volume and the beginning of the third volume were going to be a very serious and heavy story, but I thought about it for a long time and decided to kill this story, which had actually been prepared for a long time and had foreshadowing. I changed it and put it at the back.
Because I don’t think it’s necessary. Why do we have to write heavy and cruel stories about the protagonists and heroines? I think it’s good to express the badness of this world in other ways. Besides, it’s just the male protagonist. Willpower, eating a knife, nothing will happen if you are in trouble, but it embarrasses the heroine and makes it uncomfortable to watch, so I changed this part of the story haha.
Then I wanted to write a story about a male protagonist who, in fact, as I said about him, could never be called a great guy.
You can't expect him to solve things like conflicts of consciousness and the unfairness of the world. After all, he doesn't have the ability or the sense of responsibility. The male protagonist is a being who will do anything malicious to him and the people he cares about. A macho man who beats people to pieces will not try to change the world. Let these be left to those great pioneers and noble people.
However, he can change some things, and he may have changed the established direction of some things unintentionally.
His smashing of the key indirectly changed the final outcome of the war. The birth of the Night Church, the emergence of the prayer communication network, and the change of the Night Blade, etc., when he was not thinking about doing anything, this guy really There is an impact, and it could be huge.
Haha, in short, this is the conclusion of the second volume. Thank you all for watching. Your comments and views are the source of motivation for my unremitting writing! Keep writing and present wonderful stories to you!
