Updates have been slow lately, but my writing load hasn't eased at all. The first seventeen chapters have been completely rewritten.
I modified Ai Ting's character design to make her closer to the goddess of green light. The character has become gentler, more rational, and more kind to others, and some behaviors that can easily lead to bad emotions in readers have been removed.
The poisonous points caused by Ai Ting's unpleasant personality in the early days should be gone.
Later, the content of Scarab Bank rescuing Xiao Han was also criticized a lot. Someone read it with a rather holy touch.
I personally think it's because Xiao Han's personality was not distinct enough in the early stages. So later I am planning to strengthen Xiao Han’s early shaping.
The first most powerful point may be the appearance of tension. I think the existence of such a hateful character is meaningful. The problem is that the plot of the wealthy princess Ai Ting reminds people of many bloody routines, and then she encountered great contempt.
In addition, Meng Fei's early experience in Zhangdao also gave people a lot of sad feelings.
I haven't figured out how to adjust this part yet. If you have any suggestions, you can also tell me.
I think the storyline after Zhangdao is okay, especially after Suzaku appears. Mainly because the more I write, I feel like my control over the plot has become more mature.
If there is anything you think is wrong, you can leave a message and let me know. I decided to build this book well.
Spend ten years sharpening your sword.
The Undertaker's Supernatural Records
