This is a crotch strip, a bit awkward, take a day off, or2.
First of all, I have to admit that there is a problem with the rhythm of my recent writing. I owe too much and I am in a hurry to write.
So the more I write, the bigger the problem becomes.
The last time there was a problem was with the Nu Jiao Gang plot.
Many readers had an unhappy reaction to the plot of The Angry Dragon Gang. Later I made adjustments to the chapters and details, plus added updates. So after the adjustments, the scores first dropped and then improved.
As a result, I had a baby at the beginning of last month, and I had my crotch strain for more than half a month. After I regained some energy, I thought about making up for it, but something went wrong in a hurry.
There is something wrong with falling into a cycle where a villain is too strong, the protagonist improves and counterattacks, then a stronger villain is introduced, and the protagonist cheats again.
Originally, according to the outline, the plot was written in this way, but conflicts would not occur so frequently. There should be a foreshadowing and then details.
Because the amount of updates is reduced, in order to avoid hydrology, it is natural to speed up the pace.
If the pace is too fast, it will not be good, but if it is too dry, the reading experience will not necessarily be very good for readers, and it will be very rough.
Recently, adjustments have been made. After the offshore volume is opened, the problems and lessons learned from the Nu Jiao Gang being coerced at all times in the early stage of the plot and the forced skipping of levels at the end will be learned.
The writing method before it is put on the shelf is the best for me.
The inland plot has reached its staged ending, so the protagonist has to get a lot of benefits before leaving. I can't stand it.
The volume will be adjusted when entering the open sea.
I remember that I said in my acceptance speech that this book is a straightforward article that maintains basic logic. However, in the middle section, too much emphasis is placed on logic, which leads to writing problems.
For the sake of logic, the protagonist cannot be allowed to skip levels without thinking, but when faced with an enemy that is too strong, he must find ways to cheat, and he has to endure in the middle, but this endurance is frustrating. After a long process, even if you get revenge, the feeling of satisfaction will not be high.
Because the system itself is in conflict with the logic, it is cheating, and the protagonist is forced to hibernate because the enemy is too strong, which is inherently problematic. The best way is actually not to write this, or to come up with a better way to resolve this contradiction.
There should be no forced conflict.
There are a few books I like to read the most - Mortals' Cultivation of Immortality, The Ultimate Demon, and The Martial Saints of the Ten Directions. They all deal with this aspect very well. Han Li is called Han Paopao. The first five or six hundred pictures are all running away, but they are very smooth.
Because my protagonist had too many concerns, he was forced to confront the enemy. The readers were tired from writing too much, and I felt unsatisfied myself. You should use the simulator to avoid some disasters to be truly stable.
My previous idea was to let the protagonist gain more benefits inland, and then go to the open sea to develop stably for more than ten years. When the "Qiantian Palace" opens, he can return and harvest a wave of crops there.
After that, he came out and retreated directly to break through the Martial God, killing wealthy families indiscriminately.
For this big climax, it’s okay to feel a little wronged in the middle. But with fewer updates and longer cycles, there are indeed problems.
Therefore, the best way now is to change the map (this is also the original plan of the outline)
The outer sea volume will not write anything about forced conflicts. Just become a boss and come back to kill indiscriminately.
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After asking the editor, there will be an introduction on the 17th of this month, so there will be thousands of updates starting from the 17th. Before that, keep updating to 6,000 words a day, and then save the manuscript.
In order to make the update seem more comprehensive, I’d better divide it into chapters first, so that it looks more comprehensive, otherwise there will be too many readers (crying)
I will keep up to date with the updates I owe on the 17th, and I should be able to basically pay them off.
I really want to visit the Wanding Club. Everyone, please wait for my update.
The third watch beast is about to recover after being backlashed by luck.
